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by Naya_Daur on March 13, 2006, 06:19:23 PM
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #30 on: March 15, 2006, 03:54:05 PM »
E-Dil tu abb dhardkna chor de ,
kisse ke intazaar mein
Yahan lakhon log ghayal hain,
Es Pyar ke naam se

Badle mein teri waffaon ke
Jo tujhe bekaraari de gaya
Us dildaar ki moorat abb aur na bassa
Apne zakhmi sansaar mein...!!!


Thnks Pooja!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #31 on: March 15, 2006, 04:20:18 PM »
Nice Jeet!!

Dil jakhmi, man bechain, nigahon mai intzaar hai
janati hu nahi ayega wo, phir bhi kayun ussi se payaar hai!!!
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«Reply #32 on: March 15, 2006, 04:23:31 PM »
bohot ache desire ji aur didi!!!!! liked it very much!

pyar ka samajh se koi nata nahin,
bas jaye ek bar dil me phir woh waha se jata nahin,
log bewafai karte honge bohot is dunyia me,
par kisi ko aisa doka dena hume to ata nahin!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #33 on: March 15, 2006, 04:26:20 PM »
wah, simple word, deep meaning, bahoot khoob  Meena!!

Dil diya jab, tabhi se aitbaar kiya
khud ko bhool kar, tujse payaar kiya
kahati rahi duniya, kisi ka na aitbaar kiya
per her baar wo hi dhoka, tune bar bar kiya!!!
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«Reply #34 on: March 15, 2006, 04:30:21 PM »
thank u didi apne bih bohot acha likha!!

duniya ka humne kabhi suna nahin,
bas humne to apne dil ki hi mani,
shayad isslyie hume doka dena asan hua,
aur humne bhi sikh liya apno se chote khani!
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«Reply #35 on: March 15, 2006, 04:32:53 PM »
wah kaya baat kahin hai...

chot wo hi de sakta hai, jise hum apna kahty hai
ankhon ko ansoo wo hi de sakta hai, jisko hum apna kahty hai
kayun humara hokar bhi, wo humara na hua
kayun usko mana kar rokna, is dil ko gawara na hua!!
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«Reply #36 on: March 15, 2006, 04:38:04 PM »
wah bohot ache didi!!

apnepan ka jo mila sila woh humne dekh liya,
aab to apnepan se bhi hume darr lagta hai,
anson pochne wale haath hi kanjar se marte hai,
pyar ka is duniya pe aab kam asar lagta hai!
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«Reply #37 on: March 15, 2006, 04:54:37 PM »
kya Dard barri shayri kar rahe ho aap dono,,MEENA ji n POOJA ji,, Itna achha toh nahi likhta,phr koshish hai ek

Jisse apna kahoon ,wohi dagga de jaata hai
Hath milane par kantoon ka ehsaas de jaata hai
woh aur honge,jo waffa ki baatein kartein hain
JEET ko toh uska saaya bhi,jaffa de jata hai...!!!
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«Reply #38 on: March 15, 2006, 04:59:07 PM »
shukriya desire ji aap bhi to bohot acha likhte ho!  :D
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #39 on: March 15, 2006, 05:07:23 PM »
yeh toh aap dono ko dekhar kuch words nikaal aayein,, I am glad u like it !!! lekin jo bhi hai,, aap se achha toh nahi ,, :wink:
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«Reply #40 on: March 15, 2006, 05:10:24 PM »
arre nahin aisi koi baat nahin, mai to bas ek koshish karti hoon warna meri aukat kya itne bade bade shayaro ke samne jo ke yaha pe aa kar likhte hai, aap sab ko pasand ata hai bas mere liye woh hi kafi hai!!  :D
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«Reply #41 on: March 15, 2006, 05:17:30 PM »
baki logo ka toh pata nahi,,maine jitni barr bhi aapko padha hai,, bhut accha lagga hai,, :D
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«Reply #42 on: March 15, 2006, 05:18:53 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya, padne ke liye aur sher pasand karne ke liye!!!  :D
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«Reply #43 on: March 15, 2006, 05:34:05 PM »
U r most welcome Meena Ji

Ek pal mein paraya karne wale,
Teri liye yeh akhein  neer bahaati hein

In suni suni rahon mein,
Har aahat tera ehsaas dilaati hai

Kuch toh baata wajja bewaffai ki
Abb yeh saanse mujhe satati hain

Jab bhi rauti han mere dil se lipat kar yaadein
Tab ansuon mein teri tasveer nazar aati hai...!!!
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«Reply #44 on: March 15, 2006, 05:45:06 PM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
kya Dard barri shayri kar rahe ho aap dono,,MEENA ji n POOJA ji,, Itna achha toh nahi likhta,phr koshish hai ek

Jisse apna kahoon ,wohi dagga de jaata hai
Hath milane par kantoon ka ehsaas de jaata hai
woh aur honge,jo waffa ki baatein kartein hain
JEET ko toh uska saaya bhi,jaffa de jata hai...!!!


Thanks Jeet!!! last line kamal ki likhi hai jeet!!! simple likhty ho magar bahoot gahra likhty ho!!

jo apna hoga wo hi to dagga dega
jiske liye ahsaas hoga wo hi to jakham dega
apna saya kab se pani mai bhigoti hu
ek mrigchika si hai zindagi, jisko khayalo mai jeety hu!!!
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