Mujhe bataya hota bas itna.....

by nidhi_yadein on December 20, 2004, 05:23:51 PM
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"MUJHE BATAYA HOTA BAS ITNA,
  MERE PYAR MEIN KYA THHI KAMI,
  DEKHO AAJ MERI ANKHON MEIN,
  CHHAI KITNI HAI NAMI...,
  MUJHE CHODA RAHON MEIN TANHA,
  PYAR KARNE KI KYUN DIL YE PAYE SAZA,
  TUM HI BATAO MERE PYAR MEIN,
  KIS BAAT KI THHI AKHIR KAMI,
  JO DI ITNI BADI SAZA TUMNE,
  GUZARNE KI TANHA ZINDAGI,
  DIL TUMNE BASAYA APNA,
  TODA HAI MERA HAR SAPNA,
  MERI KHWAHISHON KO RAUNDA HAI,
  SHAYAD PYAR TUMHARE LIYE SAUDA HAI,
  MERA EK-EK ANSOO MUJHSE,
  POOCHTA BAS ITNA HAI .....,
  JISKA DIL PATTHAR HAI,
  PYAR MAINE USSE KYON KIYA???,
  BAHOT SAMJHATI HUN KHUD KO,
  BEHLATI BHI HUN DIL KO,
  PAR YE KUCH NAHIN MAANTA HAI,
  YE SIRF TUMHE HI MANGTA HAI,
  KAISE SAMJHAUN MAIN ISKO,
  KI TUMKO PANA EK SAPNA HAI,
  SAPNA HOKAR BHI TU APNA HAI,
  MERE DIL KI GEHRAIYON KI,
  MERE MAN KI SACHAIYON KI,
  KADRA KABHI NA TUMNE KI,
  TUMSE PYAR KARNE KI BHOOL NE,
  ZINDAGI MERI TABAAH KAR DI..."
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2004, 09:47:49 PM »
It's beautiful Nidhi....
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2004, 01:52:07 PM »
Thanx Aryaan.
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2004, 02:04:21 PM »
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"MUJHE BATAYA HOTA BAS ITNA,
  MERE PYAR MEIN KYA THHI KAMI,
  DEKHO AAJ MERI ANKHON MEIN,
  CHHAI KITNI HAI NAMI...,
  MUJHE CHODA RAHON MEIN TANHA,
  PYAR KARNE KI KYUN DIL YE PAYE SAZA,
  TUM HI BATAO MERE PYAR MEIN,
  KIS BAAT KI THHI AKHIR KAMI,
  JO DI ITNI BADI SAZA TUMNE,
  GUZARNE KI TANHA ZINDAGI,
  DIL TUMNE BASAYA APNA,
  TODA HAI MERA HAR SAPNA,
  MERI KHWAHISHON KO RAUNDA HAI,
  SHAYAD PYAR TUMHARE LIYE SAUDA HAI,
  MERA EK-EK ANSOO MUJHSE,
  POOCHTA BAS ITNA HAI .....,
  JISKA DIL PATTHAR HAI,
  PYAR MAINE USSE KYON KIYA???,
  BAHOT SAMJHATI HUN KHUD KO,
  BEHLATI BHI HUN DIL KO,
  PAR YE KUCH NAHIN MAANTA HAI,
  YE SIRF TUMHE HI MANGTA HAI,
  KAISE SAMJHAUN MAIN ISKO,
  KI TUMKO PANA EK SAPNA HAI,
  SAPNA HOKAR BHI TU APNA HAI,
  MERE DIL KI GEHRAIYON KI,
  MERE MAN KI SACHAIYON KI,
  KADRA KABHI NA TUMNE KI,
  TUMSE PYAR KARNE KI BHOOL NE,
  ZINDAGI MERI TABAAH KAR DI..."


wow excellent nidhi..............
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2004, 02:10:15 PM »
Thanx waheed,for u liked it :D !
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2004, 02:41:46 PM »
""Aai thi meri bhi zindagi mein bahaar,
 jab tumhe pehli nazar mein mana adhar,
 yunhi tiumhe dekhte-dekhte saal guzar gaye,
 pyar parwaan chadta gaya,hum khud ko bhool gaye,
 uss bhool ko aaj bhi yaad karti hun main,
 sapne sajaye thhe jo...woh toot ke bikhar gaye,
 main to aaj bhi hairaan si rehti hun .....,
 kabhi ham kya thhe...aur aaj kya ho gaye."
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2004, 07:57:06 PM »
bohot ache nidhi, bohot ach likha apne, very very touching, esp the 1st poem, har ek line bohot hi koobsurat hai!

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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2004, 12:42:36 PM »
Thank u meena ji.
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2004, 06:05:10 PM »
ur welcome!

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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2004, 01:13:21 AM »
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""Aai thi meri bhi zindagi mein bahaar,
 jab tumhe pehli nazar mein mana adhar,
 yunhi tiumhe dekhte-dekhte saal guzar gaye,
 pyar parwaan chadta gaya,hum khud ko bhool gaye,
 uss bhool ko aaj bhi yaad karti hun main,
 sapne sajaye thhe jo...woh toot ke bikhar gaye,
 main to aaj bhi hairaan si rehti hun .....,
 kabhi ham kya thhe...aur aaj kya ho gaye."


Bohat achey Nidhi...
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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2004, 07:55:15 AM »
Thanx Aryaan.Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: December 24, 2004, 07:58:38 AM »
"Ik muddat se is dil ko karar ki talash hai,
   zindagi ko is tanha safar mein ik hamsafar ki talash hai,
   yun to roz is duniya me dikhai dete hain chehre hazaron,
   in chehron ke beech hame ik chehre ki talash hai,
   baad muddaton ke mili thi,woh zindagi bichad gayi hamse,
   aaj tak us bichadi hui,zindagi ki hame talash hai"
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«Reply #12 on: December 24, 2004, 08:02:15 AM »
all the three poems r awesome............. too good

yeh zindagy hain ajab,
 yeh zindagy hain khoi.
ki dhondo kisiko,
to milta hain koi..................
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«Reply #13 on: December 24, 2004, 08:11:55 AM »
Thank u deep:)
Very rite said.
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«Reply #14 on: December 24, 2004, 05:57:49 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Ik muddat se is dil ko karar ki talash hai,
   zindagi ko is tanha safar mein ik hamsafar ki talash hai,
   yun to roz is duniya me dikhai dete hain chehre hazaron,
   in chehron ke beech hame ik chehre ki talash hai,
   baad muddaton ke mili thi,woh zindagi bichad gayi hamse,
   aaj tak us bichadi hui,zindagi ki hame talash hai"


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
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