***mohobbat ki raaho mei***

by kaushikbhawna008 on August 21, 2008, 06:57:28 AM
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Mohobbat ki raaho mei kadam dar kadam ladkhada rahe hain
Fir bhi dekho ham muskura rahe hain
Dekhne wale kehte hain hamse ki ham kitne khush hain
Naadan hain wo jo nahi jaante ham to bas apna gam chupa rahe hain

Wo tha paas to jaise jannat sa mujhe ye jahan lagta tha
Par ab sirf ham tanhaiyon se hi dil ko behla rahe hain
Duniya ki bheed mei hamne hamesha khud ko tanha hi paya
Isliye chand sang aap beeti suna rahe hain

Likhne wale tune kyu na koi hamara na likha
Ham begano ki bheed mei bas tanha hi jiye jaa rahe hain
Waqt ret ki tarah haatho se fisalta hi chala gaya
Aur ham beth saahil par hi dube jaa rahe hain
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2008, 07:14:40 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on August 21, 2008, 06:57:28 AM
Mohobbat ki raaho mei kadam dar kadam ladkhada rahe hain
Fir bhi dekho ham muskura rahe hain
Dekhne wale kehte hain hamse ki ham kitne khush hain
Naadan hain wo jo nahi jaante ham to bas apna gam chupa rahe hain

Wo tha paas to jaise jannat sa mujhe ye jahan lagta tha
Par ab sirf ham tanhaiyon se hi dil ko behla rahe hain
Duniya ki bheed mei hamne hamesha khud ko tanha hi paya
Isliye chand sang aap beeti suna rahe hain

Likhne wale tune kyu na koi hamara na likha
Ham begano ki bheed mei bas tanha hi jiye jaa rahe hain
Waqt ret ki tarah haatho se fisalta hi chala gaya
Aur ham beth saahil par hi dube jaa rahe hain


Bahut Khoob Bhawnaji.. Applause Applause
Last Lines To Bahut Ache likhe aaapne..
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2008, 07:16:32 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on August 21, 2008, 07:14:40 AM
Bahut Khoob Bhawnaji.. Applause Applause
Last Lines To Bahut Ache likhe aaapne..

thnk u khwaish ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2008, 07:18:37 AM »
Quote from: ANKIT RAO on August 21, 2008, 07:04:45 AM
Applause

BAHUT KHOOB K.SHAEL JI.

ankit ji aapne shayd thik se dekha nahi ye post hamne kiya hai na ki shael ji ne
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2008, 07:27:55 AM »
bhawna ji bahut hi aachi lines
likhi hai aap ne keep it up Applause





Baadal
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2008, 07:31:21 AM »
post ko padhne aur sarahne k liye shukriya baadal ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2008, 07:33:25 AM »
Quote from: ANKIT RAO on August 21, 2008, 07:04:45 AM
Applause

BAHUT KHOOB K.SHAEL JI.

Ankit Ji Ye Meri Creation Nahi Hai,
Aap Sorry Boliye Kaushik KO...
Anyway Nice Creation KAushik,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2008, 07:37:08 AM »
 

I AM REALLY SORRY KAUSHIKBHAWNA JI .IT REALLY GOT OUT OF MY MIND. ONCE AGAIN SORRY.

ABOUT THE POST I REALLY LIKED IT ONLY THE NAME I WROTE WAS WRONG.

SORRY.
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2008, 07:38:32 AM »
K.SHAEL JI I KNOW IT BUT SOME HOW I WROTE YOUR NAME.I AM SORRY KAUSHIKBHAWNA JI.
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2008, 07:41:44 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause

BAHOOT ACHCHA LIKHA hai bhawana ji

dard section ke to aap mahir shayra hain.....god bless you
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2008, 08:01:54 AM »
its ok ankit ji

thnk u shally

and shukriya bekarar ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2008, 08:08:29 AM »
VERY GOOD KAUSHIK KEEP IT UP
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«Reply #12 on: August 21, 2008, 08:24:39 AM »
shukriya sajid ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2008, 06:27:11 PM »
very nice Applause
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«Reply #14 on: November 27, 2008, 06:31:52 AM »
Quote from: sayani kuri on August 23, 2008, 06:27:11 PM
very nice Applause

ji shukriya ji
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