mujh se vaaqif to mere jism kaa saayaa bhii na thaa

by husain52 on January 07, 2005, 02:50:33 PM
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mujh se vaaqif to mere jism kaa saayaa bhii na thaa
kaise ho jaataa tumhaaraa mai.n Khud apanaa bhii na thaa

jitanaa maayuus hai vo shaKhs bikhar kar mujh se
itanii shiddat se to mai.n ne use chaahaa bhii na thaa

jaise ilzaam lagaaye hai.n mere sar us ne
aisii nazaro.n se to mai.n ne use dekhaa bhii na thaa

merii aavaaz kaa Gam shahar ne jaanaa kyo.nkar
mai.n to us bhii.D me.n Khaamosh thaa bolaa bhii na thaa
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2005, 03:06:51 PM »
Nice One!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2005, 03:18:57 PM »
Kya khoob likha hai Husain. Nice job...
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2005, 04:26:20 PM »
"merii aavaaz kaa Gam shahar ne jaanaa kyo.nkar
mai.n to us bhii.D me.n Khaamosh thaa bolaa bhii na thaa "

beautilful linesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!

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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2005, 05:00:14 PM »
bahot hi khoooob husain bhai Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2005, 05:39:24 AM »
NIce Meena!! happy9
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husain52
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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2005, 02:17:48 PM »
thax every one
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2005, 06:39:39 AM »
Na mitta gam to barbadi ke afsane kahan jate
agar duniyan chaman hoti to weerane kahan jate
chalo achha hua apne main koi gair to nikla
sabhi hote agar apne to begane kahan jate
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2005, 06:45:51 AM »
beautiful hussain and very nice JHL
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2005, 06:51:43 AM »
Thnx Nidhiji.
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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2005, 07:17:57 AM »
good work JHL

zahan pe chhaa_ii hu_ii Gam kii ghaTaa ho jaise
dard me.n Duubii hu_ii saarii fizaa ho jaise

ab dil-e-zaar kisii taur bahalataa hii nahii.n
is kaa paimaan-e-vafaa TuuT gayaa ho jaise

pursish-e-Gam kii bhii rasm uThaa dii us ne
haal-e-dil sun ke vo sharmi.ndaa huaa ho jaise

ab to har saa.Ns kii aamad pe gumaa.N hotaa hai
zindagii ek fasurdaa saa diyaa ho jaise    (NM)
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«Reply #11 on: January 11, 2005, 07:20:14 AM »
Kya baat hai Husain. Bahut achchhe. Keep it up.
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husain52
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«Reply #12 on: January 11, 2005, 07:31:05 AM »
thax JHL
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«Reply #13 on: January 12, 2005, 07:51:04 AM »
Musarrat pe rivajon ka sakht pehra hai,
      najane kuansi ummed pe aake dil thahara hai,
       teri akhon me jhalakte hue is gam ki kasam,
         a dost dard ka rishta bahut hi gehra hai .
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«Reply #14 on: January 12, 2005, 11:25:50 AM »
nice lines JHL

kiyaa baadalo.n me.n safar zindagii bhar
zamii.n par banaayaa na ghar zindagii bhar

sabhii log jiine kaa fan jaanate hai.n
na aayaa hame.n ye hunar zindagii bhar

mohabbat rahii chaar din zindagii me.n
rahaa chaar din kaa asar zindagii bhar
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