Mile unse ek kashmkash mein,

by thegrimreaper on August 13, 2009, 06:49:44 PM
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Mile unse ek kashmkash mein,
Taare bhi khamoshi se dekhte rahe...

Us pal ki khushi kaid karni chaahi,
Ussi khushi mein tere ek aks ka didaar dhundte rahe...

The GRIMREAPER
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2009, 06:56:52 PM »
wow nice lines GRIMREAPER ji!!
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2009, 06:57:59 PM »
shukriya pooja ji
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sbechain
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«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2009, 11:49:35 AM »
WAAAAAAAH BAHUT KHOOB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #4 on: August 14, 2009, 12:29:21 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob dost.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2009, 01:54:42 PM »
WAAAAAAAH BAHUT KHOOB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya sheba ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2009, 01:56:43 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob dost.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**

shukriya mann sahab
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angel4u
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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2009, 01:59:52 PM »
Beautiful!!!
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2009, 08:23:31 PM »
Beautiful!!!

shukriya Angel
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2009, 08:37:33 PM »
Mile unse ek kashmkash mein,
Taare bhi khamoshi se dekhte rahe...

Us pal ki khushi kaid karni chaahi,
Ussi khushi mein tere ek aks ka didaar dhundte rahe...

The GRIMREAPER

Bohot khoob Reaper Ji  icon_thumleft


Dhoondte Hain Chaand Main, Taaron Main Kabhi,
Tera Aks Nazar Aata Hai Bahaaron Main Kabhi,

Dard Tera Dil Main Liye Bhatke Sahra Sahra,
To Qaid Kar Liya Khud Ko, Deewaron Main Kabhi !!



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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2009, 08:38:43 PM »
nice lines Celmira!!
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #11 on: August 14, 2009, 10:30:42 PM »
Bohot khoob Reaper Ji  icon_thumleft


Dhoondte Hain Chaand Main, Taaron Main Kabhi,
Tera Aks Nazar Aata Hai Bahaaron Main Kabhi,

Dard Tera Dil Main Liye Bhatke Sahra Sahra,
To Qaid Kar Liya Khud Ko, Deewaron Main Kabhi !!

thanks and
just one word for your lines WOW
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aaina
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«Reply #12 on: August 15, 2009, 06:20:54 PM »
Mile unse ek kashmkash mein,
Taare bhi khamoshi se dekhte rahe...

Us pal ki khushi kaid karni chaahi,
Ussi khushi mein tere ek aks ka didaar dhundte rahe...

The GRIMREAPER

very nice reaper ji
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aaina
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«Reply #13 on: August 15, 2009, 06:21:55 PM »
Bohot khoob Reaper Ji  icon_thumleft


Dhoondte Hain Chaand Main, Taaron Main Kabhi,
Tera Aks Nazar Aata Hai Bahaaron Main Kabhi,

Dard Tera Dil Main Liye Bhatke Sahra Sahra,
To Qaid Kar Liya Khud Ko, Deewaron Main Kabhi !!





gazab lines talat, bhut khoob waah
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: August 15, 2009, 06:54:19 PM »
nice lines Celmira!!

Thanks Pooja

very nice reaper ji

Bohot shukriya Reaper Ji

gazab lines talat, bhut khoob waah

Thanks so much Aslam Ji
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