<>*Mujhe manzur teri ye numaish hai*<>

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<>*Mujhe manzur teri ye numaish hai*<>


Muskurai thi main kuch pal k liye kal
Aaj fir wahi dard wahi gum ki baarish hai

Har taraf hai andhera aur sannata mere ass paas
Na kahin bhi koi thodisi roshni ki gunjaish hai

Har armaan mere dil k ab to bikhar gaye
Ab na koi tamanna hai na hi koi khwaish hai

Apne hi karmon ki sazaa pai hai maine sbhi
Aur de saza mujhe rub se ye hi guzarish hai

Bht lamba hai safar aur bht hi kadi dhuup hai
Lekin chhanw milne kin a kahin bhi koi gunjaish hai

Jo likha hai mere naseeb me uss kanha ne
Mujhe manzuur uski hare k farmaish hai

Sare baazarr mujhe neelaam karwana chahta hai wo
To thik hai *kasak* mujhe manzur teri ye numaish hai….
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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2010, 08:37:49 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Anuji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sabak Mohabbat Ka Mujhe Aaj Bhi Yaad Hai
Tujhse mil nahi sakte jaanta hoon par phir bhi honto par fariyaad hai

Ashkon Ko Behne deta hoon ke ab yehi behtar hai
Shukar hai Yaadon Ki Duniya Aj bhi mere Dil Mein Abaad hai...

Uss Shaks Ko kya Saza De Jo Aaj bhi bahut Aziz hai
Kabhi Dekh Meri Aankhon mein,Qaid inme Ashqo Ki barsaat hai

Mohabbat karne Wale To Har Haal mein Mohabbat Karenge
Duniya Ke Jhoote Rasm-o-Riwaazo Se Woh Azaad Hai...

"Khwaish" Ishq Kar Par Kuch haasil karne Ki Ummed Naa Rakh!!!
Jo Sirf Haasil karna Jaane, Woh Ishq Mein Barbaad Hai...
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2010, 09:17:37 AM »
mastam mastttttttttttttttt reply khwaish ji..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
lijiye humbhi kuch likh baithe aaj aapke sath sath...
kuch dard hamare bhi kum ho jayen shayad..

Kehne ko hain mehfilein saji mere naam se
Lekin jab bhi dekha to khudko tanha hi paya

Anjane logon me dhudndhti rahi main dil ka sukuun
Apno me to khud ko sirf saza ka haqdaar hi paya

Lakeeron me hathon ki dhundhti rahi khushi ka ek lamha
Khudko jhuti umeedon pe hamesha sisakta hi paya

Kehti rahi khudse kai jhut k dil behla rahe khwaishon se
Lekin fir bhi dil ki *kasak* ko har baar aur bhi tez hi paaya
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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2010, 09:37:20 AM »
je baat ....wah jiii bahut khoob..

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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2010, 09:39:02 AM »
je baat ....wah jiii bahut khoob..



shukriya ji abhi ji aapka bht bht shukriya.......aapne pasand kiya ise
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«Reply #5 on: September 29, 2010, 09:58:40 AM »
aaj se pasand karna band jiii aap bas shukriya karooo~
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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2010, 10:19:26 AM »
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sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyy
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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2010, 10:28:14 AM »
bahut khoob ji wah  Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2010, 11:09:45 AM »

nice one anu diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Applause Applause Applause Applause


keep it up  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

muskurate raho tum sada
kabhi na gam ka saaya ho
har koi deta rahe sath tumhen
koi dhoka na de paya ho
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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2010, 11:16:38 AM »
Su vaat chhe Kasak-di...superb..
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<>*Mujhe manzur teri ye numaish hai*<>


Muskurai thi main kuch pal k liye kal
Aaj fir wahi dard wahi gum ki baarish hai

Har taraf hai andhera aur sannata mere ass paas
Na kahin bhi koi thodisi roshni ki gunjaish hai

Har armaan mere dil k ab to bikhar gaye
Ab na koi tamanna hai na hi koi khwaish hai

Apne hi karmon ki sazaa pai hai maine sbhi
Aur de saza mujhe rub se ye hi guzarish hai

Bht lamba hai safar aur bht hi kadi dhuup hai
Lekin chhanw milne kin a kahin bhi koi gunjaish hai

Jo likha hai mere naseeb me uss kanha ne
Mujhe manzuur uski hare k farmaish hai

Sare baazarr mujhe neelaam karwana chahta hai wo
To thik hai *kasak* mujhe manzur teri ye numaish hai….
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«Reply #10 on: September 29, 2010, 03:14:40 PM »
Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai..... bahut khoob likha hai jee aapne dil se daad..... Sabhi ashaar dilfareb lage hume... bahut khoob..... Dil se daad kabool kijiye.....

Aapki is kalaam meiN starting sher kam hai.... hum kahne ki koshish karte hai...           



Bin raah ki manzil khudaya kaisi azmaish hai
Aik wohi to mere dil ki aakhri khawahish hai

     


Kafi umdaa likha hai aapne dil se daad kabool kijiye.......
Likhati rahiye......
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         


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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2010, 05:40:17 AM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne Kasak ji... aapke dono post mast hain par comparatively mujhe ye jyaada pasand aayaa... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... hamaare dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita..... bahut khoob....!!!

mastam mastttttttttttttttt reply khwaish ji..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
lijiye humbhi kuch likh baithe aaj aapke sath sath...
kuch dard hamare bhi kum ho jayen shayad..

Kehne ko hain mehfilein saji mere naam se
Lekin jab bhi dekha to khudko tanha hi paya

Anjane logon me dhudndhti rahi main dil ka sukuun
Apno me to khud ko sirf saza ka haqdaar hi paya

Lakeeron me hathon ki dhundhti rahi khushi ka ek lamha
Khudko jhuti umeedon pe hamesha sisakta hi paya

Kehti rahi khudse kai jhut k dil behla rahe khwaishon se
Lekin fir bhi dil ki *kasak* ko har baar aur bhi tez hi paaya
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2010, 08:26:35 PM »
bahut hi khubsurat likha hai aapne kasak ji... !

yahi sawaal pucchha har baar, kya tu bhi mere begair adhoori hai,
jawaab main samjha nahi, jo usne kaha ki ab uska bichhadna jaroori hai... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2010, 03:55:22 AM »
bahut khoob ji wah  Applause
nice one anu diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Applause Applause Applause Applause


keep it up  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

muskurate raho tum sada
kabhi na gam ka saaya ho
har koi deta rahe sath tumhen
koi dhoka na de paya ho

Su vaat chhe Kasak-di...superb..
 icon_king icon_queen....
bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne Kasak ji... aapke dono post mast hain par comparatively mujhe ye jyaada pasand aayaa... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... hamaare dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita..... bahut khoob....!!!


thnku baadai ji...rahul...koyal..and hriday ....for appreeciating my work...thnx alot ree....
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2010, 03:57:01 AM »
Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai..... bahut khoob likha hai jee aapne dil se daad..... Sabhi ashaar dilfareb lage hume... bahut khoob..... Dil se daad kabool kijiye.....

Aapki is kalaam meiN starting sher kam hai.... hum kahne ki koshish karte hai...           



Bin raah ki manzil khudaya kaisi azmaish hai
Aik wohi to mere dil ki aakhri khawahish hai

     


Kafi umdaa likha hai aapne dil se daad kabool kijiye.......
Likhati rahiye......
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         




shukriya shukriya shukriya aapka jo aapne dil fareb kaha hamri rachna ko....tongue3
aapko pasand aai iske liye hume khudko thnx karna chahiye k hum aapki ummed par khare utre...
haan chhoti moti galtiyan to karni padegi na humko warna aap correction kaise karenge parwaz ji....... tongue3:P
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