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khushiiiii
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Kaash haqiqat bhi sapne jaisi khoobsurat hoti
yeh zindagi meri aur bhi khoobsurat hoti
jee leti main us ek pal mein zindagi saari
Ya khuda duniya meri tune yun todi na hoti
Aaj mere bhi saath hota mera humsafar
gar zindagi uspar meharban huyi hoti
Na hoti meri yun har raat viraan
Aankhon se meri ye bemausam barsaat na hoti
Mere dil ki duniya bhi hoti aaj abaad
Gar mere pyaar ki kasti yun mazdaar doobi na hoti
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2007, 12:11:46 PM » |
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Khushi ji soooo nice....
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2007, 12:17:31 PM » |
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thnx alot paani...............and pls call me khushi........
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2007, 12:27:01 PM » |
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bahot khoob Khusi........... aaj kal kya ho gaya. dard per dard likhe ja rahi ho........ :lol:
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2007, 01:21:33 PM » |
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wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob khushii!!
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2007, 08:08:58 AM » |
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Thnx Waheed & Pooja Ji..................
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2007, 08:28:40 AM » |
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Hmmm....Bahot khoob Sehzaadi...Carry On..
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2007, 08:31:26 AM » |
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Hmmm....Bahot khoob Sehzaadi...Carry On.. thnx bhambra ji............... |
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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2007, 09:24:51 AM » |
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oye pyaaliiiiii.....how r u.. kya ho gya....? je khushi ka dard hai ja dard ki khushi.....!!!!! bahut vadiya likheya hai kudiye......  |
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«Reply #9 on: March 19, 2007, 12:32:10 PM » |
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nice one kushi kuddiye!!! |
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2007, 11:17:16 AM » |
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oye pyaaliiiiii.....how r u.. kya ho gya....? je khushi ka dard hai ja dard ki khushi.....!!!!! bahut vadiya likheya hai kudiye...... hiiiiiii teachellllll dard mein khushi nahi hoti teachel............... bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaa |
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2007, 11:19:19 AM » |
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nice one kushi kuddiye!!! thnx Meena Ji........... |
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«Reply #12 on: March 20, 2007, 10:13:37 PM » |
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Kaash haqiqat bhi sapne jaisi khoobsurat hoti
yeh zindagi meri aur bhi khoobsurat hoti
jee leti main us ek pal mein zindagi saari
Ya khuda duniya meri tune yun todi na hoti
Aaj mere bhi saath hota mera humsafar
gar zindagi uspar meharban huyi hoti
Na hoti meri yun har raat viraan
Aankhon se meri ye bemausam barsaat na hoti
Mere dil ki duniya bhi hoti aaj abaad
Gar mere pyaar ki kasti yun mazdaar doobi na hoti
Very Nice Khushii.... |
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«Reply #13 on: March 21, 2007, 08:06:11 AM » |
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Thnx natural.................
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«Reply #14 on: March 31, 2007, 01:44:43 PM » |
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very nice KHUSHIII DARLING............bahut achhha..............keep writing.................
teri kashti ko par lagaane wo aayeega....
tere dard ko churake hansaane wo aayega...
tere sapno ko haqeeqat banaane wo aayega....
veeran zindagi ko sanwaarne wo aayega.....
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