Merri kahani...

by brokenbyluv on August 08, 2009, 06:11:56 PM
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Gum k dayre mein rehte rehte hum bhi ubane lage,
socha kisi raahi ka hath thaam le,
badi shiddat k baad koi aaya merri raho min,
mohabbat hui aur zindgi guzarne lagi unki baho mein..
per har baar ki tarah khushi mujhse door ho gayi...
aur merri ruh gam-e-judai ko majbur ho gayi......  tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2009, 01:24:41 PM »
Nice one...
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2009, 03:36:41 AM »
thnx angel ji..waise how r u now???
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2010, 06:39:20 PM »
Bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai geet ji... bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

milke bichhadna , bichhadke milna yahi jeewan ki reet hai,
jo zingadi bhar ka saath de jaaye wahi hota manmeet hai...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 08, 2009, 06:11:56 PM
Gum k dayre mein rehte rehte hum bhi ubane lage,
socha kisi raahi ka hath thaam le,
badi shiddat k baad koi aaya merri raho min,
mohabbat hui aur zindgi guzarne lagi unki baho mein..
per har baar ki tarah khushi mujhse door ho gayi...
aur merri ruh gam-e-judai ko majbur ho gayi......   tearyeyed
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2010, 09:43:03 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji,,aur bahut hi sach kaha hai apne..per aese manmeet asani se milte kahan hai...
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2010, 09:52:24 AM »
Bahut dard bhari kavita likhti hai aap geet ji.great creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2010, 10:04:38 AM »
shukriya madhu ji..
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2010, 10:24:23 AM »
shukriya kaash ji..
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2010, 01:07:22 PM »
Bilkul milte hain Geet ji.. bas kahin kam to kahin jyada waqt lag jaata hai...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 06, 2010, 09:43:03 AM
bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji,,aur bahut hi sach kaha hai apne..per aese manmeet asani se milte kahan hai...
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2010, 08:05:55 PM »
ji sahi kaha apne...intezaar har khuab ko poora kar deta hai...
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2010, 08:20:04 PM »
Bilkul poora hoga aapka har khwaab Geet ji...

raah tak rahen hain hum ishq ka aise yunhi,
kahin waqt kam laga kahin thoda jyada sahi,
aankhen bichhaye intzaar kar rahen hain pyaar ki,
jahaan itne din ruke hum kuch aur din bhi sahi...
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2010, 08:28:09 PM »
shukriya aur bahut umda ji...


Main raah taku tou tu hi merra musafir ho,
main chah karu tou tu hi merra haasil ho,
main khuabo mein hi agar dum tod du tou..
sirrf aur sirrf tu hi merra kaatil ho......
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2010, 05:03:39 AM »
 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2010, 09:37:29 AM »
Thankyou !
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2010, 09:40:49 AM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 08, 2009, 06:11:56 PM
Gum k dayre mein rehte rehte hum bhi ubane lage,
socha kisi raahi ka hath thaam le,
badi shiddat k baad koi aaya merri raho min,
mohabbat hui aur zindgi guzarne lagi unki baho mein..
per har baar ki tarah khushi mujhse door ho gayi...
aur merri ruh gam-e-judai ko majbur ho gayi......   tearyeyed

Good one Geet Ji
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