~~"MUJHE JAANA HAI"~~

by k.shael on December 31, 2008, 08:39:51 AM
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Ye kalaam ek mehbooba ki halat ko bayan kar raha hai, jab uska yaar
use chod kar mout ke saath jaa raha hota hai, wo kaise use rokti hai
ye likha hai maine,

umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayega...

MAJAK HOTA HAI HASNE KE LIYE, PAR TERA MAJAK
MERI JAAN LIYE JAA RAHA HAI, MERI RO-RO KE HUI
HAI BURI HALAT AUR TU TO BADI CHAIN KI NEEND
SOYE JA RAHA HAI,

CHAL UTH ZALDI SE LE CHAL MUJHE GHAR ANDHERA
HUE JAA RAHA HAI, TERI KHAMOSHI KO DEKHKAR
MERA DIL BAITHA JAA RAHA HAI,

ARE YE KYA TU AAG KE KARIB KYUN JAA RAHA HAI,
MEIN SAATH TERE CHALNE KO KEH RAHI HO AUR TU
WIDAAYI LIYE JAA RAHA HAI,

DEKH KE NADANIYAA TERI MERA PAL-PAL KHOUFF
ME GUJRA JAA RAHA HAI, U HI NAHI APNO KO CHODA
KE JAYA KARTE KYUN PAGALPAN DIKHA RAHA HAI,

AABHI MILE HUE HAME WAQT HI KITNA HUA HAI, JO
TU “MUJHE JAANA HAI – MUJHE JAANA HAI” HAI KI
RATT LAGA RAHA HAI…

K.SHAEL
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2008, 08:43:36 AM »
Bohat bohat khoob shally tumhari batein dil ko chu gayee.  Clapping Smiley Jis tarah se tumne ek mehboob ki maut pe uski mehbooba ke dard ko bayan kiya hain woh sach much kamaal hain. Terrific thoughts plz keep writing on particular subject like this. God bless you
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2008, 09:23:12 AM »
k.shaelji.....MOUT JALDI KISI KO BHI YAKEEN NAHIN HOTI.

mujko  to nahin hai yakeen teri mout par,mein kyu maanu,
wada jo tune kiya tha,meri umertak,mera saath nibhaneka.
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«Reply #3 on: December 31, 2008, 10:42:47 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on December 31, 2008, 08:39:51 AM
Ye kalaam ek mehbooba ki halat ko bayan kar raha hai, jab uska yaar
use chod kar mout ke saath jaa raha hota hai, wo kaise use rokti hai
ye likha hai maine,

umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayega...

MAJAK HOTA HAI HASNE KE LIYE, PAR TERA MAJAK
MERI JAAN LIYE JAA RAHA HAI, MERI RO-RO KE HUI
HAI BURI HALAT AUR TU TO BADI CHAIN KI NEEND
SOYE JA RAHA HAI,

CHAL UTH ZALDI SE LE CHAL MUJHE GHAR ANDHERA
HUE JAA RAHA HAI, TERI KHAMOSHI KO DEKHKAR
MERA DIL BAITHA JAA RAHA HAI,

ARE YE KYA TU AAG KE KARIB KYUN JAA RAHA HAI,
MEIN SAATH TERE CHALNE KO KEH RAHI HO AUR TU
WIDAAYI LIYE JAA RAHA HAI,

DEKH KE NADANIYAA TERI MERA PAL-PAL KHOUFF
ME GUJRA JAA RAHA HAI, U HI NAHI APNO KO CHODA
KE JAYA KARTE KYUN PAGALPAN DIKHA RAHA HAI,

AABHI MILE HUE HAME WAQT HI KITNA HUA HAI, JO
TU “MUJHE JAANA HAI – MUJHE JAANA HAI” HAI KI
RATT LAGA RAHA HAI…

K.SHAEL



SHALLY aap neh bahut hi gehri baat keh di hai ...
jab aap ki dil ki gehrayi meh ja kar hum yeh dard dekhtey hai
sab gum fikey hai, hum yeh abb dekhtey hai

aisa waqt na kabhi kisi peh aaye
koi phool na waqt sey pehley murjhaye

wada kar key, har koi usey nibhaye
aisa ruth key na koi kabhi jaye



jasbir singh
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«Reply #4 on: December 31, 2008, 11:18:59 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on December 31, 2008, 08:39:51 AM
Ye kalaam ek mehbooba ki halat ko bayan kar raha hai, jab uska yaar
use chod kar mout ke saath jaa raha hota hai, wo kaise use rokti hai
ye likha hai maine,

umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayega...

MAJAK HOTA HAI HASNE KE LIYE, PAR TERA MAJAK
MERI JAAN LIYE JAA RAHA HAI, MERI RO-RO KE HUI
HAI BURI HALAT AUR TU TO BADI CHAIN KI NEEND
SOYE JA RAHA HAI,

CHAL UTH ZALDI SE LE CHAL MUJHE GHAR ANDHERA
HUE JAA RAHA HAI, TERI KHAMOSHI KO DEKHKAR
MERA DIL BAITHA JAA RAHA HAI,

ARE YE KYA TU AAG KE KARIB KYUN JAA RAHA HAI,
MEIN SAATH TERE CHALNE KO KEH RAHI HO AUR TU
WIDAAYI LIYE JAA RAHA HAI,

DEKH KE NADANIYAA TERI MERA PAL-PAL KHOUFF
ME GUJRA JAA RAHA HAI, U HI NAHI APNO KO CHODA
KE JAYA KARTE KYUN PAGALPAN DIKHA RAHA HAI,

AABHI MILE HUE HAME WAQT HI KITNA HUA HAI, JO
TU “MUJHE JAANA HAI – MUJHE JAANA HAI” HAI KI
RATT LAGA RAHA HAI…

K.SHAEL



Waah Waah Sach Mein Yaar Ye Shayari Dil Paar Kar gayi,.
Nice One Shally Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Is Kalaam Ko Jawaab Dena, Mushkil Hai,.
Bahot Badhiya Likha Hai Aapne Nice One,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 01, 2009, 12:44:46 AM »
Is Duniya Se Bohat Door Jaa Raha Hoon Main,.
Tere Liye Jannat Mein Ghar Banaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Tu Kyun Roti Hai Pagli Meri Maut Par Aakar,.
Tu Bhi Aayegi Is Liye, Jannat Ko Aur Bhi Sajaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Ab Kabr Pe Aakar Rooh Ko Aur Na Tardpa "Jaana,.
Ek Ek Lamha Andar Badi Bechaaini Se Bitaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Jab Main Zinda Tha, Tune To Kabhi Meri Parwaah Na Ki,.
Maut Par Jo Teri Mohabbat Dekhi, Abto Bohat Patchtaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Yaadon Mein Rahoonga Hamesha Teri, Ye Wadaa Raha "Azeem Ka,.
Bas Nazron Se Hi To Door Jaa Raha Hoon Main,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-


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«Reply #6 on: January 01, 2009, 09:50:39 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 01, 2009, 12:44:46 AM
Is Duniya Se Bohat Door Jaa Raha Hoon Main,.
Tere Liye Jannat Mein Ghar Banaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Tu Kyun Roti Hai Pagli Meri Maut Par Aakar,.
Tu Bhi Aayegi Is Liye, Jannat Ko Aur Bhi Sajaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Ab Kabr Pe Aakar Rooh Ko Aur Na Tardpa "Jaana,.
Ek Ek Lamha Andar Badi Bechaaini Se Bitaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Jab Main Zinda Tha, Tune To Kabhi Meri Parwaah Na Ki,.
Maut Par Jo Teri Mohabbat Dekhi, Abto Bohat Patchtaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Yaadon Mein Rahoonga Hamesha Teri, Ye Wadaa Raha "Azeem Ka,.
Bas Nazron Se Hi To Door Jaa Raha Hoon Main,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-




Bohatttttttttttttt khoob chote shally ke kalam ka isse behtar aur khoobsurat jawab ho hi nahi sakta I am proud of u.
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«Reply #7 on: January 01, 2009, 11:02:40 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 01, 2009, 09:50:39 AM
Bohatttttttttttttt khoob chote shally ke kalam ka isse behtar aur khoobsurat jawab ho hi nahi sakta I am proud of u.

Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
Khushi Hui Ke Aapko Hamaara Jawaab Pasand Aaya,.
Bas Bhai Duaa Kijiye,.
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«Reply #8 on: January 02, 2009, 09:55:37 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 01, 2009, 12:44:46 AM
Is Duniya Se Bohat Door Jaa Raha Hoon Main,.
Tere Liye Jannat Mein Ghar Banaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Tu Kyun Roti Hai Pagli Meri Maut Par Aakar,.
Tu Bhi Aayegi Is Liye, Jannat Ko Aur Bhi Sajaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Ab Kabr Pe Aakar Rooh Ko Aur Na Tardpa "Jaana,.
Ek Ek Lamha Andar Badi Bechaaini Se Bitaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Jab Main Zinda Tha, Tune To Kabhi Meri Parwaah Na Ki,.
Maut Par Jo Teri Mohabbat Dekhi, Abto Bohat Patchtaa Raha Hoon Main,.

Yaadon Mein Rahoonga Hamesha Teri, Ye Wadaa Raha "Azeem Ka,.
Bas Nazron Se Hi To Door Jaa Raha Hoon Main,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-




 Applause  Applause  Applause  Clapping Smiley

Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Bahut Umda aur Lajawaab

Inn lines ka jawab hi nahi mil raha kya likho..
Sorry late reply ke liye,

Na jaa tu door mujhse ye judayi sahi na jayegi,
Teri ye pyaari si gudiya tanha mar jayegi...

Teri har ek baat har yaad bahut rulayegi,
jab bhi kabhi saanse meri tujhe doodna chahengi,

Ho gayi hai agar koi khata mujhse to de de saja
par tere jaane ki saja mujhse sahi na jaayegi...

Lout aa tu ae dilbhar ye khaani meri sadiyo ki
pal bhar me khatam ho jaayegi...

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: January 02, 2009, 01:33:17 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on January 02, 2009, 09:55:37 AM
Applause  Applause  Applause  Clapping Smiley

Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Bahut Umda aur Lajawaab

Inn lines ka jawab hi nahi mil raha kya likho..
Sorry late reply ke liye,

Na jaa tu door mujhse ye judayi sahi na jayegi,
Teri ye pyaari si gudiya tanha mar jayegi...

Teri har ek baat har yaad bahut rulayegi,
jab bhi kabhi saanse meri tujhe doodna chahengi,

Ho gayi hai agar koi khata mujhse to de de saja
par tere jaane ki saja mujhse sahi na jaayegi...

Lout aa tu ae dilbhar ye khaani meri sadiyo ki
pal bhar me khatam ho jaayegi...

Shally.


Nice One Shally Partner,.

Jeete Jee To Duniya Mein Milna Mumkin Na Hamaara,.
Bas Tujhse Milne Ki Aas Liye Mujhe Duniya Se Jaana Hoga.,

Sunaa Hai Jannath Badi Khubsurat Jagaah Hai "Jaan,.
Tu Bhi Kahaan Kam, Tere Liye Mujhe Jannath Ko Aur Sajaana Hoga,.

Aaj Tu Meri Is Choti Si Doori Par Afsos Na Karna "Jaan,.
Maut Ke Baad Ki Ghadiyaan, Hume Saath Saath Hamesha Bitaana Hoga,.

Main Tujhse Mohabbat Karta Tha, Tujhse Hi Karte Karte Maraa Hoon,.
Saath Tujhe Kaise Le Jaata,.
Raasta Bada Katheen Hai, Tu Bhi Aayegi Isliye Mushkilon Ko Hataana Hoga,.

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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2009, 05:53:32 AM »
 

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob shally wonderfull lines..
Bohat khoob Azeem bhai...khoob likha hai
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2009, 12:15:33 AM »
Shukriya Didijaan,.
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2009, 01:46:24 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on December 31, 2008, 08:39:51 AM
Ye kalaam ek mehbooba ki halat ko bayan kar raha hai, jab uska yaar
use chod kar mout ke saath jaa raha hota hai, wo kaise use rokti hai
ye likha hai maine,

umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayega...

MAJAK HOTA HAI HASNE KE LIYE, PAR TERA MAJAK
MERI JAAN LIYE JAA RAHA HAI, MERI RO-RO KE HUI
HAI BURI HALAT AUR TU TO BADI CHAIN KI NEEND
SOYE JA RAHA HAI,

CHAL UTH ZALDI SE LE CHAL MUJHE GHAR ANDHERA
HUE JAA RAHA HAI, TERI KHAMOSHI KO DEKHKAR
MERA DIL BAITHA JAA RAHA HAI,

ARE YE KYA TU AAG KE KARIB KYUN JAA RAHA HAI,
MEIN SAATH TERE CHALNE KO KEH RAHI HO AUR TU
WIDAAYI LIYE JAA RAHA HAI,

DEKH KE NADANIYAA TERI MERA PAL-PAL KHOUFF
ME GUJRA JAA RAHA HAI, U HI NAHI APNO KO CHODA
KE JAYA KARTE KYUN PAGALPAN DIKHA RAHA HAI,

AABHI MILE HUE HAME WAQT HI KITNA HUA HAI, JO
TU “MUJHE JAANA HAI – MUJHE JAANA HAI” HAI KI
RATT LAGA RAHA HAI…

K.SHAEL


Nice one Shally...aapne judaai ke ye manzar jahan maut beech aa rahi ho, badi achchi tarah se likha hai

Waise Ise "Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayari" main post karna samajh nahin aaya.

More suitable for Shayari-e-Dard Section, so moving it there.
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2009, 01:53:23 PM »
bahut hii khoob touching lines

and janasheenji nice answered
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2009, 01:57:48 PM »
Thank U JI,.
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