<>*Mujhe yaad kar lena*<>

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<>*Mujhe yaad kar lena*<>

koi jab na samjh paye
koi jab yunhi thukraye
koi jab dard naya dede
koi jab hasi udaa ajye

kabhi chaho koi to ho
jo chupchap sath baithaa ho
koi hath thame aur aansu
palkon se chhalak jayen

kaisi bhi udaasi ho
koi dard ka pehra ho
kabhi na tum gumgeem hona
bas mujhe yaad kar lena

meri nadaan athkheliyan
tumhe ik pal yaad aayengi
ghane andhere me tab kahin
koi lau kahin timtimayegi

har dard har ek taklif
tab teri assani se mit jayegi
ye waada hai mera ee dost
bas tum mujhe yaad kar lena....!!!
   
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2010, 08:52:10 PM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne ... too good hai ji...


taanhaayi me koi aisa ehsaas ho
koi duur hoke bhi jaise paas ho
dil me dard ki jhalak to ho par
jaise kisi khushi ka ehsaas ho

koi ho jiski yaad aaye raaton me
koi ho jiski baatein ho baaton me
thaamke koi chale tumhaara haath
jab tanha raho tum suni raahon me

ek boond aansoo ka kabhi aankh se
chupke se beh jaaye gaalon pe
leke us aansoo ko apne haathon me
lagaa le koi use apne hothon pe

han koi shaks ho aisa tere paas bhi
jo karta ho bas pyaar tujhe har ghadi
na mil paaye koi aisa tujhe agar
mudke dekhna milenge tujhe paas hum hi

intehaan hai ye mere ishq ki
ki aayegi kabhi mere paas tu
umar beet jaaye chaahe aise hi
par ehsaas hai ki kabhi aayegi tu...
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2010, 01:45:49 PM »
Waah kasak ji bahut umda...nice reply kapil ji...
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2010, 11:06:11 PM »
thanks a lot Geet ji...!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2010, 01:46:48 PM »
bht pyara likha hai aapne kapil ji..bht mast reply....
thnx alot ji for appreciating my work
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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2010, 01:47:24 PM »
Waah kasak ji bahut umda...nice reply kapil ji...

thnx Geet.......for liking my poem
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«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2010, 02:07:55 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

bht pyara likha hai aapne kapil ji..bht mast reply....
thnx alot ji for appreciating my work
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«Reply #7 on: October 25, 2010, 02:18:11 PM »
Bahuttt Bahuttt Khoob Anuji..

Bahut Hi Pyaare jazbaat!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Koi jab Tumhe Naa Samaj Paaye
Dil Kuch kehna Chaahe,
par lafz Saath Naa De paaye

Chalte-Chalte Jab Kadam Ladkadaye
Aankh Sirf Ashqon Ke Moti Bahaaye
Dil Jab Mehroomiyon Se Tadpa Jaaye

Mehfilon mein Bhi Jab Tanhaai Sataaye
Dil Sirf dard Ke Nagme Gaaye
Honton Par Tere Jab Koi Fariyaad Si Aaye

Jab Mann Ke Aangan mein Koi Phool Naa Khil Paaye
Jab Zindagi ki Kuch Pareshaaniyan Tujhe Rula Jaaye

"Khwaish" Ko yaad kar Lena!!!!
Woh Tujshe Itna Door Bhi Nahi Jo Naa mil Paaye
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«Reply #8 on: October 25, 2010, 02:24:06 PM »
khwaish ji aap to hamesha hamare sath hain.......
thnx for this lovely reply....bht bht pyra likha hai aapne....
really touching
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2010, 02:40:37 PM »
khwaish ji aap to hamesha hamare sath hain.......
thnx for this lovely reply....bht bht pyra likha hai aapne....
really touching

Ji Bilkul Saath Hai Aapke..

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooooooo Much Anuji For Appreciating!!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2012, 06:08:36 PM »
tumhe hum yaad krte hain
jab bhi ashq naino se Chalakte hain!!
koi mausam nahi guzra
ye bebas barbas hi baraste hain

tumhe hum yaad krte hain
milne ko tarasste hain
ik aah si nikalti hai
dard seeney me machalte hain

nahi gumaan hume khud par
nain ye mere tere deed ko taraste hain
hua udaas dekho na
Sarfira sab samjhte hain

tumhe hum yaad krte hain
khud me hi tadappte hain
naata ye kaisa hai tumse
duniya wale kab samjhte hain

roya dil tanhai me
mehfil me smbhlte hain
tmhe hum yad krte hain
tmhe hum yad--
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