Meri zindgi ka chehara kitabi raha......mann

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Meri zindgi ka chehara kitabi raha.
Uska andaz bhi kuchh nawabi raha.

Chhod jane ka paigham usne likha,
Aur uska khat bhi jawabi raha.

Har kadam par adayen dikhane laga,
Mujhse jab bhi mila wo ruwabi raha.

Aisa lagta tha ke jan lutayega wo,
Maine hasil kiya jo bhi khwobi raha.

Gin ke mushkane di khushiya bhi naam ki,
Usne jab bhi diya sab hisabi raha...

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2013, 10:55:37 AM »
Meri zindgi ka chehara kitabi raha.
Uska andaz bhi kuchh nawabi raha.

Chhod jane ka paigham usne likha,
Aur uska khat bhi jawabi raha.

Har kadam par adayen dikhane laga,
Mujhse jab bhi mila wo ruwabi raha.

Aisa lagta tha ke jan lutayega wo,
Maine hasil kiya jo bhi khwobi rahi.

Gin ke mushkane di khushiya bhi naam ki,
Usne jab bhi diya sab hisabi raha...

Mann
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2013, 11:05:18 AM »
waah maan sahab bohut khub
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2013, 11:32:44 AM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne....
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile


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Khuda hafez...Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2013, 11:55:44 AM »
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really beautiful mann jee
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2013, 02:24:00 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on January 12, 2013, 10:51:59 AM
Meri zindgi ka chehara kitabi raha.
Uska andaz bhi kuchh nawabi raha.

Chhod jane ka paigham usne likha,
Aur uska khat bhi jawabi raha.

Har kadam par adayen dikhane laga,
Mujhse jab bhi mila wo ruwabi raha.

Aisa lagta tha ke jan lutayega wo,
Maine hasil kiya jo bhi khwobi raha.

Gin ke mushkane di khushiya bhi naam ki,
Usne jab bhi diya sab hisabi raha...

Mann


Bhayeee khoob aur naye sher kahe hai tumne
Daad
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2013, 02:49:19 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on January 12, 2013, 10:51:59 AM
Meri zindgi ka chehara kitabi raha.
Uska andaz bhi kuchh nawabi raha.

Chhod jane ka paigham usne likha,
Aur uska khat bhi jawabi raha.

Har kadam par adayen dikhane laga,
Mujhse jab bhi mila wo ruwabi raha.

Aisa lagta tha ke jan lutayega wo,
Maine hasil kiya jo bhi khwobi raha.

Gin ke mushkane di khushiya bhi naam ki,
Usne jab bhi diya sab hisabi raha...

Mann

very nice Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2013, 04:15:00 PM »
waah ,.....bohat c daad,............
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2013, 04:55:58 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2013, 02:59:50 AM »
wah
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«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2013, 03:33:34 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saahillji
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«Reply #11 on: January 14, 2013, 03:36:06 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya parwaazji
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«Reply #12 on: January 14, 2013, 03:43:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya aqshji
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«Reply #13 on: January 14, 2013, 08:08:50 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #14 on: January 15, 2013, 03:23:05 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya janumanuji....

yun hi sath dete rahiyega....
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