Mujhe apne desh bula lo babul

by mistufer on July 08, 2009, 05:02:05 PM
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 05:51:03 PM »
bahut pyara likha hai aapne Nira ji.....ek beti k dard ko bahut umda tarike se aapne lafjon ki jubaan di hai.....bahut khub Applause Applause Applause Applause tearyeyed
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 09:21:41 PM »
Wah Nira ji,excellent,very nice and beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 11:21:31 PM »
Bohot dard hai..Bohot dard hai Nira ji... aankh bhar aai... bohot umda likha hai..Babul padhle to kaleja munh ko aajaye...
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 11:22:23 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Nira ji!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 02:28:03 PM »
Nira Didiiiiiii.... Ab aapki Taareef Me Kya kahun.. Lafz Kam Padh jate hain Mere Paas to.. Usual Smile

Aur Such me Yeh Peshkash to Behad Umda hai.. Ek Beti ke dard Ko Bakhoobi Lafzon Me Bayan kiya hai aapne... yeh wo dard Hai.. jo Har bahan har Beti ko Zindgi me sahana padhta hai.. is succhaai ko Bakhoobi pesh kiya hai aapne.. Daaad Kubool karen is bhai ki.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 04:26:49 PM »

I am speechless...
kya kahun, u know my sister is also so far frm me, i just felt that all this is just the words of my sister, who was with me each and every moment, par abhi jhalak dekhne ko bhi taras jaate hai... aankhein nam ho gayi...

Very beautifully written Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 04:59:53 PM »
Quote from: Nira on July 08, 2009, 05:02:05 PM


Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Nira sis.
Beti ho ya behen.... larkiyon ko sehna hi padta hai  sad7 Your lines made me emotional.. Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 05:12:03 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Niraji...

bahut Ache jazbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne..

bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2009, 12:49:02 PM »
Quote from: poppoetry on July 08, 2009, 05:51:03 PM
bahut pyara likha hai aapne Nira ji.....ek beti k dard ko bahut umda tarike se aapne lafjon ki jubaan di hai.....bahut khub Applause Applause Applause Applause tearyeyed

popoetry ji

aapko meri rachna pasand aayi bahut abhari hoon
shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2009, 12:50:16 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 08, 2009, 09:21:41 PM
Wah Nira ji,excellent,very nice and beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

madhu ji
aapko meri creation pasand aayi
bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2009, 12:52:28 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 08, 2009, 11:21:31 PM
Bohot dard hai..Bohot dard hai Nira ji... aankh bhar aai... bohot umda likha hai..Babul padhle to kaleja munh ko aajaye...

sayyid ji
aapne us dard ko mehsoos kiya
mera likhna safal hua.dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
nira
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2009, 12:53:36 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on July 08, 2009, 11:22:23 PM
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Nira ji!!

pooja ji

thanks aapko meri rachna pasand aayi
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2009, 01:49:14 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on July 09, 2009, 02:24:16 PM
waqai Nira ji aapne ek beti ke dard ko bahot ache se likha hai Applause Applause  Applause

excellent poem with nice presentation.
i also congratulate u ki aap hamesha alag alag muddon par
likhti hain jo bahot badi baat hai..
keep it up

kaash ji
bahut bahut shukriya aapko meri racha pasand aayi.
haan koshish karti hoon ki alag alag vishay par likhoon.
aap yunhi saath dete rahi muje acha lagega.
nira
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2009, 01:53:23 PM »
Quote from: Mann on July 09, 2009, 02:28:03 PM
Nira Didiiiiiii.... Ab aapki Taareef Me Kya kahun.. Lafz Kam Padh jate hain Mere Paas to.. Usual Smile

Aur Such me Yeh Peshkash to Behad Umda hai.. Ek Beti ke dard Ko Bakhoobi Lafzon Me Bayan kiya hai aapne... yeh wo dard Hai.. jo Har bahan har Beti ko Zindgi me sahana padhta hai.. is succhaai ko Bakhoobi pesh kiya hai aapne.. Daaad Kubool karen is bhai ki.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**




vicky
sach tumhare itne jazbaati reviews padh kar meri ankhe dobara num ho gayin
yeh dastoor hi aisa hai beti ko babul se door jana hi hota hai.
aor agar pardesh chali jaye toh ankden taras jati hain.
bahut bahut shukriya bhai tum yunhi saath rahna
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