Mujhe Ab Laut Jaane Do...

by angel4u on May 09, 2009, 03:21:06 AM
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I came across this poetry, Somethign very much related to my feelings with Yoindia. As many people here know YOINDIA is just not a site for me, but very very close to my heart. Always a homely atmosphere, beautiful hearted people. Its something very much hidden wanted to convey to some of the Yoindian friends, especially Roja, Khwaish, Talat, Sophi and Vikas (MANN). Kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hia zindagi mein ke dil ko sambhalna mushkil ho jaata hia, itna pyaar aur lagaav dekhke dil sambhalta to hia, par tanhaiyon aur gumnaamiyon ke andhere mein phir se kahin khone ko dil karta hia... Yoindia se ek pagli si ladki ANGEL bani, yahan itni sanwri, nikhri, har ek dost ne is ladki ko ANGEL jo aaj hai wo banaya. Har ek ka dilse shukriya ada karti hoon. Thanks for supporting me always and understanding too..



Mujhe Ab Laut Jaana Hai,
Achanak Ab Toot Jaana Hai,
Ke Mere Des Se Aage Koi Pardes Mera Muntazir Hai,
Aur Mere Dostone Mere Hathon Mein,
Safar Ka Zaad Bhi Pakda Diya Hai,
Guzishta Kal Ki Sab Baatein Bhulae Jaa Raha Hoon,
Par Wo Baatein Jo Tere Hasas Chehre Par Numayein Thi,
Wo Saare Lafz Jo AshQon Ki Surat Aankh Mein Utre,
Tere Khamosh Paykar Mein Chhupe Gamnaak Afsane,
Teri Guftaar Ki Rimjhim,
Teri Riftaar Ke Mausam,
Tere Kirdaar Ka Moti,
Tere Dilse Ubalte Khoon Ke Beawaz Se Nagme,
Tere Chehre Ke Khaal-O-Khad, Nigahon Mein Chhupe Dariya,
Tere Ehsaas Ki Shiddat,
Tere Jazbaat Ki Hiddat,
Main Sab Kuch Yaad Rakhunga,
Teri Khamosh Awazein,
Mere Mazi Ke Hissa Bankar Bhrengi,
Mujhe Ab Laut Jaane De,
Achanak Toot Jaane De...

NM
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2009, 04:58:40 AM »
nice sharing angel, whose composition is this?
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2009, 05:11:34 AM »
Thanks Angel. We always There for u Usual Smile

And this really a beautful Sharing dear.
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aaina
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2009, 06:14:03 AM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 09, 2009, 03:21:06 AM
I came across this poetry, Somethign very much related to my feelings with Yoindia. As many people here know YOINDIA is just not a site for me, but very very close to my heart. Always a homely atmosphere, beautiful hearted people. Its something very much hidden wanted to convey to some of the Yoindian friends, especially Roja, Khwaish, Talat, Sophi and Vikas (MANN). Kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hia zindagi mein ke dil ko sambhalna mushkil ho jaata hia, itna pyaar aur lagaav dekhke dil sambhalta to hia, par tanhaiyon aur gumnaamiyon ke andhere mein phir se kahin khone ko dil karta hia... Yoindia se ek pagli si ladki ANGEL bani, yahan itni sanwri, nikhri, har ek dost ne is ladki ko ANGEL jo aaj hai wo banaya. Har ek ka dilse shukriya ada karti hoon. Thanks for supporting me always and understanding too..



Mujhe Ab Laut Jaana Hai,
Achanak Ab Toot Jaana Hai,
Ke Mere Des Se Aage Koi Pardes Mera Muntazir Hai,
Aur Mere Dostone Mere Hathon Mein,
Safar Ka Zaad Bhi Pakda Diya Hai,
Guzishta Kal Ki Sab Baatein Bhulae Jaa Raha Hoon,
Par Wo Baatein Jo Tere Hasas Chehre Par Numayein Thi,
Wo Saare Lafz Jo AshQon Ki Surat Aankh Mein Utre,
Tere Khamosh Paykar Mein Chhupe Gamnaak Afsane,
Teri Guftaar Ki Rimjhim,
Teri Riftaar Ke Mausam,
Tere Kirdaar Ka Moti,
Tere Dilse Ubalte Khoon Ke Beawaz Se Nagme,
Tere Chehre Ke Khaal-O-Khad, Nigahon Mein Chhupe Dariya,
Tere Ehsaas Ki Shiddat,
Tere Jazbaat Ki Hiddat,
Main Sab Kuch Yaad Rakhunga,
Teri Khamosh Awazein,
Mere Mazi Ke Hissa Bankar Bhrengi,
Mujhe Ab Laut Jaane De,
Achanak Toot Jaane De...

NM

very nice shring angel.....................

safr diya hai to manzil ka pata bhi daiga
mera khuda mujhay raasta dikha bhi daiga

qadam qadam pe dikhayega aayatain apni
har ek mod per manzar mujhay naya daiga

lapait daiga mujhay zulmato.n ki chadar mai
phir ek charaagh meri raah mai jala daiga

badha ke dil mai kisi intezaar ki lazzat
nazar ke waaste taro.n ka silsila daiga

rakhega mujhko sada jabr ki panaho.n mai
jo khaab daikhne lag jaun.n to jaga daiga

zamee.n ki piyaas badhyega aag barsa kar
lahoo ko harf e sadaqat ka waasta daiga

karam kya ke ata ki gunaah ki tufeeq
karam karega gunaho.n ki jab sila daiga

 (poetry by prof. mughni tabassum)
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2009, 06:17:55 AM »
Nice Sharing Angel Ji, Aur Aslam Bhai  Great Job Yaar,.
Bohat Achche,.,
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2009, 10:34:49 AM »
nice angel ji & aaina ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2009, 02:27:37 PM »
Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on May 09, 2009, 04:58:40 AM
nice sharing angel, whose composition is this?

I dotn know, i had just come across it, thought its fit for dedication to YOINDIA...
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2009, 02:28:33 PM »
Quote from: aaina on May 09, 2009, 06:14:03 AM
very nice shring angel.....................

safr diya hai to manzil ka pata bhi daiga
mera khuda mujhay raasta dikha bhi daiga

qadam qadam pe dikhayega aayatain apni
har ek mod per manzar mujhay naya daiga

lapait daiga mujhay zulmato.n ki chadar mai
phir ek charaagh meri raah mai jala daiga

badha ke dil mai kisi intezaar ki lazzat
nazar ke waaste taro.n ka silsila daiga

rakhega mujhko sada jabr ki panaho.n mai
jo khaab daikhne lag jaun.n to jaga daiga

zamee.n ki piyaas badhyega aag barsa kar
lahoo ko harf e sadaqat ka waasta daiga

karam kya ke ata ki gunaah ki tufeeq
karam karega gunaho.n ki jab sila daiga

 (poetry by prof. mughni tabassum)

Thanks ...
nice one
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angel4u
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2009, 02:31:53 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on May 09, 2009, 05:11:34 AM
Thanks Angel. We always There for u Usual Smile

And this really a beautful Sharing dear.

Thank You Sophi... Thanks to you guys for being there always....
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2009, 02:41:21 PM »
good sharing Angel!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2009, 02:48:52 PM »
Thanks Di...
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: May 09, 2009, 03:23:53 PM »
Lovely sharing dear angel  Clapping Smiley
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angel4u
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«Reply #12 on: May 09, 2009, 04:28:18 PM »
Thanks Roja.. Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #13 on: May 09, 2009, 04:36:41 PM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 09, 2009, 04:28:18 PM
Thanks Roja.. Usual Smile

welcome sweetu
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«Reply #14 on: May 09, 2009, 06:39:39 PM »
Angel dear.. Poem to aapne Bahut acchi share ki hi hai.. !!

Par Poem ke Upar JO aapne Pyaare Pyaare Alfaaz Likhe Hain.. wo Dil ko choo gaye.. Padh kar mehsoos hua ki aap Yoindia se aur Hum se sab se kitna pyaar karti hain.. Main Bassssss itna Hi Kahunga ki Hum sab bhi aapko Bahut Pyaar karte Hain.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


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