muJhh sE too juDaa ho jaaYeegaA,.....

by laaiba on October 06, 2012, 12:09:56 PM
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hij.R dil meiN niHaaN ho jaAYee gaA
dar.d had se siVaa ho jaaYee gaA,

muhabbat par yakeen kaise ho gaa,
gar too yooNhi khaFaa ho jaaYeegaA,

pya.R kiTnaa sahee lekin ik din,
muJhh se too juDaa ho jaaYeegaA,

dil ki shaaKhoN par jo khilaa kAb se
pattaa voh to haRaa ho jaaYeegaA,

dashTe hijraaN mein bhaTke ga dil or,
khaTam har ik qiiSaa ho jaaYeegaA,

laaiBaa ali
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2012, 12:37:43 PM »
bahut khoob Laaibaa ji dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2012, 12:40:29 PM »
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bohat bohat shukria inayat aapkee siani ji:)
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2012, 01:47:17 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on October 06, 2012, 12:09:56 PM

hij.R dil meiN niHaaN ho jaAYee gaA
dar.d had se siVaa ho jaaYee gaA,

muhabbat par yakeen kaise ho gaa,
gar too yooNhi khaFaa ho jaaYeegaA,

pya.R kiTnaa sahee lekin ik din,
muJhh se too juDaa ho jaaYeegaA,

dil ki shaaKhoN par jo khilaa kAb se
pattaa voh to haRaa ho jaaYeegaA,

dashTe hijraaN mein bhaTke ga dil or,
khaTam har ik qiiSaa ho jaaYeegaA,

laaiBaa ali


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Laaiba Ji..Kya Kehne..Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khooob...

Khaas taur par Yeh A'shaar Dil Pe Ghar Kar Gaya..


"Mohabbat Par Yakeen Kaise Ho Gaa
 Gar Tu Yuh Hi Khaffa Ho Jaayega"

Iss Ashaar par Ek Punjabi Geet Ke Bol yaad Aa Gaye..

Mainu Ki Manauna Si Veh, Tu Vi Ruus Chaleya
Mainu Samjaunda Si Veh, Aape Uth Chaleya
Jag Vekhda Tamaasha, Gal Laaun Kaun Ve..
Je Aapka Doven Ruus Baithe Tha Manaun Kaun Ve....
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2012, 01:51:43 PM »
laaiba ji mujhe afsos hai ki ki is nazm ko mukammal comments nahi mile hain ,,nazm mein akoot gahrai aur khubsurat jazbaat rahe hain ,,meri taraf se nazm har tarah se laazbab sawit ho rahi hai ,,,aur wakai kabil-e-daad hai ...kabul karien ,,,aur isi qadar roshni banaye rakhen ,,,khuda hafiz,,raam raam aur rab rakha
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2012, 03:20:06 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on October 06, 2012, 01:47:17 PM

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Laaiba Ji..Kya Kehne..Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khooob...

Khaas taur par Yeh A'shaar Dil Pe Ghar Kar Gaya..


"Mohabbat Par Yakeen Kaise Ho Gaa
 Gar Tu Yuh Hi Khaffa Ho Jaayega"

Iss Ashaar par Ek Punjabi Geet Ke Bol yaad Aa Gaye..

Mainu Ki Manauna Si Veh, Tu Vi Ruus Chaleya
Mainu Samjaunda Si Veh, Aape Uth Chaleya
Jag Vekhda Tamaasha, Gal Laaun Kaun Ve..
Je Aapka Doven Ruus Baithe Tha Manaun Kaun Ve....
bohat bohat shukerguzar hoo.n main aapkee..
bohat ache song ka mukhda share kia aap ne ...bohat shukria....
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2012, 03:21:21 PM »
Quote from: sunildehgawani on October 06, 2012, 01:51:43 PM
laaiba ji mujhe afsos hai ki ki is nazm ko mukammal comments nahi mile hain ,,nazm mein akoot gahrai aur khubsurat jazbaat rahe hain ,,meri taraf se nazm har tarah se laazbab sawit ho rahi hai ,,,aur wakai kabil-e-daad hai ...kabul karien ,,,aur isi qadar roshni banaye rakhen ,,,khuda hafiz,,raam raam aur rab rakha
bohat shukria aapkaa..........
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2012, 04:53:51 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on October 06, 2012, 12:09:56 PM

hij.R dil meiN niHaaN ho jaAYee gaA
dar.d had se siVaa ho jaaYee gaA,

muhabbat par yakeen kaise ho gaa,
gar too yooNhi khaFaa ho jaaYeegaA,

pya.R kiTnaa sahee lekin ik din,
muJhh se too juDaa ho jaaYeegaA,

dil ki shaaKhoN par jo khilaa kAb se
pattaa voh to haRaa ho jaaYeegaA,

dashTe hijraaN mein bhaTke ga dil or,
khaTam har ik qiiSaa ho jaaYeegaA,

laaiBaa ali


bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2012, 05:05:55 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne laaiba jee
dil daad kubool farmaayen
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2012, 05:07:01 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob laaiba jee
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«Reply #10 on: October 07, 2012, 02:24:10 AM »
laaibaji Dil karta hai in shabdo ko sahej kar rakh lo.
Sheel didi
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«Reply #11 on: October 07, 2012, 11:16:56 AM »
Quote from: adil bechain on October 06, 2012, 04:53:51 PM

bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
bohat shukria..........
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2012, 11:17:26 AM »
Quote from: mkv on October 06, 2012, 05:05:55 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne laaiba jee
dil daad kubool farmaayen

bohat bohat shukria.......
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«Reply #13 on: October 07, 2012, 11:18:05 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on October 06, 2012, 05:07:01 PM
Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob laaiba jee
bohat shukria suman ji.........
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«Reply #14 on: October 07, 2012, 11:18:31 AM »
Quote from: sushilbansal on October 07, 2012, 02:24:10 AM
laaibaji Dil karta hai in shabdo ko sahej kar rakh lo.
Sheel didi
shukria sheel didi........
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