~*~Muhabbat~*~

by pankshivam on December 03, 2009, 07:57:02 PM
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2009, 01:39:01 AM »
Wow great creation Pank ji very touching.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2009, 01:41:39 AM »
Wonderful Shivam Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: December 04, 2009, 04:26:43 AM »
Wah Shihab ji very touching lines.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2009, 05:21:49 AM »

kya baat hai   pankshivam ji.......

GAR MUJHE USKI YAAD SATATI HAI
USKO BHI TOH MERI YAAD AATI HOGI

HAM AAJ BHI NAHI RAHE PATE HAI UNKE BINA
WO BHI TOH MERE BEGAIR MAYUS HOGI

AAJ VERAN SI RAHETI HAI BEGAIR UNKE, MERI HAR MEHFIL
TOH FIR UNKI MEHFIL MEIN KAHAN RONAK HOGI.






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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: December 04, 2009, 07:30:43 AM »
Very touching n mindblowing lines Cara ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: December 04, 2009, 08:33:17 AM »
kya baat hai   pankshivam ji.......

GAR MUJHE USKI YAAD SATATI HAI
USKO BHI TOH MERI YAAD AATI HOGI

HAM AAJ BHI NAHI RAHE PATE HAI UNKE BINA
WO BHI TOH MERE BEGAIR MAYUS HOGI

AAJ VERAN SI RAHETI HAI BEGAIR UNKE, MERI HAR MEHFIL
TOH FIR UNKI MEHFIL MEIN KAHAN RONAK HOGI.


Nice lines Cara Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #7 on: December 04, 2009, 05:01:46 PM »
Bahut achha likha Pank ji. Congrat for good creation. Thanks for sharing.
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pankshivam
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«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2009, 05:45:09 PM »
Thanks Madhuji,Rajeshji,Riyaz Bhai
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pankshivam
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«Reply #9 on: December 04, 2009, 05:56:42 PM »
Bahut Khoob Pankaj Bhai.
Hume Bahut Pasand Aaya Aapka Ye Kalaam..
Good Job...Daad Hazir Hai.

Kuch Waqt Pehle Isse Likha Tha
Jise Post Bhi Kar Chuka Hun

Par Aaj Aapko Parhke Dubara
Share Karne Ko Mann Hua
To Uski Kuch Lines Likh Raha Hun
Umeed Karta Hun Aapko Pasand Aayega...!



   Udaas Har Manzar Aur Mausam.e.Hijr Zehar Hoga
   Kya Mujhse Bichhadna Uske Liye Bhi Qahar Hoga

   Naa Jaane Kitne Zamaney Guzre Usse Dekhe Bina
   Kya Aaj Bhi Us Bewafa Ka Chehra Munavvar Hoga.!



No Word
Awesome Lines Bro
Itni Khubsurati Se Dard ko Bayan Kiya hai
Dil Choo Liya Shihab Bhai
 Applause Applause Applause

Aapke liye koi reply kafi nahi hoga bro
Bs yunhi kuch likh raha hu i hope pasand aayega

Thaamta hun uski yaadon ko, toh waqt gujar jata hai...
Meri tanhayi me jane kyun, har lamha thahar jata hai...

Uske aks ko talashta hun dil ki gehraaiyon me jab...
Mere bahate ashkon me uska chehara nazar aata hai...
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pankshivam
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«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2009, 07:06:24 PM »
kya baat hai   pankshivam ji.......

GAR MUJHE USKI YAAD SATATI HAI
USKO BHI TOH MERI YAAD AATI HOGI

HAM AAJ BHI NAHI RAHE PATE HAI UNKE BINA
WO BHI TOH MERE BEGAIR MAYUS HOGI

AAJ VERAN SI RAHETI HAI BEGAIR UNKE, MERI HAR MEHFIL
TOH FIR UNKI MEHFIL MEIN KAHAN RONAK HOGI.

 Thumbs UP





Thanks Caraji
Nice Lines Keep Writing
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #11 on: December 04, 2009, 07:52:26 PM »
bahut hi khoob likha hai pank ji shihab ji aur cara ji aap sab ne....har kisi ka dard unke apne alfzo mein padhke mazaa agya..main bhi kuch apne dard bayan karna chahti hu yahan....

Jab vo rota tha mujhe rona aata tha,
jab vo hasta tha merra jahan mehek jata tha,
merri roti hui ankhe aaj bhi uska chehra dhundhti hai..
jo merri palko ki hasi dhundh lata tha......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #12 on: December 04, 2009, 07:56:22 PM »


shukriya shihab ji...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #13 on: December 04, 2009, 08:07:19 PM »
ok ji...
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pankshivam
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«Reply #14 on: December 04, 2009, 08:20:32 PM »
bahut hi khoob likha hai pank ji shihab ji aur cara ji aap sab ne....har kisi ka dard unke apne alfzo mein padhke mazaa agya..main bhi kuch apne dard bayan karna chahti hu yahan....

Jab vo rota tha mujhe rona aata tha,
jab vo hasta tha merra jahan mehek jata tha,
merri roti hui ankhe aaj bhi uska chehra dhundhti hai..
jo merri palko ki hasi dhundh lata tha......

Shukriya Geetji
Bahoot khoob Likha Aapne

Khushiyon ki sehar pe mera anjaam chhipa tha...
Honthon ki hasi pe uska hi naam likha tha...

Chaha nahi usko kyun tutkar maine...
Jo mere liye usne dard ka inaam rakha tha...
~Pank~
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