MUJHE HAR MAUJ KE AAGOSH MEIN SAHIL NAZAR AAYA ! REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA"

by haan on February 21, 2013, 06:19:44 PM
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SHAHJAHANPUR , U.P , MEIN HONE WALE MUSHAYRE KA DIYA GAYA MISRA HAI...
MUJHE HAR MAUJ KE AAGOSH MEIN SAHIL NAZAR AAYA !
ISS KA ARKAAN HAI..........
MA-FAA-II-LUN

.ISS MISRE PER MAINE GHAZAL KAHNE KI EK
KOSHISH KI HAI ,MAI'N SABHI BAHER KE JAANKAR SHAYRO'N SE GUZARISH KARTA HU'N KI WO ISS GHAZAL PE NAZAR E SAANI KARE'N AUR ISLAH KAR KE RAHNUMAI KARE'N MAI'N UN SAB KA SHUKR GUZAAR RAHUNGA .

MUHABBAT MEIN BATAU'N KAYA ,KE KAYA HASIL NAZAR AAYA !
TADAP, AANSU, UDAASI  AUR  ZAKHM E DIL NAZAR AAYA !

NAZAR  QATIL, ADAA QATIL, ZABA'N JAADU  BHARI  USKI !!
MUHABBAT KE HAR EK PAHLU SE WO QATIL NAZAR AAYA !!

NA JAANE KITNE RANGO MEI'N  RANGI LAGTI HAI YE DUNIYA !
DUSHALA   PEYAAR   KA  ODHEY  HUE   BATIL   NAZAR   AAYA !!

KALAM  E  PAAK  KI  AAYAAT  LABO'N  PER JAB  MERE  AAYI'N !
MUJHE HAR MAUJ KE AAGHOSH MEI'N SAHIL NAZAR AAYA !!

MAI'N TASHNA LAB CHALAA AAYA HU'N "TANHAA"  MAUJ E DARIYA SE !
MUJHE  JAB  PEYAAS  KA  MAARA  HUA  SAHIL  NAZAR  AAYA !!

REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA"
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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2013, 07:06:13 PM »
janaab mai to koi Behr ka jankaar nhi hoon
lekin
aapki ye ghazal mujhe behad pasand aayee
bht khoob ghazal likhi h aapne
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2013, 08:20:52 PM »
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wah wah wah wah buht hi khoob,,, buht hi umda andaz e bayan
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2013, 11:46:04 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 22, 2013, 12:32:48 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: February 22, 2013, 04:11:49 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 22, 2013, 04:32:11 AM »
Rehan saheb , aap ki koshish kaamyaab hi nahin qabil e sataish hai . Bahut khubsurat ,pukhta ashaar pe mabni is ghazal ke liye jitni mubarakbaad aapko di jaaye kam hai. Haan , mere khayaal mein ,teesre sher ke pahle misre se  lafz HUE hata dijye to Bahr ka taqaza pura ho jaayega.
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2013, 08:54:52 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. har sher kabil e tareef raha. aapko hamari dili mubarakbad qubool ho.
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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2013, 09:58:00 PM »
Rehaan Sahaab Aadaab!


bahut khoob janab badi hi khobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne...
gazab ke ashaar rahe .. behad gehrai hai aapke ashaaroN meiN pur asar
shayari ka mutalbaa kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

haaN dusre ashar meiN mohobbat ke "har" lafz par bher tuti hai.. usmeiN
tarmeem kar lijiye..


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2013, 12:34:46 AM »
waah bohat oomda ghazal ,..............bohat c daad
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2013, 04:06:13 AM »
Quote from: haan on February 21, 2013, 06:19:44 PM
SHAHJAHANPUR , U.P , MEIN HONE WALE MUSHAYRE KA DIYA GAYA MISRA HAI...
MUJHE HAR MAUJ KE AAGOSH MEIN SAHIL NAZAR AAYA !
ISS KA ARKAAN HAI..........
MA-FAA-II-LUN

.ISS MISRE PER MAINE GHAZAL KAHNE KI EK
KOSHISH KI HAI ,MAI'N SABHI BAHER KE JAANKAR SHAYRO'N SE GUZARISH KARTA HU'N KI WO ISS GHAZAL PE NAZAR E SAANI KARE'N AUR ISLAH KAR KE RAHNUMAI KARE'N MAI'N UN SAB KA SHUKR GUZAAR RAHUNGA .

MUHABBAT MEIN BATAU'N KAYA ,KE KAYA HASIL NAZAR AAYA !
TADAP, AANSU, UDAASI  AUR  ZAKHM E DIL NAZAR AAYA !

NAZAR  QATIL, ADAA QATIL, ZABA'N JAADU  BHARI  USKI !!
MUHABBAT KE HAR EK PAHLU SE WO QATIL NAZAR AAYA !!

NA JAANE KITNE RANGO MEI'N  RANGI LAGTI HAI YE DUNIYA !
DUSHALA   PEYAAR   KA  ODHEY  HUE   BATIL   NAZAR   AAYA !!

KALAM  E  PAAK  KI  AAYAAT  jo  LAB  PER  MERE  AAYI'N !
MUJHE HAR MAUJ KE AAGHOSH MEI'N SAHIL NAZAR AAYA !!

MAI'N TASHNA LAB CHALAA AAYA HU'N "TANHAA"  MAUJ E DARIYA SE !
MUJHE  JAB  PEYAAS  KA  MAARA  HUA  SAHIL  NAZAR  AAYA !!

REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA"
F.H SIDDIQUI SAHAAB ,SAINI SAHAAB ,PARVAAZ SAHAAB AAP SAB KA RAHNUMAI KARNE KE LIYE AUR DAD DENE KE LIYE MAI'N TAH E DIL SE SHUKRIYA ADAA KARTA HU'N
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