muJhe tum se koYee shikaayat naHeeN hai,.............

by laaiba on January 19, 2013, 10:04:29 AM
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sir saini ji ke diye misre par ghazal likhne ki aik koshish ,....umeed hai ke sir saini ji se rau zaroor milegaa jo ke mere liye aizaz ki bt hoti hai:)
muqad dar mein dil kii  hikaayat  naheen hai
mujhe tum se koyee shi kaayat naheen hai,

jafaa par jo eeimaa.n ley aaye ham toh,
muhabbat ki yeh kam eenaayat naheen hai,

merey dil ki bastee mein aa kar to deiikho,
yahan zindagee kee hararat naheen hai,...

mujhe zab.t par naa.z apne sadaa hai,...
magar sab se kehnaa zaroorat naheen hai,

hai  dl mein  muhabbat ki roushan shamaa ik,
main uss ko bujhaa dun iejaazat  naheen hai,

laaiba ali
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2013, 10:05:15 AM »
sir saini ji ke diye misre par ghazal likhne ki aik koshish ,....umeed hai ke sir saini ji se rau zaroor milegaa jo ke mere liye aizaz ki bt hoti hai:)
muqad dar mein dil kii  hikaayat  naheen hai
mujhe tum se koyee shi kaayat naheen hai,

jafaa par jo eeimaa.n ley aaye ham toh,
muhabbat ki yeh kam eenaayat naheen hai,

merey dil ki bastee mein aa kar to deiikho,
yahan zindagee kee hararat naheen hai,...

mujhe zab.t par naa.z apne sadaa hai,...
magar sab se kehnaa zaroorat naheen hai,

hai  dl mein  muhabbat ki roushan shamaa ik,
main uss ko bujhaa dun himaaqat naheen hai,

laaiba ali
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2013, 10:29:55 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2013, 10:30:51 AM »
beshak beshak tumhare liye rau haazir hai badee kaamyaab koshish hai keep it up
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2013, 10:43:07 AM »
sir saini ji ke diye misre par ghazal likhne ki aik koshish ,....umeed hai ke sir saini ji se rau zaroor milegaa jo ke mere liye aizaz ki bt hoti hai:)
muqad dar mein dil kii  hikaayat  naheen hai
mujhe tum se koyee shi kaayat naheen hai,

jafaa par jo eeimaa.n ley aaye ham toh,
muhabbat ki yeh kam eenaayat naheen hai,

merey dil ki bastee mein aa kar to deiikho,
yahan zindagee kee hararat naheen hai,...

mujhe zab.t par naa.z apne sadaa hai,...
magar sab se kehnaa zaroorat naheen hai,

hai  dl mein  muhabbat ki roushan shamaa ik,
main uss ko bujhaa dun himaaqat naheen hai,

laaiba ali

waah waah laaiba ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2013, 11:27:11 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2013, 01:26:04 PM »
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behad khoob laaiba jee
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2013, 02:14:26 PM »
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thanku,..............
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2013, 02:15:27 PM »
beshak beshak tumhare liye rau haazir hai badee kaamyaab koshish hai keep it up
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2013, 03:05:23 PM »
sir saini ji ke diye misre par ghazal likhne ki aik koshish ,....umeed hai ke sir saini ji se rau zaroor milegaa jo ke mere liye aizaz ki bt hoti hai:)
muqad dar mein dil kii  hikaayat  naheen hai
mujhe tum se koyee shi kaayat naheen hai,

jafaa par jo eeimaa.n ley aaye ham toh,
muhabbat ki yeh kam eenaayat naheen hai,

merey dil ki bastee mein aa kar to deiikho,
yahan zindagee kee hararat naheen hai,...

mujhe zab.t par naa.z apne sadaa hai,...
magar sab se kehnaa zaroorat naheen hai,

hai  dl mein  muhabbat ki roushan shamaa ik,
main uss ko bujhaa dun iejaazat  naheen hai,

laaiba ali



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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2013, 03:45:57 PM »
sir saini ji ke diye misre par ghazal likhne ki aik koshish ,....umeed hai ke sir saini ji se rau zaroor milegaa jo ke mere liye aizaz ki bt hoti hai:)
muqad dar mein dil kii  hikaayat  naheen hai
mujhe tum se koyee shi kaayat naheen hai,

jafaa par jo eeimaa.n ley aaye ham toh,
muhabbat ki yeh kam eenaayat naheen hai,

merey dil ki bastee mein aa kar to deiikho,
yahan zindagee kee hararat naheen hai,...

mujhe zab.t par naa.z apne sadaa hai,...
magar sab se kehnaa zaroorat naheen hai,

hai  dl mein  muhabbat ki roushan shamaa ik,
main uss ko bujhaa dun himaaqat naheen hai,

laaiba ali


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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2013, 04:32:48 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2013, 05:12:10 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2013, 01:19:31 PM »
waah waah laaiba ji
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bohat bohat shukria aapkaa,............
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