Mujhe Meri Duniya De Do...........NIkhaar................

by Nikhaar on April 24, 2011, 05:41:20 PM
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Khud se kar lu aaj do baatein
Bas do pal ki mujhe fursat de do
Kar saku khud se jha mulaqaate,khuch tanha palon ki izzazat de do

Din k ujaale mein chalte hai andheri raah par
Raaton ko ashq bahate hai
Saaf kar sake jo iss daag ko,mujhe ashq ka wo katra de do

Badalte din k saath badle hai
kalaayion mein bandhe rishton k dhaage
Qismat ka hai jo lekh ye, toh qismat likhne ki takhti de do

Waqt ne khilaaye jo khel wahi khelkar
hum yha tak pahuche hai
Galat ko mitaane k liye galat bhi hum ho chuke hai
Apne aks ko pehchaan sake jisme,mujhe wo aaina de do

Naapak iraadon ko pehnaate hai yha sharafat ka chola
Cheer paaye jo iss vesh ko, bas wo ek khanjar de do

Behataash aur bojhil hokar nahi jeena chahte zindagi ko
Kare jo mere rog ki dwa, mujh rogi ka wo vaidh de do

Mat do mujhe juthe dilaase,
de pao toh gunaaho k prayashchit ka mauka de do
Jee sake jha sukun se zindagi, mujhe meri wo duniya de do
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2011, 05:45:04 PM »
Good Job Nikhaar Ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2011, 06:55:22 PM »
hmm…
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good
daad dil se
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2011, 07:17:39 PM »
excellent post nikhaar.......
felings ko itne pyaare andaaz me sajaya hai shabdon se k bas har line dil me utarti chali gai...lag raha tha jaise dil se hi awaaz aarahi hai...
khudke dil ki awaaz sunn akaisa lagta hai wahi ehsaas hus tumhari ye post padhkar..kitni bar padhli aur bar bar padhte jane ka dil kar raha hai
1 of ur best creation nikhar
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2011, 07:50:40 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Nikhaar di..
Woh aina wala ashaar sabse zada acha laga..

Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2011, 09:32:53 PM »
wow good work Nikhaar
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2011, 10:46:33 AM »
bahut khub nikhaarji.....
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2011, 03:00:27 PM »
Sachai pe likhi apki ye kavita behad ruhani hai nikhaar ji bahut waqt baad apka likha kuch padhne ko mila acha laga...
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«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2011, 03:08:42 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on April 24, 2011, 05:41:20 PM

Khud se kar lu aaj do baatein
Bas do pal ki mujhe fursat de do
Kar saku khud se jha mulaqaate,khuch tanha palon ki izzazat de do

Din k ujaale mein chalte hai andheri raah par
Raaton ko ashq bahate hai
Saaf kar sake jo iss daag ko,mujhe ashq ka wo katra de do

Badalte din k saath badle hai
kalaayion mein bandhe rishton k dhaage
Qismat ka hai jo lekh ye, toh qismat likhne ki takhti de do

Waqt ne khilaaye jo khel wahi khelkar
hum yha tak pahuche hai
Galat ko mitaane k liye galat bhi hum ho chuke hai
Apne aks ko pehchaan sake jisme,mujhe wo aaina de do

Naapak iraadon ko pehnaate hai yha sharafat ka chola
Cheer paaye jo iss vesh ko, bas wo ek khanjar de do

Behataash aur bojhil hokar nahi jeena chahte zindagi ko
Kare jo mere rog ki dwa, mujh rogi ka wo vaidh de do

Mat do mujhe juthe dilaase,
de pao toh gunaaho k prayashchit ka mauka de do
Jee sake jha sukun se zindagi, mujhe meri wo duniya de do



Pooja,Iss Duniya mein Koi nahi Hoga Jo yeh Keh Sake Ke Woh "Sukoon Ki zindagi jeeta Hai" Har Ek Insaan Apni Hi pareshaaniyon mein Uljha Rehta Hai..Isliye Uss Duniya Ki umeed Hi Naa Karo jo Sirf Ek kalpana Hai..
main Umeed karta Hoon Sab theek Ho!!!!

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob..Lafzon Mein Dil Ki Baatein Keh Gaye Aap

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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2011, 05:28:47 PM »
Quote from: Niha Khan on April 24, 2011, 05:45:04 PM
Good Job Nikhaar Ji
Quote from: killbill on April 24, 2011, 06:55:22 PM
hmm…
behtaReen soch
good
daad dil se
shukriya khan ji , kb ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2011, 05:37:10 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on April 24, 2011, 07:17:39 PM
excellent post nikhaar.......
felings ko itne pyaare andaaz me sajaya hai shabdon se k bas har line dil me utarti chali gai...lag raha tha jaise dil se hi awaaz aarahi hai...
khudke dil ki awaaz sunn akaisa lagta hai wahi ehsaas hus tumhari ye post padhkar..kitni bar padhli aur bar bar padhte jane ka dil kar raha hai
1 of ur best creation nikhar

bahut bahut shukriya aapka....aapka bar bar padhna iss creation ko safal banata hai...hamesha ki tarah aaj b bakhubi samjha aapne bhavnao ko....dils se shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2011, 06:21:33 PM »
Bahut Khub Nikhar Ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2011, 05:21:25 PM »
Pooja  ek bahut he behtareen pesh-kash......dil ko chhu gayee....
pyaar.....khumaar....dard sab rango ko liye huye hai ye rachnaa...
Khud se khud ki baatein....mast khayaal hai....Nikhaar tumhaari ye poem mast Nikhar gayee hai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Maangee tou meine bhee thee meri Duniya uss khuda se
Manjoor nahi huyi koi bhi maang,majboor huaa khud se

Tu he nahi hai akeli ess jahaan mai,hain kai tujh se
Jinhe nahi mili jo thee unki manzil,puchh tu mujh se
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2011, 07:31:30 PM »
first of all ear, hi pooja dear , coming back after a long time, but good to find old pals over here.
beautifully written and well versed poem dear , sach main bahut hi khoobsoorat likha hai.


main kya karoon hansne kii aadat hai mujhko
main kya karoon mujhe rulaana nahin aata
tujhe yaad kar k ashq main baha leta hoon
kya karoon mujhe tujhko bhulaana nahin aata
kisse gila karoon main apne dil ka
kissii kii aankh main apnapan nazar nahin aata
usne toh keh diya kii 'SAAHIL' bewafa hai
mujhe sach ko dohraana bhi nahin aata
aksar main sochta qaid ho jaun main andheron main kaahin
magar kya karoon main insaan hoon thokron se nahin ghabraata
girta hoon phir ooth k chal deta hoon
main 'SALIL' hoon mujhe tham k rehna nahin aata
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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2011, 06:41:56 PM »
Quote from: ANAAM on April 28, 2011, 05:21:25 PM
Pooja  ek bahut he behtareen pesh-kash......dil ko chhu gayee....
pyaar.....khumaar....dard sab rango ko liye huye hai ye rachnaa...
Khud se khud ki baatein....mast khayaal hai....Nikhaar tumhaari ye poem mast Nikhar gayee hai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Maangee tou meine bhee thee meri Duniya uss khuda se
Manjoor nahi huyi koi bhi maang,majboor huaa khud se

Tu he nahi hai akeli ess jahaan mai,hain kai tujh se
Jinhe nahi mili jo thee unki manzil,puchh tu mujh se
shukriya Anaam ji....bahut khoob kha aapne....bahut acche se samjhaya mujhe....sach hi toh hai..mere jaise bahut hai yha...ab kya puchu aap se...chand lines mein bahut khuch keh diya aapne...anaam...ek naam...jiska koi naam nahi...phr bhi khushiyan lutata ek naam....par ummid hai uske daaman mein khushiyan jarur ho.....shukriya Anaam ji
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