~~Mujhe Patthar Bana Dena~~

by Aryaan on November 11, 2007, 02:24:05 AM

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Aryaan

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Bina Jurm-o-Khata, Khud Ko Koyi Aisi Saza Dena
Bohat Mushkil Hai Meri Jaan Tumhein Bilkul Bhula Dena
Mere Maula! Agar Tu Ne Dobara Zindagi Bakhshi
Tau Bas Itni Guzarish Hai, Mujhe Patthar Bana Dena
Main Zehni Taur Par Khud Ko Zara Taiyaar Kar Loon Ga
Bicharh Jane Se Kuch Pehle Mere Humdam Bata Dena


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~*~Mujhe Patthar Bana Dena~*~

«Reply #1 on: November 11, 2007, 06:09:15 PM »

bahut khoob aryan,its so gud to read u aftr sooooooooooo much long time

ya khuda agar shama hai toh mujhe mom bana dena
jo ban jaye wo gulshan toh mujhe bhavra bana dena
kya hai bisaat meri uss zaalim k aage
jo ban jaye wo pathaar to mujhe sheesha bana dena


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Aryaan

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«Reply #2 on: November 11, 2007, 06:24:48 PM »

Thank you so much Phoenix...

Aap ne bhi bohat acha likha..


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phoenix

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«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2007, 06:26:55 PM »

thnx for appreciation


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khwahish

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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2007, 07:08:39 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB ARYAAN...BAHUT ACHE PHOENIX


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phoenix

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«Reply #5 on: November 11, 2007, 07:33:53 PM »

thnk u ji


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Affluent

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«Reply #6 on: November 11, 2007, 08:45:29 PM »

aryaan and phoenix... gr8 job !!!

reit ki tarah na jaane kab,fisal gaya
payar ka mausam aa kar gujar gaya

chord kar kuch yaadein apni bewaffai ki
mera humdum, sab kuch loot le gaya...


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Pooja

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«Reply #7 on: November 12, 2007, 03:32:22 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... Aryaan, Phoenix and Affluent bahoot hi acha likha hai app tino ne...
tino ne hi bahoot touching likhahai... Shabd aor bhawnaye alag magar ek hi dard!! Good job!!!

App tino ki likhi hue shayri se hi shabd le rahi hu :

Na banana pathar na hi mujhe sheesha banana
Na banana koi bhanwara na hi mom banana
Bana sake jo to mere liye thori si jagah uske dil mai banana
Dekhein mujhe ek baar wo dil ki najar se, bas ek aise najar banana


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khwahish

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«Reply #8 on: November 12, 2007, 06:46:41 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB!!SAB NE BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI..EK KOSHISH HAMARE TARAF SE BHI...

BAHUT UDAAS HAI KOI,
TERE DOOR JAANE SE,

HO SAKE TO LAUT AA
KISI BAHANE SE...

DARD APNA SABHAAL KAR
RAKHTA THA MAIN
YUH DARR KE ZAMAANE SE,
AB TO MAIN TANHA SA REH GAYA HOON,
TUJHSE DOOR JAANE SE..

TUJHE NA ROK PAAYA MAIN,
JAANE KYON PATHAR SA BAN KE REH GAYA THA,
TUJHSE YUH BICHAD JAANE SE..

TU LAAKH KHAFA SAHI,BAS EK NAZAR
TO DEKH LE MUD KE,
KOI TOOT SA GAYA HAI,
TERE ROOTH JAANE SE :cry:


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Rajbir

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«Reply #9 on: November 12, 2007, 07:00:41 PM »

Aryaan, Phoenix, Affluent, Pooja & Khwaish

Great work by all of you !

Khwaish tumhari koshish bahut achchi thee :D


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Pooja

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«Reply #10 on: November 12, 2007, 07:03:56 PM »

shukaria Veer ji!! wah kaya bat hai bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!!!


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Aryaan

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«Reply #11 on: November 13, 2007, 01:29:39 AM »

Bohat shukriya Khwaish, Affluent, Pooja & Rajbir...

Khwaish, Affluent & Pooja... kya khoob likha hai aap ne bhi...


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Affluent

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«Reply #12 on: November 13, 2007, 04:05:53 PM »

Thanks Aryan, khwaish, Rajbir and Pooja

Pooja aapke coments ache lage..thanks again

pathar uski nigaah ka
dil-sheesha mera tord gaya
kanjar uski vaffa ka
bewafai peeche chord gaya
palat kar na dekha usne kabhi
zinda hu ya main saansein chord gaya