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by Naya_Daur on March 13, 2006, 06:19:23 PM
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #15 on: March 14, 2006, 06:31:58 PM »
Chaha da lakh magar humse
Muskaraya na gaya

Ek hi sawal tha woh bhi
Suljhaya na gaya

Chaha tha akash ko chuna humne
Dharti par bhi magar paer
Tikaya na gaya

Dil-e-viran ka kya karen
Humein koi bata de
Ek pal bhi jisse samjhaya na gaya

Sagar sa dard dil mein chipaya humne
Ek chota sa aanso humse
Chipaya na gaya

Tujh jaise kaise ban jaate hum
Hum se toh maut ka geet
Gaya na gaya

Banne hain tere nisha jo khamosh rahon pe
Us jaisa ek bhi nisha
Humse banaya na gaya...!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #16 on: March 14, 2006, 07:31:36 PM »
Wah kaya lines likhi hai bahoot khoob….
Sagar sa dard dil mein chipaya humne
Ek chota sa aanso humse
Chipaya na gaya

Kuch Likh rahi hu, shayad pasand ayye.....

Dil ki chahat hi hai jo Muskura deti hai
Kuch sawaal hai jo ajj bhi uljha deti hai

Ankho ke ashq ajj bhi kabhi kabhi dagga dety hai
Chupana lakh chahein, phir bhi bata dety hai

Dil-e-viran ko kahin bhi araam nahi atta
Ashaq bahty hai aor yandon ka silsilla hai chala atta

Kayun chale gaye wo, jahan se laut kar ayya na gaya
Kisi se kaya shikwa, jab Rub ko hi hum per taras khaya na gaya

Nishaniyan unki, ajj bhi anchal mai sanjoy baithy hai
Kis se kahein dil ki baat, kis kis baat per roye baithy hai!!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #17 on: March 14, 2006, 07:47:40 PM »
bhut khoob pooja,,

Zindagi tujhse har sans par samjhauta karoon,
Shaunk toh jinne ka hai mujhe,magar itna toh nahi
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Pooja
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«Reply #18 on: March 14, 2006, 08:46:41 PM »
wah do lione mai kaya kuch likh gayae app Jeet!!! bahoot khoob!!

Zindagi bhar jeene ki chah rahi, Tujhe chahne ke liye
warna is zindagi mai aor kaya rakha hai!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #19 on: March 14, 2006, 09:10:20 PM »
sukriya pooja,,

Zindagi humse tere yeh naaz uthaye nai jatte
Abb toh bus sans lene ki rasam adda kar rahein hain...!!!
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D K
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«Reply #20 on: March 14, 2006, 09:32:56 PM »
thnx everyone Usual Smile
main to bas seekh raha hoon abhi aap log jaisa likhna

Everyones work is just tooo gud Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #21 on: March 14, 2006, 10:17:47 PM »
sanso se hi attaki hai, tere anne ki umind
bas issi umind per to jiye jaaty hai!!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #22 on: March 14, 2006, 10:39:00 PM »
Pooja, Jeet, DK aur Gaurav

Bahut achcha likha hai aap logon ne !

keep it up !

Rajbir
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D K
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«Reply #23 on: March 14, 2006, 10:46:57 PM »
Nice Pooji Winking
thnx Paaji Usual Smile

Wo na aaye na unka paighaam aaya...
Kambakht sawan hi aaya aag lagane,

Unke intezaar mein raahein bhi thak gayi...
Dil ko samjhane ke liye aur kya laun bahane.
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Sonu
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«Reply #24 on: March 15, 2006, 03:35:25 AM »
ranjit.. pooja ji.. dk ji... gaurav.. wonderful...

sabhi dosto ney bahut acha likha hia...

aaj ki raat unse thee aakhiri mulaqaat
kabhi milenge toh poochenge aakhir kya
thee woh baat tumne.. humey bhulana chaaha
zindgi ko bol kar pagal humse duur jaana chaaha
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #25 on: March 15, 2006, 12:32:27 PM »
DK,POOJA,RAJBIR,SONU,, thanks for supporting


Jinse Umeed thi Kabhie zindagi ki
Woh maut ka aaj paigam de gaye
Jo Kabhie roka karte the Peene se
Aaj jate hue hathon mein Jaam de gaye...!!!
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roshni246
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«Reply #26 on: March 15, 2006, 12:42:39 PM »
Tamnnao Ki Mahefil To Har Koi Sazata He...
Magar Paata He Vahi..Jo Kismat Leke Aata He..
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #27 on: March 15, 2006, 03:17:30 PM »
Kinnara toh mill gaya magar,manzil doondh raha hoon,
kiss jagah abb chot khaoon,dil mein woh jagah doond raha hoon
Apnon se ab toh,dil bar gaya ,
Ab dard badaane ke liye ,koi baigana doond raha hoon...!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: March 15, 2006, 03:38:39 PM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
DK,POOJA,RAJBIR,SONU,, thanks for supporting


Jinse Umeed thi Kabhie zindagi ki
Woh maut ka aaj paigam de gaye
Jo Kabhie roka karte the Peene se
Aaj jate hue hathon mein Jaam de gaye...!!!


Thanks Jeet!! bahoot hi jabardast likha hai!!!

Unind khud se hoty hai
kisi aor se ab kaya shikayat
kabhi wafa mili to kabhi jafa
khud ki kismat, tujse ab kaya shikayat!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: March 15, 2006, 03:40:55 PM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Kinnara toh mill gaya magar,manzil doondh raha hoon,
kiss jagah abb chot khaoon,dil mein woh jagah doond raha hoon
Apnon se ab toh,dil bar gaya ,
Ab dard badaane ke liye ,koi baigana doond raha hoon...!!!


bahoot hi khoobsurat likha gai... last line to apne kamal ki likhi hai!!!

Manjilo ke liye, muje sagar mai utara usne
mai rahooga sung sung, her baar pichy se pukara usne
kab kis aor chal diya wo chor kar, sar-e-amm hume dharao mai
kis se kahein kab tak, kis tarah sath nibhaya usne!!!
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