Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!! -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

Talat

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«Reply #30 on: August 09, 2005, 02:22:22 PM »

Quote from: "Tosha"

bahut acche Talat !!!
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bhula do aaj jo bhulana chate to
humse to bhul jane ko na kaho
mita do jo har raz mitana chate ho
humse to zakham chumane ko na kaho

thukra do jo thokhar hame dena chate ho
humse to palat ke waar karne ko na kaho
chale jao door jitna jana chate ho
hum se to na intezzar karne ko na kaho

Thanks Tosha..... and very nice... !!!!


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Talat

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Re: Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #31 on: August 09, 2005, 02:24:29 PM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

wow wow beautifull lines Talat.................nice work all ........Tosha....Nikki............bharat......... ......everybody..........

dekha jo aaj unki aankhon mein halki see nami
mujhe laga ki jaise samunder udaas hai
poocha jo in hawaon se is baat ka sabab
maloom hua aaj fiza bhi udaas hai.....................

Thanks Waheed.... aur tumne bhi bohot achcha likha hai.... !!!!!


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Talat

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Re: Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #32 on: August 09, 2005, 02:25:51 PM »

Quote from: "Bharat_Desai"

Talat,
Shukriya,

Waise maine jo likha hai wo aapki shayari se to likha hai........
Since my shayari is the creation from your lovely shayari, the credit goes to you.

Also your reply is wonderful...................!!!

Quote from: "Bharat_Desai"

Thanks a lot Waheed,
Aapne bhi bohot achcha likha hai......!!!
Also everybody has written very very good...........

soch rahe the dil me chhaye udaasi ka sabab
bin bulaye yeh baichaini kahan se aayee hai

Khushbuon ke zonkho se hume khayal aaya
hawayen aapne saath teri yaadein layee hai!!!

Thanks Bharat for your appreciation..... and a very nice one from you... !!!!


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Talat

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #33 on: August 09, 2005, 02:29:54 PM »

Kahan gayi wo titliyaan wo bulbul ke taraane
Kyun maut ki si khamoshi taraf hai chaayee
Na aankhon main jugnu hi chamakte hain ab
Labon pe jaane kab se muskaan nahin aayi
Ek baar tu apni dunya se bahar aa ke dekh
Zindaa laash bana gayi hai hume teri judaai !!!


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Aryaan

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #34 on: August 09, 2005, 03:02:05 PM »

Wah Talat Bohat khoob...

Mere Sabr Ka Na Le Imtihaan
Meri Khamoshi Ko Sada Na De
Jo Tere Baghair Na Jee Sake
Usey Jeene Ki Tu Dua Na De

Tu Azeez Dil-o-nazar Se Hai
Tu Qareeb Rag-o-jaan Se Hai
Mere Jism-o-jaan Ka Yeh Faasla
Kahin WaQt Aur Barha Na De

Tujhe Bhool Ke Na Bhula Sakoon
Tujhe Chah Ke Bhi Na Pa Sakoon
Meri Hasraton Ko Shumaar Kar
Meri Chahaton Ka Sila Na De

Woh Tarap Jo Shola-e-jaan Mein Thi
Mere Tan Badan Se Lipat Gayi
Jo Bujha Sake To Bujha ise
Na Bujha Sake Tau Hawaa Na De

Tujhe Agar Milein Kabhi Fursatein
Meri Shaam Phir Se Sanwaar De
Agar Qatl Karna Hai Tau Qatll Kar
Yun Judaaiyon Ki Saza Na De

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Talat

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #35 on: August 09, 2005, 03:11:36 PM »

Thanks Aryaan..... Usual Smile

and its a very very nice and touching poem...too good... !!


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Aryaan

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #36 on: August 09, 2005, 03:24:56 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Thanks Aryaan..... Usual Smile

and its a very very nice and touching poem...too good... !!

Bohat shukriya Talat.....


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Bharat

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #37 on: August 09, 2005, 04:10:55 PM »

Aryaan,

Bohot achchi poem hai..................
What can I say.....just superb !!!


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Aryaan

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #38 on: August 09, 2005, 04:27:21 PM »

Quote from: "Bharat_Desai"

Aryaan,
Bohot achchi poem hai..................
What can I say.....just superb !!!

Shukriya Bharat....


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waheed_rose2004

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #39 on: August 09, 2005, 05:25:44 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

thanxxxxxxxx Talat...........Bharat..................very nice again Talat............Aryan.........

tujhse juda hokar hum kisi ke bhi na hue
jab jab teri yaad aaye hum ro diye
ai yaar kaise sunaye tumhein kisse judai ke
ab to mere ghar saare diye hain bujhe hue...........


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Talat

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #40 on: August 10, 2005, 02:40:55 PM »

Thanks Waheed...... and very nice ............ !!!!!!!!


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natural

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #41 on: August 11, 2005, 09:15:53 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Wow..............Bahut Achha Likha hai...............
Waakai Dil ko chho lene waala..............
Sis hamein to pata bhi nahi tha ki aap shaayar bhi hain.................. Usual Smile


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Talat

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #42 on: August 11, 2005, 10:43:48 AM »

Thanks so much Natural......!!!! Usual Smile

bas kabhi kabhi lafz apne aap jud jaate hain.......... !!!!!!


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jochahohojayein

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Re: Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #43 on: August 11, 2005, 11:32:22 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Mohabbat ko dil se apne mitaane chale hain
Aansoo jo beh rahe hain behne do aaj inhe
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain

Taumr yaad aayoge bhulaane ke bawajood
Na aana paas ab kabhi rehna tum humse door
Kabhi lagta hai ki humne khoya hi nahin kuch
Phir chubhan dilaati hai yaad kho diya sab kuch

Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain
Khoobsurat yaadain dil se mitane chale hain
Askhon ka darya le chuka hai rang lahu ka
Dil ki deewaron pe likha naam mitaane chale hain
Ehsaas apne aaj hum bhulaane chale hain !!!!

tum yu hume bhula nahi sakte
meri yaad ko dil se nikal nahi sakte
itna aasan nahi hamere pyar ko bhulana
aanasu bana kar pyar ko baha nahi sakte

pas hum nahi aayenge agar tum yahi chahte ho
par dooe bhi kese rahe kyuki tum meri jaroorat ho
khoya humne hai sab kuchh tumko pane
abh tumhe kho nahi sakte tum hi sab kuch ho


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Talat

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Mohabbat ....mitaane chale hain.... !!!!

«Reply #44 on: August 11, 2005, 02:33:14 PM »

Very nice Jochahohojayein...... !!!!

Bhulaa dena itna asaan to nahin hai
Yaad kar ke dil aur tadap uthtaa hai

Aansoo na bahayen jo rok len inhe
Jalte sholon ka sa gumaan hotaa hai

In labon ko tarasna hai hansi ke liye
Muskurate hue bhi dard sa hotaa hai !!!


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