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«Reply #15 on: August 06, 2005, 08:41:12 PM » |
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Very Nice Pooja and Aryaan ..................... !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #16 on: August 07, 2005, 01:03:25 AM » |
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Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Mohabbat ko dil se apne mitaane chale hain
Aansoo jo beh rahe hain behne do aaj inhe
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Taumr yaad aayoge bhulaane ke bawajood
Na aana paas ab kabhi rehna tum humse door
Kabhi lagta hai ki humne khoya hi nahin kuch
Phir chubhan dilaati hai yaad kho diya sab kuch
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Khoobsurat yaadain dil se mitane chale hain
Askhon ka darya le chuka hai rang lahu ka
Dil ki deewaron pe likha naam mitaane chale hain
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain !!!! Talat, Beautiful and very nice............. Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Tere pyar ko seene se mitane chale hain
Is dil se tera nam-o-nishaan mita denge hum
Tere wajood ko kabar me dafanane chale hain
Goom ho jayege hum duniya ke andhero main
Tanhaiyo se aapna rishta nibhane chale hain!! |
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: August 08, 2005, 08:53:50 AM » |
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Thanks Bharat .............. aur bohot achcha likha hai.... !!!! Very Nice..... !!!!
Mit kar bhi nahin mit ta ye wo pyaar hai
Aaj bhi in aankhon main ek khumar hai
Khush hai wo bohot apni dunya basa kar
Uske bina ye zindagi jeena dushwar hai !!!
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #18 on: August 08, 2005, 10:12:38 AM » |
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Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Mohabbat ko dil se apne mitaane chale hain
Aansoo jo beh rahe hain behne do aaj inhe
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Taumr yaad aayoge bhulaane ke bawajood
Na aana paas ab kabhi rehna tum humse door
Kabhi lagta hai ki humne khoya hi nahin kuch
Phir chubhan dilaati hai yaad kho diya sab kuch
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Khoobsurat yaadain dil se mitane chale hain
Askhon ka darya le chuka hai rang lahu ka
Dil ki deewaron pe likha naam mitaane chale hain
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain !!!! bohot achhe talat.................... it is so nice.................. |
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«Reply #19 on: August 08, 2005, 10:57:18 AM » |
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Thanks so much Tanha for the appreciation ...... !!!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #20 on: August 08, 2005, 11:02:35 AM » |
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bahut acche Talat !!!
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bhula do aaj jo bhulana chate to
humse to bhul jane ko na kaho
mita do jo har raz mitana chate ho
humse to zakham chumane ko na kaho
thukra do jo thokhar hame dena chate ho
humse to palat ke waar karne ko na kaho
chale jao door jitna jana chate ho
hum se to na intezzar karne ko na kaho
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«Reply #21 on: August 08, 2005, 11:05:57 AM » |
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kya karogi ye sab ker ke.....................................
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ja ke enjoy karo na..................
tumhara bhi to koi intezaar ker raha hai............
jao aur mast raho.......................
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«Reply #22 on: August 08, 2005, 11:21:12 AM » |
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mast hai sama yeh aalam bhi jawan hai
tukra hai dil aapna, tukra tukra behal hai
mauj hai khusbu hai, sheetal hawayen hai
daard hai zakham hai, banjar hui aaj raha hai
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«Reply #23 on: August 08, 2005, 11:24:09 AM » |
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areeeeeeee yaar , issssss banjar raah mein bahaar laane wala baitha haina.........................
don't worry, ye dard do char din mein khatam ho jayega.
best of luck...........
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«Reply #24 on: August 08, 2005, 11:48:40 AM » |
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tumhare dil se khatam ho jayega
maine kaha na i dont expect much
aur jo manga hai wo bhi tum dene se inkar karte ho
jab chorna he tha behaal mujhe to yeh raah dekhai hi koy
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«Reply #25 on: August 08, 2005, 11:52:21 AM » |
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ab kya kahoon main............................................. ....................
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«Reply #26 on: August 08, 2005, 11:59:08 AM » |
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kuch mat kaho..!!
bas aapna muh band rakha karo...bada chalta hai jab gussa karte hao...!!!
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«Reply #27 on: August 08, 2005, 04:34:36 PM » |
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Thanks Bharat .............. aur bohot achcha likha hai.... !!!! Very Nice..... !!!!
Mit kar bhi nahin mit ta ye wo pyaar hai
Aaj bhi in aankhon main ek khumar hai
Khush hai wo bohot apni dunya basa kar
Uske bina ye zindagi jeena dushwar hai !!! Talat, Shukriya, Waise maine jo likha hai wo aapki shayari se to likha hai........ Since my shayari is the creation from your lovely shayari, the credit goes to you. Also your reply is wonderful...................!!! |
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«Reply #28 on: August 08, 2005, 05:37:34 PM » |
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Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Mohabbat ko dil se apne mitaane chale hain
Aansoo jo beh rahe hain behne do aaj inhe
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Taumr yaad aayoge bhulaane ke bawajood
Na aana paas ab kabhi rehna tum humse door
Kabhi lagta hai ki humne khoya hi nahin kuch
Phir chubhan dilaati hai yaad kho diya sab kuch
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Khoobsurat yaadain dil se mitane chale hain
Askhon ka darya le chuka hai rang lahu ka
Dil ki deewaron pe likha naam mitaane chale hain
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain !!!! wow wow beautifull lines Talat.................nice work all ........Tosha....Nikki............bharat......... ......everybody.......... dekha jo aaj unki aankhon mein halki see nami mujhe laga ki jaise samunder udaas hai poocha jo in hawaon se is baat ka sabab maloom hua aaj fiza bhi udaas hai..................... |
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«Reply #29 on: August 09, 2005, 03:01:03 AM » |
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Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Mohabbat ko dil se apne mitaane chale hain
Aansoo jo beh rahe hain behne do aaj inhe
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Taumr yaad aayoge bhulaane ke bawajood
Na aana paas ab kabhi rehna tum humse door
Kabhi lagta hai ki humne khoya hi nahin kuch
Phir chubhan dilaati hai yaad kho diya sab kuch
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Khoobsurat yaadain dil se mitane chale hain
Askhon ka darya le chuka hai rang lahu ka
Dil ki deewaron pe likha naam mitaane chale hain
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain !!!! wow wow beautifull lines Talat.................nice work all ........Tosha....Nikki............bharat......... ......everybody.......... dekha jo aaj unki aankhon mein halki see nami mujhe laga ki jaise samunder udaas hai poocha jo in hawaon se is baat ka sabab maloom hua aaj fiza bhi udaas hai..................... Thanks a lot Waheed, Aapne bhi bohot achcha likha hai......!!! Also everybody has written very very good........... soch rahe the dil me chhaye udaasi ka sabab
bin bulaye yeh baichaini kahan se aayee hai
Khushbuon ke zonkho se hume khayal aaya
hawayen aapne saath teri yaadein layee hai!!! |
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