mitaata gaya naseeb, haatho ki lakeer banaate banaate... Intezar !

by Intezar on January 29, 2011, 03:13:38 AM
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de gaya hai aisa dard, wo bichhad kar jaate jaate
kat gayi ik umra uski yaad me aansu bahaate bahaate

yaad nahi kab dekha tha use apni aahon ke ru ba ru
nahi aata wo kareeb, thak gaya faasle mitaate mitaate

kitni raatein gujaari teri raah me jaagti aankhon se
rooth gayi hai neend palko par khwab sajaate sajaate

ek tasveer reh gayi in ankhon me, sukoon wo le gaya
Jala gaya wo dil, aankhon ki pyaas bujhaate bujhaate

Pal bhar ki baat thi uska mujhe thukra kar jaana lekin
Lagi hai ik umra uska zikra duniya se bataate bataate

hai ab to andhera bas in raahon mein uske bagair
bujh gaya chiraag, uski yaadon ki lau jalaate jalaate

bas kuch aisi kee taamir teri, us khuda ne 'Intezar'
Mitaata gaya naseeb, haatho ki lakeer banaate banaate… !


Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2011, 03:22:41 AM »
Wah bahut hi dard aur khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki Intezar ji.mindblowing creation.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2011, 05:57:28 AM »
wah bahut khubb Intezaar dost.
kamaal ka likhte ho yar.
bahut khubsurat nagma.
khus raho mere bhai
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2011, 06:47:22 AM »
Good intezaar ji !@!!!!!!!!! achha laga padh ke
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2011, 08:49:20 AM »
kya kahne aapki is rachna ke intezaar ji.....
eisa laga apne hi dil ka haal padh rahi hu.....
4th one is just mindblowing....
bht bht khoob.....
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2011, 01:46:48 PM »
Maine yeh nazm dil se parri aur dil tak ponchi..
bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob mere dost..
kya baat hai..behad dard bhara..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2011, 02:08:02 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kya Kahoon Dost Iss Kalaam Ki tarrf mein..

Bahuttttttttt bahutttttttt Khoob!!!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2011, 03:22:14 PM »
Bahut Khub Intezar JI
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2011, 03:35:41 PM »
intjaar ji.....

apko padna apne aap me acheivement he......is se jayda aur kuch nahi kah sakta.....behtareen........
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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2011, 07:23:47 AM »
shukriya aap sabhi ka i will reply personaly one by one right now i m out of station so please dont mind

aap logo ka bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2011, 03:33:14 PM »
Bahut khoob intezar ji..
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2011, 01:07:53 PM »
Quote from: Intezar on January 29, 2011, 03:13:38 AM


de gaya hai aisa dard, wo bichhad kar jaate jaate
kat gayi ik umra uski yaad me aansu bahaate bahaate

yaad nahi kab dekha tha use apni aahon ke ru ba ru
nahi aata wo kareeb, thak gaya faasle mitaate mitaate

kitni raatein gujaari teri raah me jaagti aankhon se
rooth gayi hai neend palko par khwab sajaate sajaate

ek tasveer reh gayi in ankhon me, sukoon wo le gaya
Jala gaya wo dil, aankhon ki pyaas bujhaate bujhaate

Pal bhar ki baat thi uska mujhe thukra kar jaana lekin
Lagi hai ik umra uska zikra duniya se bataate bataate

hai ab to andhera bas in raahon mein uske bagair
bujh gaya chiraag, uski yaadon ki lau jalaate jalaate

bas kuch aisi kee taamir teri, us khuda ne 'Intezar'
Mitaata gaya naseeb, haatho ki lakeer banaate banaate… !


Shukriya
Intezar !



bahut hi aalaa kism ki gazal pesh kia intezar sahab bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2011, 01:15:18 PM »
Mast Gazal hai aapki Intezaar ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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