~~"MUJHE JAANA HAI"~~ -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Roja

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«Reply #15 on: January 22, 2009, 02:16:46 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on December 31, 2008, 08:39:51 AM

Ye kalaam ek mehbooba ki halat ko bayan kar raha hai, jab uska yaar
use chod kar mout ke saath jaa raha hota hai, wo kaise use rokti hai
ye likha hai maine,

umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayega...

MAJAK HOTA HAI HASNE KE LIYE, PAR TERA MAJAK
MERI JAAN LIYE JAA RAHA HAI, MERI RO-RO KE HUI
HAI BURI HALAT AUR TU TO BADI CHAIN KI NEEND
SOYE JA RAHA HAI,

CHAL UTH ZALDI SE LE CHAL MUJHE GHAR ANDHERA
HUE JAA RAHA HAI, TERI KHAMOSHI KO DEKHKAR
MERA DIL BAITHA JAA RAHA HAI,

ARE YE KYA TU AAG KE KARIB KYUN JAA RAHA HAI,
MEIN SAATH TERE CHALNE KO KEH RAHI HO AUR TU
WIDAAYI LIYE JAA RAHA HAI,

DEKH KE NADANIYAA TERI MERA PAL-PAL KHOUFF
ME GUJRA JAA RAHA HAI, U HI NAHI APNO KO CHODA
KE JAYA KARTE KYUN PAGALPAN DIKHA RAHA HAI,

AABHI MILE HUE HAME WAQT HI KITNA HUA HAI, JO
TU “MUJHE JAANA HAI – MUJHE JAANA HAI” HAI KI
RATT LAGA RAHA HAI…

K.SHAEL

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shael ... Each line touched my heart.. It is very Lovely and emotionaly created,, I liked last para
Keep up dear.


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_Vicky_

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Re: ~~"MUJHE JAANA HAI"~~

«Reply #16 on: June 29, 2009, 06:50:12 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on December 31, 2008, 08:39:51 AM

wah Shally.. Bahut Hi Umda Jazzbaat Kaagaz Par Bikhere Hain Dear.. Aaj aapka Yeh Qalaam Achanak Aankhon ke saamne aa gaya.. Aur Jab padha to Zubaan se ek hi lafz Nikla Ki Wah..!! Usual Smile

Dard ko aur Judaai ke dard ko bakhoobi pesh kiya hai dear.. Lajawab peshkash hai.. Bahut Bahut khoooooooob.. Applause

Azeem Bhai aapne Bhi Bahut Hi Khoooooob Sath diya hai Shally Ka,.. Bahut Khoooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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madhuwesh

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Re: ~~"MUJHE JAANA HAI"~~

«Reply #17 on: June 29, 2009, 07:43:49 AM »

Wah wah Shally ji,very beautiful creation.excellent.Azeem bhai ne bhi kya khoob
likha , Clapping Smiley

:clapping:keep it up.


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Re: ~~"MUJHE JAANA HAI"~~

«Reply #18 on: June 29, 2009, 07:56:51 AM »

bakhoobi zajbaat ubhare hain apne kalam me shally..bahoot khoob


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