-----/// Mohabbat karke main mar gayaa /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 08, 2012, 03:31:35 PM
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mere apno ne mujhe samjhaayaa khoob ki pyaar na karna, par main kar gayaa,
kisi qaatil ki qaatilanaa adaaon ko dekhke uspe jaane kyun main mar gayaa,

safar kathin hai chaahat ka jaan kar bhi us raah se hoke main guzar gayaa,
talaash me zindagi ke khushiyon ki qatl apne hi armaano ka main kar gayaa,

nasheeli aankhen, shabnami honth, reshmi zulfen, inhe dekh main mar gayaa,
jaane kyun kisi bewafa ke husn ko dekh usse wafaa ki umeed main kar gayaa,

dekha ek nazar jise, wo pehli nazar me hi jaane kyun is dil me utar gayaa,
mehboob kahaa tha maine jise kabhi, wo khud ko mera maanne se mukar gayaa,

ab kehta hoon sabse, mohabbat buri balaa hai, naa karna jo main kar gayaa,
banaanaa tha aashiyaanaa chaahat ka, par tutke tinko me main bikhar gayaa,

chaah ke kisi ko sheese jaise dil pe chot kisi paththar se main kar gayaa,
paanaa chahta tha zindagi, par karke mohabbat khud ba khud main mar gayaa...


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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2012, 03:47:21 PM »
Wah Wah Hriday Jee! Tute dil ka dard bohat khub bayan kiya hai aap ne! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2012, 04:15:33 PM »
bahut khoob  crybaby2
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2012, 04:38:48 PM »
Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hriday jee
mast likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause

ek nasha sa chaa gaya dilo-dimaaga par
yun lagta hai muhabbat hai poore shawaab par
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2012, 05:53:23 PM »
boht khoob hriday g... lakhon daad
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2012, 06:03:42 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 08, 2012, 03:31:35 PM


mere apno ne mujhe samjhaayaa khoob ki pyaar na karna, par main kar gayaa,
kisi qaatil ki qaatilanaa adaaon ko dekhke uspe jaane kyun main mar gayaa,

safar kathin hai chaahat ka jaan kar bhi us raah se hoke main guzar gayaa,
talaash me zindagi ke khushiyon ki qatl apne hi armaano ka main kar gayaa,

nasheeli aankhen, shabnami honth, reshmi zulfen, inhe dekh main mar gayaa,
jaane kyun kisi bewafa ke husn ko dekh usse wafaa ki umeed main kar gayaa,

dekha ek nazar jise, wo pehli nazar me hi jaane kyun is dil me utar gayaa,
mehboob kahaa tha maine jise kabhi, wo khud ko mera maanne se mukar gayaa,

ab kehta hoon sabse, mohabbat buri balaa hai, naa karna jo main kar gayaa,
banaanaa tha aashiyaanaa chaahat ka, par tutke tinko me main bikhar gayaa,

chaah ke kisi ko sheese jaise dil pe chot kisi paththar se main kar gayaa,
paanaa chahta tha zindagi, par karke mohabbat khud ba khud main mar gayaa...


*****HRIDAY*****

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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2012, 06:11:55 PM »
very good riday jee
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2012, 02:32:32 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob Hriday ji dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2012, 07:03:50 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB HRIDAY JEE.
 DARD BHARI KHOOBOORAT PESHKASH.
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«Reply #9 on: June 19, 2012, 12:08:42 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Shireen ji... aapne meri is koshish ko waqt diya , padha aur pasand kiyaa jiske liyte main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon....thank u sooooo much....!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on June 08, 2012, 03:47:21 PM
Wah Wah Hriday Jee! Tute dil ka dard bohat khub bayan kiya hai aap ne! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 19, 2012, 12:14:51 PM »
boht khub hridhay ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2012, 06:41:15 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Jazbaat ji....!!!

Quote from: jazbaat on June 08, 2012, 04:15:33 PM
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2012, 03:16:43 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji....!!!


Quote from: mkv on June 08, 2012, 04:38:48 PM
Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hriday jee
mast likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause

ek nasha sa chaa gaya dilo-dimaaga par
yun lagta hai muhabbat hai poore shawaab par
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2012, 06:28:22 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Roy ji....!!!

Quote from: roy on June 08, 2012, 05:53:23 PM
boht khoob hriday g... lakhon daad
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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2012, 01:31:10 PM »
thanks a lot K_A ji....!!!

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 08, 2012, 06:03:42 PM
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