***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***:Shayri-E-Dard

kaushikbhawna008

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mujhe chaht ki pyaas thi unki
unhone dard ka samandar pila diya
haath khali na rahe mere isliye
saath tanhaiyon ka pakda diyaa

mita hua to kuch likha hua
khat wo pakda gaya
keh gaya ki bhula dena mujhe tum bhi
aur har arsa wo mujhe yaad ata gaya

ya mere khuda kaisa wo khudgarz nikla
khud bhi tanha raha aur mujhe bhi rula diya
kehta hai ki wo bhul chuka hai sab kuch
fir bhi uske dil mei ab tak pyaar mera hi hai basa hua

kaisi ye reet kaisi ye chot hai e-khuda
mein jism aur meri jaan hai mujhse juda
khila khila hai manjar charo taraf mere
par deep dil ka mere hai bhuja hua


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2008, 08:01:18 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 29, 2008, 07:32:35 AM

Aaj tere dard se hain muje shikayat
q tune apna hale-e-dil muje suna diya
achcha khasa khush tha aaj main kitna
teri is ghazel ne bhavna muje rula diya

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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2008, 08:07:35 AM »

sajid ye tera badakpan hai jo tune
mere gam ko apna maan liya
meine to bas wahi likha tha ghayl
to ab tak mere saath hai hua

maaf karna sajid ji aapko rulane ka hamara irada na tha


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2008, 08:32:57 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 29, 2008, 08:07:35 AM

sajid ye tera badakpan hai jo tune
mere gam ko apna maan liya
meine to bas wahi likha tha ghayl
to ab tak mere saath hai hua

maaf karna sajid ji aapko rulane ka hamara irada na tha

Irada karte nahi lekin irada mera jan lete hain
Mera aasoo jo gire samandar me woh pehchan lete hain


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Rajbir

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2008, 08:37:46 AM »

Bhawna and Sajid

Aaj to aap dono chaaye hue ho Applause

Very nice !


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syednaami

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2008, 08:40:57 AM »

Kaushik Bhawna Jee,
Bahut umda kalaam likha hai, bahut badhiya.


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2008, 08:45:55 AM »

thnk u sajid ji notworthy

thnk u syed ji notworthy

thnk u rajbir ji notworthy


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baadal102

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2008, 09:42:25 AM »

bahut khoob bhawna ji N saajid ji


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2008, 09:47:57 AM »

thnk u so much baadal ji notworthy


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Pooja

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2008, 04:45:06 PM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 29, 2008, 07:32:35 AM

samjh nahi atta Bhawna kaya kahu.. apki is kavita ko parr kar.. jaise mere dil ka haal apki kalam likh gai... bahoot hi acha likhti hai app...
KUCH APKE LIYE LIKH RAHI HU.. Shayad apko acha lage..

gir gir kar bhi wo kyun humare dil se nahi girta
dunia ke in sawalo ko choro,
khud ke liye khud ke pass
koi bhi jawab nahi hota

jaana hai zindagi ko, uske jaane ke baad
zindagi main koi, kabhi itna bedard nahi hota
hoga kuch uske apne he khawabo-khayalo main
jis main humare liye koi bhi rasta nahi hota

jaane wale ko rok saka hai kon, is jahan main
bas yahi soch kar man ko hai kuch honslla hota
Ajj nahi to kal, humko bhi badte jaana hai zindagi ke sung
pahla kadam badana he hai, bas mushkil hota!!


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2008, 04:59:57 AM »

bohut bohut shukriya pooja ji jo aapne apne vichar bhi likhe kaafi acha likha hai aapne bhi Applause


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2008, 06:06:29 AM »

Good one Bhawna Ji
Equally good response Pooja Ji


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Sammual

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2008, 01:40:45 PM »

Bhawna And Sajid Ji Bahut Hi Khoob Likha Hai Aapne.


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ***mujhe chahat ki pyaas thi unki***

«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2008, 02:00:16 PM »

thanks sammual but all credit should goes to bhavna na woh itna achcha likhti na hum achcha reply de pate. thanks for recognizing our effort brother.

Quote from: Sammual on October 30, 2008, 01:40:45 PM

Bhawna And Sajid Ji Bahut Hi Khoob Likha Hai Aapne.