-----/// Mohabbat ///----- Hriday

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yeh  ilzaam   naa   lagaao  ki  maine  tum   se  mohabbat  nahi  ki
aur  baat  hai  ki   tumne    kabhi    samajhne    ki  koshish nahi ki
dekhaa  tumne  bas  un zamkhon ko  jo  maine  diye  hain tumhe
magar  kabhi  mere  gehre  zakhmon  ki  tumne  parwaah  nahi ki

jaante  the   naa   tum   ki  main  tum  bin  jee  saktaa nahi thaa
jaante  the  naa  main   tum   bin   muskuraa   saktaa  nahi thaa
tum  ban  ke  meraa  sab kuch  mujhe  hi badbaad  kar chale the
jaante  the  naa  tum  ki tumse judaa sambhal  saktaa nahi thaa

chhaalen  tumne  dekh liye  apne  dil ke, woh ginwaa liye mujhse
magar  jo  chingaariyaan  jali  thi  is  dil  mein  dekhaa nahi kabhi
gaye tum chhod ke  meraa  sab kuch, tabaah mujhe karke us roz
kyaa  huwaa  anjaam  meraa  palat kar tumne dekhaa nahi kabhi

shaayad tum samajh hi naa paao kabhi ki kyaa  ho  mere liye tum
magar  yeh  saansen  meri  jaanti hain  tumhaari kitni zarurat hai
khoon  kaa  har qatraa  jism  mein kehtaa hai tumne bhulaa dun
magar yeh dil  aaj  bhi kehtaa hai ki mujhe tum se mohabbat hai



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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2013, 03:57:50 AM »
awesome waaaaah waaaah waaah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2013, 04:29:27 AM »
Mind blowing creation.
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2013, 09:31:40 AM »
lajavab, dhero daad Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2013, 11:29:42 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2013, 02:22:22 PM »
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waah bahut khoob hriday jee..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2013, 02:23:35 PM »
badhiya kapil bhaiii badhaai
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2013, 03:42:55 PM »
bahut khoob....kya baat hai...
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2013, 04:48:32 PM »
Very Passionate, Specially the last Para
"shaayad tum samajh hi naa paao kabhi ki kyaa  ho  mere liye tum
magar  yeh  saansen  meri  jaanti hain  tumhaari kitni zarurat hai
khoon  kaa  har qatraa  jism  mein kehtaa hai tumne bhulaa dun
magar yeh dil  aaj  bhi kehtaa hai ki mujhe tum se mohabbat hai"

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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2013, 05:59:00 PM »
waah kapil ji.. dil bhar aaya padhte padhte.. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne..

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«Reply #10 on: August 24, 2013, 07:13:38 PM »
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Ufffffffff hriday ji dil se nikli seedhe aur dil tak pahonch gayi.. bahut hi achche ehsaas.. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho..
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2013, 07:15:32 PM »
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 Hriday ji bahut khoob likha hai.....daaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2013, 11:53:38 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Iqtedar ji.....!!!

Quote from: Iqtedar on August 24, 2013, 03:57:50 AM
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2013, 11:54:19 PM »
thank u sooo much Ravi ji....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2013, 11:54:53 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Nandbahu ji.....!!!

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