Mujhe Tum Rone Do,.

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Doston Bohat Dino Baad, Kuch Achcha Likh Raha Hoon,.
Zain Bhai Ke Kehne Pe,.
Waise Maine Ise Wahaan Bhi Post Kiya hai,.
Magar Chahta Tha, Ke Aap Sab Bhi Ise Pardhe,.



Tum Mere Ho, Ye Baat To Ab, Khwaab Jaisi Lagti Hai Mujhe,.
Is Khwaab Ko, Tum Mujhe Dekhne Do, Mujhe Kuch Dair Aur Sone Do,.

Aansuon Ka Lutf, Bhool Gaya Main, Use Jabse Dekhaa Hai,.
Jab Wo Door Hui Hai Mujhse, Kuch Behne Do, Mujhe Tum Rone Do,.

Kabtak Bhatkaa Karega, Bechaara Dard Yun Tanhaa "Azeem, Ki Taraah,.
Mil Jaayega Ise Mera Sahaara, Mujhe Ise Sehne Do, Ise Mera Hone Do,.

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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2009, 06:44:07 AM »
jaanasheen ji aap ka likha hamesha acha hota hai
aur aapki ye poetry bhi bohut achi hai
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2009, 07:01:20 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 09, 2009, 12:50:14 AM
Doston Bohat Dino Baad, Kuch Achcha Likh Raha Hoon,.
Zain Bhai Ke Kehne Pe,.
Waise Maine Ise Wahaan Bhi Post Kiya hai,.
Magar Chahta Tha, Ke Aap Sab Bhi Ise Pardhe,.



Tum Mere Ho, Ye Baat To Ab, Khwaab Jaisi Lagti Hai Mujhe,.
Is Khwaab Ko, Tum Mujhe Dekhne Do, Mujhe Kuch Dair Aur Sone Do,.

Aansuon Ka Lutf, Bhool Gaya Main, Use Jabse Dekhaa Hai,.
Jab Wo Door Hui Hai Mujhse, Kuch Behne Do, Mujhe Tum Rone Do,.

Kabtak Bhatkaa Karega, Bechaara Dard Yun Tanhaa "Azeem, Ki Taraah,.
Mil Jaayega Ise Mera Sahaara, Mujhe Ise Sehne Do, Ise Mera Hone Do,.

________________________________________-Jaanasheen-


Bahut Khoob Umda aur lajawaab likha hai Azeem,

Kuch lines likh rahi ho umeed hai pasand aayengi,


Kya karoge tum meri hasti ko bachakar jise sounpa tha
khud ko jab usne nahi sambhala to aab mujhe khud ko khone do,

Bina bewafayi ke hi lag gayye hai iljaam bewafa hone ke to
aaj mat roko mujhe sareaam mehfil me khafa hone do,

Kyun batate phirte hai meri barbaadi ke kisse logo ko,
aab meri halat ko dekh gamzada hote hai to hone do,

Jhakham dard bahut dete hai jab hare ho jaate hai meharbaani
karo, inhe chedo nahi sone do...

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2009, 07:52:03 AM »
Bohat khoob Azeem too good  Clapping Smiley

Apne likhe ko achcha kaha nahi karte
Yeh kam hamara hain humse na chiniye

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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2009, 10:03:24 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on January 09, 2009, 06:44:07 AM
jaanasheen ji aap ka likha hamesha acha hota hai
aur aapki ye poetry bhi bohut achi hai

Shukriya Kaushik Ji,.
Aap Bhi Kuch Likhkar Jaate To Kuch Seekhne KO Milta,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2009, 10:16:32 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 09, 2009, 07:52:03 AM
Bohat khoob Azeem too good  Clapping Smiley

Apne likhe ko achcha kaha nahi karte
Yeh kam hamara hain humse na chiniye

                          -SG-

Shukriya Mere Bade Bhai,.
Aapki Taraf Se Tareefein Sametna Mujhe Bohat Pasand Hai,.

Agar Bhai, Aap Bhi Kuch Likhkar Jaate To Seekhne KO Milta,..
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2009, 10:19:42 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on January 09, 2009, 07:01:20 AM

Bahut Khoob Umda aur lajawaab likha hai Azeem,

Kuch lines likh rahi ho umeed hai pasand aayengi,


Kya karoge tum meri hasti ko bachakar jise sounpa tha
khud ko jab usne nahi sambhala to aab mujhe khud ko khone do,

Bina bewafayi ke hi lag gayye hai iljaam bewafa hone ke to
aaj mat roko mujhe sareaam mehfil me khafa hone do,

Kyun batate phirte hai meri barbaadi ke kisse logo ko,
aab meri halat ko dekh gamzada hote hai to hone do,

Jhakham dard bahut dete hai jab hare ho jaate hai meharbaani
karo, inhe chedo nahi sone do...

Shally.



Waah Waah, Kya Khoob Kaha Hai, Shally Madam,.
Aakhri Ki Line To Yaara, Dil Ko Choo Kar Nikli,..
Nice One,.

Ab Main Ispe Jawaab Kya Doon,.
Sochkar Likhna Hai,.
Inshallah Kuch Zarur Likhoonga,.
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2009, 10:27:13 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 09, 2009, 12:50:14 AM
Doston Bohat Dino Baad, Kuch Achcha Likh Raha Hoon,.
Zain Bhai Ke Kehne Pe,.
Waise Maine Ise Wahaan Bhi Post Kiya hai,.
Magar Chahta Tha, Ke Aap Sab Bhi Ise Pardhe,.



Tum Mere Ho, Ye Baat To Ab, Khwaab Jaisi Lagti Hai Mujhe,.
Is Khwaab Ko, Tum Mujhe Dekhne Do, Mujhe Kuch Dair Aur Sone Do,.

Aansuon Ka Lutf, Bhool Gaya Main, Use Jabse Dekhaa Hai,.
Jab Wo Door Hui Hai Mujhse, Kuch Behne Do, Mujhe Tum Rone Do,.

Kabtak Bhatkaa Karega, Bechaara Dard Yun Tanhaa "Azeem, Ki Taraah,.
Mil Jaayega Ise Mera Sahaara, Mujhe Ise Sehne Do, Ise Mera Hone Do,.

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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah bohat khoob bhai jaan ..

Bohat khoob jawab shally ...
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2009, 10:34:53 AM »
Ek Koshish.,

Zindagi Ke Toofaano Se Bachkar, To Nikal Gaye Tum ,.
Mohabbat Ke Kinaare Pe Aaye Ho, To Khud Ko Kisi Ko Doobone Do,.
Mohabbat Gar Aayi Hai Darpe Tumhare, To Ise Tum Hone Do,.
Khud Ko Kisi Ko Doobone Do,.

Kab Tak Aakar Jagaaya Karogi Raaton Mein, Us Tanhaa Insaan Ko..
Kuch Pal Ke Liye, Use Chain Lene Do, Use Tum Sone Do,.

Hai Kitni Lazzat, Kisi Ka Dard Sehna, Tum Bhi Dard Lekar Dekho,.
Milaaga Tumhe, Roohaani Sukun, Abke Karaar Ko Thoda Khone,.
Anjaan Jo Ho, Dil Ke Dard Se, Iski Pehchaan Abto Hone Do,.

Bohat Ro Liya Tumne, "Azeem Ke Dost, Ab Baari Zamaane Ki Hai,.
Sunaakar Apne Dil Ka, Andaaz-e-Shayaari Se, Inhe Sab Tum Rone Do,.
Inka Bhi Dard Se Rishta Ho Jaayega, Inhe Apni Shayaari Mein Khone Do,.
Inhe Tum Rone Do,.
Inhe Tum Rone Do,.

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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2009, 10:42:14 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on January 09, 2009, 10:27:13 AM

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah bohat khoob bhai jaan ..

Bohat khoob jawab shally ...

Shukriya Didijaan,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2009, 08:18:47 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 09, 2009, 10:34:53 AM
Ek Koshish.,

Zindagi Ke Toofaano Se Bachkar, To Nikal Gaye Tum ,.
Mohabbat Ke Kinaare Pe Aaye Ho, To Khud Ko Kisi Ko Doobone Do,.
Mohabbat Gar Aayi Hai Darpe Tumhare, To Ise Tum Hone Do,.
Khud Ko Kisi Ko Doobone Do,.

Kab Tak Aakar Jagaaya Karogi Raaton Mein, Us Tanhaa Insaan Ko..
Kuch Pal Ke Liye, Use Chain Lene Do, Use Tum Sone Do,.

Hai Kitni Lazzat, Kisi Ka Dard Sehna, Tum Bhi Dard Lekar Dekho,.
Milaaga Tumhe, Roohaani Sukun, Abke Karaar Ko Thoda Khone,.
Anjaan Jo Ho, Dil Ke Dard Se, Iski Pehchaan Abto Hone Do,.

Bohat Ro Liya Tumne, "Azeem Ke Dost, Ab Baari Zamaane Ki Hai,.
Sunaakar Apne Dil Ka, Andaaz-e-Shayaari Se, Inhe Sab Tum Rone Do,.
Inka Bhi Dard Se Rishta Ho Jaayega, Inhe Apni Shayaari Mein Khone Do,.
Inhe Tum Rone Do,.
Inhe Tum Rone Do,.

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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Shukriya Azeem,
Bahut Khoob likha hai Azeem,

Badi mudaat se chaah thi kisi apne ki, aaj tu mujhe
jee bhar ke apne kandho pe sir rakh ke rone de,

Kaise utaar paayega tu barso ke gaamo ko mere dil se
aab aadat si hai inki mujhe tu inhe umar bhar dhone de,

Kya karenge ham shikwa karke duniya waloo se ye to khuda
ki marzi aur apni kismat hai jo ho raha hai galat hone de,

Bahut raatein jaag kar bita di hai Azeem,aab na rok tu
chain ki neend mujhe sone de,

Kya paaya hamne iss duniyaa se aaj khabar hui hai, chal
Azeem aaj mujhe uss khuda ka ho lene de.

Shally.
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«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2009, 08:19:40 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on January 09, 2009, 10:27:13 AM

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah bohat khoob bhai jaan ..

Bohat khoob jawab shally ...

Shukriya honey didi,

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2009, 08:20:57 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on January 10, 2009, 08:08:55 AM
Wah Kya Andaaz.e.Bayaan Hao Bohat Khoob Azeem Bhai
And Aapne Bhi Achha Rep Diya Hai Shael Ji Keep It Up.

Shukria Shihab Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2009, 09:10:17 AM »
Shukriya Majid Bhai,.
And Nice One Shally Madam,.

Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #14 on: January 11, 2009, 08:28:00 AM »
 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob shihab

Chal pade hai raahon mein par koi chahat nahi
Dil toot chuka hai par dard kam na hue
Humne toh zindagi gawa di unki chahat mein
Subha se shaam hue par unka koi paigaam nahi
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