Mujhe Meri Duniya De Do...........NIkhaar................

by Nikhaar on April 24, 2011, 05:41:20 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 28, 2011, 06:59:34 PM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on May 04, 2011, 07:31:30 PM
first of all ear, hi pooja dear , coming back after a long time, but good to find old pals over here.
beautifully written and well versed poem dear , sach main bahut hi khoobsoorat likha hai.


main kya karoon hansne kii aadat hai mujhko
main kya karoon mujhe rulaana nahin aata
tujhe yaad kar k ashq main baha leta hoon
kya karoon mujhe tujhko bhulaana nahin aata
kisse gila karoon main apne dil ka
kissii kii aankh main apnapan nazar nahin aata
usne toh keh diya kii 'SAAHIL' bewafa hai
mujhe sach ko dohraana bhi nahin aata
aksar main sochta qaid ho jaun main andheron main kaahin
magar kya karoon main insaan hoon thokron se nahin ghabraata
girta hoon phir ooth k chal deta hoon
main 'SALIL' hoon mujhe tham k rehna nahin aata

Shukriya Saahil ji....bahut khoob likha hai aapne....kal jis pal mein maine ye poem likhi thi...aaj phr wahi pal mere saamne hai aur inn alfaazon ko padh kar iss waqt mujhe kitna behtar feel ho rha hai wo mai bta nahi sakti.....

Andheron mein gum ho jaane ki koshish ki...par sochkar kadam ruk gaye k wo insaan ki kya jo thokron se ghabra jaaye....aur sach hai kisi k galat keh dene se hum galat nahi ho jaate....jisne vishwaas karna ho wo ek hi baar mein vishwaas kar lega...wha sach dohrana toh dur...shayad sach-juth ki baat ki bhi jarurat nahi..sach mein bahut khoob likha hai aapne....bahut bahut shukriya...
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waah waah waah kyaa kehne Pooja ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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