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Bharak rahi hai aag si hawaaon mein
Sulag raha hoon baadalon ki chaaon mein
Bahaar mujh se chin gayi mujhe bahaar chahiye
Kisi ke dillagi ko pyaar jaan ke
Main lut gaya hoon dil ki baat maan ke
Na mujhko chahiye wafaa na mujhko pyar chahiye
Na jaane kab yeh dil ka dard jaaye ga
Rahoon ga hosh mein tau gham sataye ga
Mere liye tau raat din bas ik khumaar chahiye
Tarap na mere dil kisi ki aas mein
Hazaar talkhiyan hain teri pyaas mein
Tujhe tau saari zindagi ka intezaar chahiye
Mujhe sukoon chahiye mujhe Qaraar chahiye
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2005, 04:26:50 PM » |
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wah arayan ji............................................... .......
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2005, 04:28:56 PM » |
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wah arayan ji............................................... ....... Shukirya Pandit..... |
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2005, 04:50:08 PM » |
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kaato se bhara hai ye safar gar tum door ho,
kabhi paas aakar to dekho main kitna mazboor hoo,
ye pyaar cheez kaisi hai ki dard me bhi maza deti hai,
yehi dard sah sah kar to aaj bhi main jindaa hoo.+
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2005, 05:33:55 PM » |
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kaato se bhara hai ye safar gar tum door ho,
kabhi paas aakar to dekho main kitna mazboor hoo,
ye pyaar cheez kaisi hai ki dard me bhi maza deti hai,
yehi dard sah sah kar to aaj bhi main jindaa hoo.+ Bohat khoob Pandit..... |
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2005, 05:44:21 PM » |
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Bharak rahi hai aag si hawaaon mein
Sulag raha hoon baadalon ki chaaon mein
Bahaar mujh se chin gayi mujhe bahaar chahiye
Kisi ke dillagi ko pyaar jaan ke
Main lut gaya hoon dil ki baat maan ke
Na mujhko chahiye wafaa na mujhko pyar chahiye
Na jaane kab yeh dil ka dard jaaye ga
Rahoon ga hosh mein tau gham sataye ga
Mere liye tau raat din bas ik khumaar chahiye
Tarap na mere dil kisi ki aas mein
Hazaar talkhiyan hain teri pyaas mein
Tujhe tau saari zindagi ka intezaar chahiye
Mujhe sukoon chahiye mujhe Qaraar chahiye
shabdo ko buhut pyaare dhang se piroya hai i really like ur post keep writing dear jinki yaad mein hum deewane hu gaye wo hum hi se begaane hu gaye shayad unhe talash hai ab naye pyarr ki kyuki unki nazar mein hum purane hu gaye. |
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«Reply #6 on: May 03, 2005, 06:06:49 PM » |
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Thank you Simran.... aap ne bhi khoob reply kiya hai.....nice one!
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2005, 11:48:57 AM » |
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nice one aryan jee n pandit n simran ..................!
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2005, 12:09:20 PM » |
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nice one aryan jee n pandit n simran ..................! Thank you Salma..... |
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2005, 03:34:54 PM » |
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Bharak rahi hai aag si hawaaon mein
Sulag raha hoon baadalon ki chaaon mein
Bahaar mujh se chin gayi mujhe bahaar chahiye
Kisi ke dillagi ko pyaar jaan ke
Main lut gaya hoon dil ki baat maan ke
Na mujhko chahiye wafaa na mujhko pyar chahiye
Na jaane kab yeh dil ka dard jaaye ga
Rahoon ga hosh mein tau gham sataye ga
Mere liye tau raat din bas ik khumaar chahiye
Tarap na mere dil kisi ki aas mein
Hazaar talkhiyan hain teri pyaas mein
Tujhe tau saari zindagi ka intezaar chahiye
Mujhe sukoon chahiye mujhe Qaraar chahiye
bohot ache!!!! :D |
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2005, 09:22:49 PM » |
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wah!! bahoot khooob Aryaan!!! kamal likha hai apne!!! nice_off_me ne sahi likha hai ki apne shabdo ko bahoot hi achi tarah se apni kaviota mai piroya hai!!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2005, 02:02:38 AM » |
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Bohat shukriya Meena & Pooja..... Pooja meri hamesha se yehi koshish rahi hai keh main jo bhi likhoon woh harr khaas-o-aam ki samajh mein aa jaye, iss mein kahan tak kamyaab rehta hoon yeh aapke replys se pata chalta hai... ek baar phir aap sabka teh-e-dil se shukriya adaa karna chahta hoon keh aap sab itni izzat detey hain...  |
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2005, 07:17:24 AM » |
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wah aryaan,bohat hi accha likha hai,apka work bohat bohat accha lagta hai,aise hi likhte rahiye,very nice simran also.
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2005, 12:27:57 AM » |
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Shukriya Nidhi.... Aankh nam na kar mere dard ki khatir aye mehboob
Tere ik aansoo par mere hazaar dard Qurbaan hon.. |
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«Reply #14 on: May 06, 2005, 12:32:36 AM » |
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nice aryan
Zuban par naam lete hai to aansu chalak jate hain
Teri yaad ati hai tu ham behak jate hain
Hazaro batein kiya karte thae
Ab to ek aawaaz ke leyae bhi taras jate hai
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