mujhe palko ke kinaare ashkon me paaoge... Intezar !

by Intezar on April 05, 2011, 08:18:15 PM
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kab tak yun mujhse khafa rahoge tum
kab tak khud ko mujhse chhupaaoge
jo kar liya humne is duniya se pardaa
phir tum kiske chehre se parda hataaoge

jo behta hai tumhaare ashko me rawaan
kaise meri yaado se tum nikal paaoge
jo kabhi mere seene se lag kar roye tum
mere aansuon se phir tum bhig jaaoge

tanha jab mere khayaal me doob jaaoge
to khud ko tum kaun si saza sunaaoge
chaaho ge to bahut tum kareeb aana lekin
chah kar bhi mujh tak pahunch na paaoge

jo gunzta hai ek shor in fizaaon me phir
khud ko kaise tum khaamosh rakh paaoge
uthoge jab bhi tum kisi gehri neend se
mujhe palko ke kinaare ashkon me paaoge

main tay kar jaaonga ik roz sadiyon ka faasla
lekin bas ek tum hi Intezar me baaki reh jaaoge… !


Shukriya
Intezar !



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ANAAM
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2011, 08:27:41 PM »
mastaaaaaaam mast poem.....bhai Intezaar ji....mazaa aa gaya padh kar...Dil se daad Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2011, 08:45:37 PM »
Shukriya Anaam Bhai... aapne pasand kiya bahut khushi huyi... dil se bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2011, 03:32:29 AM »
wah wah kya baat hai intzarji... dil tak gai aapki baat....

bahut khub......
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2011, 07:09:18 AM »
Wah Kya Baat Hai Inezar Bhai Mast Likha Hai Applause Applause
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2011, 10:50:03 AM »
Bahut umda intezaar ji...
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2011, 12:59:10 PM »
bht hi khoobsurat peshkesh intezaar ji...
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2011, 05:22:09 PM »


kab tak yun mujhse khafa rahoge tum
kab tak khud ko mujhse chhupaaoge
jo kar liya humne is duniya se pardaa
phir tum kiske chehre se parda hataaoge

jo behta hai tumhaare ashko me rawaan
kaise meri yaado se tum nikal paaoge
jo kabhi mere seene se lag kar roye tum
mere aansuon se phir tum bhig jaaoge

tanha jab mere khayaal me doob jaaoge
to khud ko tum kaun si saza sunaaoge
chaaho ge to bahut tum kareeb aana lekin
chah kar bhi mujh tak pahunch na paaoge

jo gunzta hai ek shor in fizaaon me phir
khud ko kaise tum khaamosh rakh paaoge
uthoge jab bhi tum kisi gehri neend se
mujhe palko ke kinaare ashkon me paaoge

main tay kar jaaonga ik roz sadiyon ka faasla
lekin bas ek tum hi Intezar me baaki reh jaaoge… !


Shukriya
Intezar !





Bahot hi khoooobbb..... ek ek lafz mein bahod dard hai....

meri taraf se  Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2011, 01:28:18 PM »
manjum ji shukriya ki aapke dil tak baat gayi...

Intezar !

wah wah kya baat hai intzarji... dil tak gai aapki baat....

bahut khub......
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2011, 01:38:47 PM »
shukriya Rishi bhai aapne pasand kiya...

Intezar !

Wah Kya Baat Hai Inezar Bhai Mast Likha Hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2011, 01:40:01 PM »
Shukriya Geet ji aapne kisi kaabil samjha bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Bahut umda intezaar ji...
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2011, 01:46:42 PM »
Alam ji aapne dard ko mehsus kiya aur kareeb se padha bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !


Bahot hi khoooobbb..... ek ek lafz mein bahod dard hai....

meri taraf se  Applause Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2011, 01:49:50 PM »
manzil-e-ishq ji... Bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

Intezar !

bht hi khoobsurat peshkesh intezaar ji...
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2011, 01:57:43 PM »
boht acha likha hai intzaR ji apne
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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2011, 01:58:29 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Intezar Ji..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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