+++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

by punam on February 26, 2008, 04:45:31 AM
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karte hain jisse pyar woh agar kehede mujhe bhul jao
phir bhi usse dil se nikal nahi sakte hain hum..

kehde koi agar woh tha bewafa..jhoota tha uska pyar
bewafa usse keh nahi sakte hain hum...

maante hain hum woh majboor hai, uske dil me bhi dard hai
sirf pana hi nahi pyar me khud ko mitana bhi jaante hain hum..

hamare aansoo kahi na banjaye uski pao ki zanjeer
dard dil me dabake uski khatir muskurane ki kasam khaaye hain hum..

uski khushi uski salamat dilse chahte hain hum
uske khilaf ek labz sun.na nahi chahte hain hum...

iss janam me na mil sake, agle janam me hume milade..
bas ab yehi dua khuda se maangte hain hum...
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2008, 05:10:27 AM »
hello punam

i like ur shayri aisa lagta hai kisi ko dil se chaha tha aapne or wo aapse dur ho gaya hai
sach kahu to apki ye shayri padkar aisa laga jaise mere dil ki baat aapne keh di ho
thanks to written this sweet poetry
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2008, 05:20:41 AM »
Thanx kaushik ji ..chalo acha laga aap ko..bas aise hi kuch likh di..
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baadal102
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2008, 06:04:02 AM »
good going punam
waise ye mujhe bhi lagta hai jo bhawana ne kaha
jaroor batana waitng for ur call


Baadal
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2008, 06:13:03 AM »
hmmm ... thanx baadal ji..shayari.. shayari hoti hai..
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crystal
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2008, 08:46:52 AM »
wow its a very nice sayri.. tel me how u get this feelings?
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2008, 09:25:11 AM »
Really nice punam dear.. Usual Smile
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punam
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2008, 03:20:42 PM »
Thanx crystal ji..bas aise hi..
thanx honey di...
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2008, 03:22:27 PM »
bahoot khoob Punam.. bahoot hi pyari kavita likhi hai apne!!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2008, 03:34:32 PM »
karte hain jisse pyar woh agar kehede mujhe bhul jao
phir bhi usse dil se nikal nahi sakte hain hum..

kehde koi agar woh tha bewafa..jhoota tha uska pyar
bewafa usse keh nahi sakte hain hum...

maante hain hum woh majboor hai, uske dil me bhi dard hai
sirf pana hi nahi pyar me khud ko mitana bhi jaante hain hum..

hamare aansoo kahi na banjaye uski pao ki zanjeer
dard dil me dabake uski khatir muskurane ki kasam khaaye hain hum..

uski khushi uski salamat dilse chahte hain hum
uske khilaf ek labz sun.na nahi chahte hain hum...

iss janam me na mil sake, agle janam me hume milade..
bas ab yehi dua khuda se maangte hain hum...


BAHUT BAHUT KHOOOB PUNAM...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE...BHAWNAYO SE BHARPOOR..
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punam
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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2008, 03:44:49 PM »
Thanx pooja di...and kittu ji...
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«Reply #11 on: February 26, 2008, 04:14:06 PM »
Iss zindagi mein koi kissi ko nahi bhool paata
woh baat alag hai ke,insaan waqt se bhi to nahi lad paata....

har ek ko apne dil ka dard sunane se kuch nahi haasil "punam"
sach to yeh hai ke,samajne wala hi hai yeh dard  ko samaj paata....

jo kadam aap kisi ke saath chale the
usse kyon nahi yaad karte???
jo kadam saath na chal sake usse yaad kar kyon
aapka dil hai ro jaata....

kisi ki majboori ko samaj kar chup ho jaana
bhi bahut badi baat hai mohabbat mein,
par khud ko mitaakar,
koi kuch bhi haasil nahi hai kar paata....

jisse aap pyaar karte ho,usse kuch aise yaad karna
ke woh yaadein aapko khushi de sake ZINDAGI bhar
ghamo ko dil mein rakh kar do kadam bhi nahi hai
insaan chal paata....

zindagi bahut badi hai aur isse jeene ke wajeh
bhi bahut hote hai dil ke paas,
ek guzarte lamhe ke liye khud ko
insaan itni badi  saza to nahi de paata...

iss zindagi mein koi kisi ko nahi bhool paata
woh baat alag hai ke, insaan waqt se bhi to nahi lad paata.....

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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2008, 04:18:52 PM »
Bahot hi acha likha aapne kittu ji...
dard aur sachayi isme saaf nazar aa rahi...
kya aur kaise tareef karun samjh me nahi aa raha...
yeh lines bahot ache lage....

jo kadam aap kisi ke saath chale the
usse kyon nahi yaad karte???
jo kadam saath na chal sake usse yaad kar kyon
aapka dil hai ro jaata....
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2008, 04:22:36 PM »
bahoot hi acha reply diya hai apne khwaish ji!!! too good!!
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punam
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«Reply #14 on: February 27, 2008, 12:56:11 PM »
Bhul sakoge toh bhul jana..
koi sawal na karenge hum aap se abhi..
kabhi fhursat mile toh puchlena haal hamara bhi...

dur agar chali bhi jaun aap se aap ke khateer
mujhe meri tanhayi maar dalegi tabhi...

laut aati nahi murjhaye phoolon me khusboo dubara
na rahi baki dil me koi khwaish bhi abhi...

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