Mita Doonga______________Baadal

by baadal102 on November 04, 2009, 04:51:05 PM
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Khud se to kya dunia se tera naam mita doonga,
Bijli ki pahcaan BAADAL se hai ye sab ko bata doonga,

Nahi reh jaayegi aab koi baat tere mare beech mai,
Jo gumaan hai tujhe khud pe wo sab mita doonga,

Chamak thi jo tere husn ki salamat abhi tak,
Bhula tujh ko dil se wo tari chamak mita doonga,

Nahi reh jaayega aab tera ye wajood itraane ka,
Mita ke khud ko wo bijli ka itraana bhula doonga,

Saath chaha tha apna Dunia ke wajood tak,
Lakin wajood dunia se bijli ka hi mita doonga,

Bahut jalaya hoga tum.ne dunia ke gharo ko,
Ghar ko tumhare lakin aaj main jala doonga,

Tadap raha hai aaj jaise BAADAL bebas ho ke,
Tari aankho se bhi khun ke aanshu nikaal doonga,

Rehmat pe jab tak yakeen hai us KHUDA ki mujhe,
Mai tere saanso se saanse bhi nikal doonga,

Bahaye hai jitne bhi aanshu tari bewafai ke badle,
Tere khun ki har boond se unhe mai poonch doonga,

Khud se to kya dunia se tera naam mita doonga,
Jo gumaan hai tujhe khud pe wo sab mita doonga............




Baadal
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«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2009, 05:36:44 PM »
Waah......bahut bahut bahut bahut khooooooob Baadal ji.....
Baadal aur Bijli.....khoob kha aapne.....dard k sath sath gussa bhi zahir ho rha hai baadal ka aapki iss creation mein.....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2009, 05:39:25 PM »
wha   baadal bahi kia leka hy Applause Applause Applause hello2 hello2 hello2 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2009, 06:24:08 PM »
MA behud ahchcha hai

itni ranjish hai dil me to mita de mera wajood ae zaalim,
bijli baadal aakaash ko shikayat na tuhjse na muhjse phir rehpaigee~
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2009, 07:11:00 PM »
Wah-wah...kya jorrdar garjana hai Baadal ki.....
Bijli ko Bheegi Billi bol lalkaara hai Megh tune....
Aaj laga Baadal Garajte hain tou kaher ban baraste bhi hain kabhi-kabhi....                            Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: baadal102 on November 04, 2009, 04:51:05 PM
Khud se to kya dunia se tera naam mita doonga,
Bijli ki pahcaan BAADAL se hai ye sab ko bata doonga,

Nahi reh jaayegi aab koi baat tere mare beech mai,
Jo gumaan hai tujhe khud pe wo sab mita doonga,

Chamak thi jo tere husn ki salamat abhi tak,
Bhula tujh ko dil se wo tari chamak mita doonga,

Nahi reh jaayega aab tera ye wajood itraane ka,
Mita ke khud ko wo bijli ka itraana bhula doonga,

Saath chaha tha apna Dunia ke wajood tak,
Lakin wajood dunia se bijli ka hi mita doonga,

Bahut jalaya hoga tum.ne dunia ke gharo ko,
Ghar ko tumhare lakin aaj main jala doonga,

Tadap raha hai aaj jaise BAADAL bebas ho ke,
Tari aankho se bhi khun ke aanshu nikaal doonga,

Rehmat pe jab tak yakeen hai us KHUDA ki mujhe,
Mai tere saanso se saanse bhi nikal doonga,

Bahaye hai jitne bhi aanshu tari bewafai ke badle,
Tere khun ki har boond se unhe mai poonch doonga,

Khud se to kya dunia se tera naam mita doonga,
Jo gumaan hai tujhe khud pe wo sab mita doonga............




Baadal
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«Reply #5 on: November 05, 2009, 12:15:33 AM »
Wah Baadal ji,bahut bahut khoob,bahut dard hai aapke kavita mein,dil ko cheer ke rakh di.lovely creation.keep it up.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2009, 02:58:31 AM »
Quote from: baadal102 on November 04, 2009, 04:51:05 PM
Khud se to kya dunia se tera naam mita doonga,
Bijli ki pahcaan BAADAL se hai ye sab ko bata doonga,

Nahi reh jaayegi aab koi baat tere mare beech mai,
Jo gumaan hai tujhe khud pe wo sab mita doonga,

Chamak thi jo tere husn ki salamat abhi tak,
Bhula tujh ko dil se wo tari chamak mita doonga,

Nahi reh jaayega aab tera ye wajood itraane ka,
Mita ke khud ko wo bijli ka itraana bhula doonga,

Saath chaha tha apna Dunia ke wajood tak,
Lakin wajood dunia se bijli ka hi mita doonga,

Bahut jalaya hoga tum.ne dunia ke gharo ko,
Ghar ko tumhare lakin aaj main jala doonga,

Tadap raha hai aaj jaise BAADAL bebas ho ke,
Tari aankho se bhi khun ke aanshu nikaal doonga,

Rehmat pe jab tak yakeen hai us KHUDA ki mujhe,
Mai tere saanso se saanse bhi nikal doonga,

Bahaye hai jitne bhi aanshu tari bewafai ke badle,
Tere khun ki har boond se unhe mai poonch doonga,

Khud se to kya dunia se tera naam mita doonga,
Jo gumaan hai tujhe khud pe wo sab mita doonga............




Baadal

Babpre....  sad5 sad5 sad5 Itna kator se kyu likha my dear Baadal? Hope everything is normal and ok with you. Bahut hi umda likha hai. Her line pe aap apna dard ko bayan kiya hai. overall bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2009, 05:50:38 AM »
jis tareh se aap sabhi ne mari inn sabdo ko padh ke saraha hai waque mujhe iss baat ki umeed nahi thi, mai apne sabdo se aap sab ka sukria ada kar saku wo sabd nahi hai mare pass, koshish jaroor karunga aap ka tahe dil se sukria karne ka agar koi bhul ho jaaye to maaf kijiyega.


Quote from: Nikhaar on November 04, 2009, 05:36:44 PM
Waah......bahut bahut bahut bahut khooooooob Baadal ji.....
Baadal aur Bijli.....khoob kha aapne.....dard k sath sath gussa bhi zahir ho rha hai baadal ka aapki iss creation mein.....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

nikhaar ji mai aap ki baat se sehmat hu or iss mai gussa hai bhi bahut, well i am verry thankful to u ki aap ne isse padha or apna comment diya.

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on November 04, 2009, 06:24:08 PM
MA behud ahchcha hai

itni ranjish hai dil me to mita de mera wajood ae zaalim,
bijli baadal aakaash ko shikayat na tuhjse na muhjse phir rehpaigee~

Dharkan ji bahut khoob kaha aap ne bhi wah  Applause
Dharkan ji aap ka bahut bhaut sukria jo aap ne humare sabdo ke
saath apne bhi kuch sabd jode, umeed karta hu aap ko mare likhe har
sabd aage bhi pasand aayenge,

Quote from: Nazak_Pari on November 04, 2009, 05:39:25 PM
wha   baadal bahi kia leka hy Applause Applause Applause hello2 hello2 hello2 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

pari ji aap ka bahut bahut sukria, sirf ek isshara hai aap ke liye sukria ada karne ke liye samaj lena  tearyeyed

Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 04, 2009, 07:11:00 PM
Wah-wah...kya jorrdar garjana hai Baadal ki.....
Bijli ko Bheegi Billi bol lalkaara hai Megh tune....
Aaj laga Baadal Garajte hain tou kaher ban baraste bhi hain kabhi-kabhi....                            Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

aap ne bilkul sahi farmaya koyal ji ki jab baadal garajte hai to kaher ban bareste hai fir, Koyal ji mai aap ka tahe dil se sukergujaar hu jo aap ne mare sabdo ko padh ke un ki sarahna ki, thanx a lot koyal ji

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 05, 2009, 12:15:33 AM
Wah Baadal ji,bahut bahut khoob,bahut dard hai aapke kavita mein,dil ko cheer ke rakh di.lovely creation.keep it up.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Madhu ji pahle to mai aap ka sukria ada karna chahunga ki aap ne mare sabdo ko apna samay diya, rahi baat ki mare sabdo ne dil ko cheer ki rakh diya to mai apne ko khusnaseeb samajta hu ki kam se kam mari kalam mai wo sabd to hai jo dil ko bhi cheer de, madhu ji thanx a lot again.

Quote from: Roja on November 05, 2009, 02:58:31 AM
Babpre....  sad5 sad5 sad5 Itna kator se kyu likha my dear Baadal? Hope everything is normal and ok with you. Bahut hi umda likha hai. Her line pe aap apna dard ko bayan kiya hai. overall bahut khoob  Applause Applause

namaskaar roja ji, bahut bahut sukria jo aap ne hume padha or rahi kathor wali baat to kalam hai kabhi kabhi kathor bhi likh jaati hai Usual Smile & every thing is normal with me. Dard ko mahsoos karne ke liye bahut bahut sukria roja ji


once again thanx a lot all of u.
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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2009, 02:19:27 PM »
bahut hi umda peshkash hai aapki badal Ji bahut dard hai aapki in sabhi lino me aisa lagata hai ki jaise kisi ne aaapko chot pahuchai ho nice and excellent badal bhai Applause Applause
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baadal102
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«Reply #9 on: November 06, 2009, 09:40:46 AM »
bahut bahut sukria rishi ji Usual Smile
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: November 06, 2009, 10:03:08 AM »
Bahut hi umda likha hai App ne Baadal Ji
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: November 07, 2009, 10:13:01 AM »
tthanx a lot rajesh ji


Baadal
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«Reply #12 on: November 07, 2009, 01:14:08 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Baadal Bhai.. ek ek Lafz apna Dard Bayan kar raha hai dost.. Lajawab Alfaazon se Saji aapki yeh Rachna Dil Ko Chhoo gai.. Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause



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baadal102
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2009, 03:05:41 PM »
sukria janab Usual Smile bahut bahut sukria
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