mohabbat fareb thi ~~~~'SAAHIL"

by salil2002 on April 04, 2012, 07:23:57 PM
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Haan Woh Ab Bhi Mera Intzaar Karti Toh Hogi
bhoole se sahi, magar yaad karti Toh Hogi

jis ped par kurede thay humne apne naam
oos ka thoda khayal rakhti Toh Hogi

khaton ko toh mere oosne shayad jala diya hoga
magar mere chand alfaaz jehan mein apne rakhti Toh Hogi

mein bhi toh bhoola nahi ooska woh masoom sa chehra
aaj bhi gusse mein ooske chehre pe laali phabti Toh Hogi

lagta hai jaise kii uski nazar mere aas paas hi hai
mere andheron mein roshni kii kami oose lagti Toh Hogi

sabka kehna tha kii uski mohabbat fareb thi 'SAAHIL"
main kya kahoon, jhoothi sahi magar mohabbat karti Toh Hogi
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2012, 07:29:12 PM »
jaan le ji janab aapne apne is shayari se..... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... maza aa gaya padh ke.... !!!

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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2012, 01:56:21 AM »
bht khoob janaab
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2012, 02:17:07 AM »
bahut sunder saahil ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2012, 02:52:08 AM »
Bahut accha saahill sahab
khush rahen.
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2012, 02:58:33 AM »
Goooooooooood
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2012, 07:45:45 AM »
Haan Woh Ab Bhi Mera Intzaar Karti Toh Hogi
bhoole se sahi, magar yaad karti Toh Hogi

jis ped par kurede thay humne apne naam
oos ka thoda khayal rakhti Toh Hogi

khaton ko toh mere oosne shayad jala diya hoga
magar mere chand alfaaz jehan mein apne rakhti Toh Hogi

mein bhi toh bhoola ooska woh masoom sa chehra
aaj bhi gusse mein ooske chehre pe laali phabti Toh Hogi

lagta hai jaise kii uski nazar mere aas paas hi hai
mere andheron mein roshni kii kami oose lagti Toh Hogi

sabka kehna tha kii uski mohabbat fareb thi 'SAAHIL"
main kya kahoon, jhoothi sahi magar mohabbat karti Toh Hogi

Bahut Bahut Khooob Saahil ji

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2012, 08:31:36 AM »
nice !
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2012, 10:25:30 AM »
bahut khoob...sahil....bahut badiya..
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2012, 10:54:59 AM »
wah wah...bohat khoob salil Winking
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«Reply #10 on: April 05, 2012, 06:00:56 PM »
bahut bahut khoob... Usual Smile

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«Reply #11 on: April 05, 2012, 07:26:13 PM »
Haan Woh Ab Bhi Mera Intzaar Karti Toh Hogi
bhoole se sahi, magar yaad karti Toh Hogi

jis ped par kurede thay humne apne naam
oos ka thoda khayal rakhti Toh Hogi

khaton ko toh mere oosne shayad jala diya hoga
magar mere chand alfaaz jehan mein apne rakhti Toh Hogi

mein bhi toh bhoola ooska woh masoom sa chehra
aaj bhi gusse mein ooske chehre pe laali phabti Toh Hogi

lagta hai jaise kii uski nazar mere aas paas hi hai
mere andheron mein roshni kii kami oose lagti Toh Hogi

sabka kehna tha kii uski mohabbat fareb thi 'SAAHIL"
main kya kahoon, jhoothi sahi magar mohabbat karti Toh Hogi

bahut khoob........! acha confidence hai apne mehboob pe. ..!!

     
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2012, 12:18:49 AM »
Thanks everyone, is good to see comments from my new frnds, and some very old good frnds.
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2012, 10:42:29 AM »
Thanks Shihab Saaheb
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