mujhe rulakar wo bhi rota bahut hai.......mann

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Mujhe rulakar wo  bhi shayad rota bahut  hai.
Uski aankhen surkh hon aisa bhi hota bahut hai.

Mujhse kahta hai ki nange paon na ja safar par,
Mere raste  main kante  wo bota bahut  hai.

Jab sitam hampar wo kar leta hai ji bhar ke,
Us  roz wo chain ki neend  sota bahut  hai.

Mujhse kahta hai samndar mai kai gauhar chhupe hain,
Ye kahkar wo samndar main mujhe dubota bahut hai.

Har daag mere daaman par uska hi diya hai,
Par bade jatan se daagon ko wo dhota bahut hai.

“mann” ko hasil karna kyonki aasan bahut tha,
Mujhe pa pa kar har baar wo khota bahut hai.
 
Mann
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2014, 07:13:09 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2014, 07:14:57 PM »
bahut shukriya saini sahab....

sath rahiyega...
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2014, 07:57:54 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on July 09, 2014, 07:09:00 PM
Mujhe rulakar wo  bhi shayad rota bahut  hai.
Uski aankhen surkh hon aisa bhi hota bahut hai.

Mujhse kahta hai ki nange paon na ja safar par,
Mere raste  main kante  wo bota bahut  hai.

Jab sitam hampar wo kar leta hai ji bhar ke,
Us  roz wo chain ki neend  sota bahut  hai.

Mujhse kahta hai samndar mai kai gauhar chhupe hain,
Ye kahkar wo samndar main mujhe dubota bahut hai.

Har daag mere daaman par uska hi diya hai,
Par bade jatan se daagon ko wo dhota bahut hai.

“mann” ko hasil karna kyonki aasan bahut tha,
Mujhe pa pa kar har baar wo khota bahut hai.
 
Mann
Bahut hi Umdaa..
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2014, 11:23:39 PM »
wah waah waaah kyaa baat hai.
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2014, 01:37:19 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on July 09, 2014, 07:09:00 PM
Mujhe rulakar wo  bhi shayad rota bahut  hai.
Uski aankhen surkh hon aisa bhi hota bahut hai.

Mujhse kahta hai ki nange paon na ja safar par,
Mere raste  main kante  wo bota bahut  hai.

Jab sitam hampar wo kar leta hai ji bhar ke,
Us  roz wo chain ki neend  sota bahut  hai.

Mujhse kahta hai samndar mai kai gauhar chhupe hain,
Ye kahkar wo samndar main mujhe dubota bahut hai.

Har daag mere daaman par uska hi diya hai,
Par bade jatan se daagon ko wo dhota bahut hai.

“mann” ko hasil karna kyonki aasan bahut tha,
Mujhe pa pa kar har baar wo khota bahut hai.
 
Mann


nice,sir
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2014, 03:49:35 AM »

Mann jee Aadaab ... !

Bade hi dardbhare khayaayoN ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne ...
Achchi kalaam huyi hai ...
Hume matla aur maqta behad khoob lage ...
Humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2014, 12:14:22 PM »
waah... bahut khoob..
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2014, 03:33:42 PM »
gud --MM
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2014, 07:00:34 PM »
shukriya sagarji
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2014, 08:55:03 PM »
बहुत खूब.....
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2014, 08:57:16 PM »
Mujhe rulakar wo  bhi shayad rota bahut  hai.
Uski aankhen surkh hon aisa bhi hota bahut hai.

Mujhse kahta hai ki nange paon na ja safar par,
Mere raste  main kante  wo bota bahut  hai.

Jab sitam hampar wo kar leta hai ji bhar ke,
Us  roz wo chain ki neend  sota bahut  hai.

Mujhse kahta hai samndar mai kai gauhar chhupe hain,
Ye kahkar wo samndar main mujhe dubota bahut hai.

Har daag mere daaman par uska hi diya hai,
Par bade jatan se daagon ko wo dhota bahut hai.

“mann” ko hasil karna kyonki aasan bahut tha,
Mujhe pa pa kar har baar wo khota bahut hai.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoooob mann ji ek rau ke saath daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2014, 11:45:39 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on July 09, 2014, 07:09:00 PM
Mujhe rulakar wo  bhi shayad rota bahut  hai.
Uski aankhen surkh hon aisa bhi hota bahut hai.

Mujhse kahta hai ki nange paon na ja safar par,
Mere raste  main kante  wo bota bahut  hai.

Jab sitam hampar wo kar leta hai ji bhar ke,
Us  roz wo chain ki neend  sota bahut  hai.

Mujhse kahta hai samndar mai kai gauhar chhupe hain,
Ye kahkar wo samndar main mujhe dubota bahut hai.

Har daag mere daaman par uska hi diya hai,
Par bade jatan se daagon ko wo dhota bahut hai.

“mann” ko hasil karna kyonki aasan bahut tha,
Mujhe pa pa kar har baar wo khota bahut hai.
 
Mann

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Excellent composition Sir.
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2014, 03:21:15 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on July 09, 2014, 07:09:00 PM
Mujhe rulakar wo  bhi shayad rota bahut  hai.
Uski aankhen surkh hon aisa bhi hota bahut hai.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Mujhse kahta hai ki nange paon na ja safar par,
Mere raste  main kante  wo bota bahut  hai.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Jab sitam hampar wo kar leta hai ji bhar ke,
Us  roz wo chain ki neend  sota bahut  hai.
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))haan ji sahi hai!tumhein torch er karne me.n mazaa aataa baht hai!
Mujhse kahta hai samndar mai kai gauhar chhupe hain,
Ye kahkar wo samndar main mujhe dubota bahut hai.
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))ab khud bewakoof bano ge to koi kyaa kare gaa!
Har daag mere daaman par uska hi diya hai,
Par bade jatan se daagon ko wo dhota bahut hai.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
“mann” ko hasil karna kyonki aasan bahut tha,
Mujhe pa pa kar har baar wo khota bahut hai.
ghar ki murgi daal baraa bar Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
Mann

wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2014, 09:45:41 AM »
bahut khoob
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