Mujhko Rota Dekh Kar Kyon Pareshaan Hai..?

by waheed_rose2004 on December 18, 2004, 04:41:13 PM
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Mujhko Rota Dekh Kar Kyon Pareshaan Hai..?
Ye Shabnam To Meri Aankhon Ki Jaan Hai..!

Itne Gam Ke Saaye Lage Hain Mere Peechhe
Khud Maut Meri Zindagi Pe Hairaan Hai

Kehne Lage Woh Mere Dil Ke Tukde Dekh Kar
Dekhaa Hai Kahin..! Ye Kiska Saamaan Hai..?

Beh Rahi Hain Kashtiyan Dil Ke Kinaaro Par
Dil Ke Beech-O-Beech To Qayaam-E-Toofan Hai

Aik Imtehaan Thi Ibteda-E-Zindagi Meri
Ab Anjaam-E-Zindagi Bhi Aik Imtehaan Hai

Kehte Ho Mere Mehboob Ko Bewafaa Ae Logo
Kuch Khauf Karo Mere Bhi Moonh Mein Zabaan Hai..............(Not mine)
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2004, 05:11:52 PM »
WHOSE SO EVER IT IS,BRILLIANT WAHEED BHAI!

""Baat koi na thi bulane ki,
   baat to thi unko azmane ki,
   hamne to sari koshishein kar li,
   hawaon me diya jalane ki,
   khoone dil se makan banaya tha,
   aur tamanna thi ghar basane ki,
   jane woh log ab kahan honge,
   jinko parvah na thi zamane ki,
   ab to aadat si pad gayi hai,
   dard-e-gham mein muskurane ki."
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2004, 05:19:21 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhh waheed ji and nidhi ji!
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2004, 04:35:32 PM »
THANK U MEENA JI  Usual Smile  !
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2004, 06:38:10 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
WHOSE SO EVER IT IS,BRILLIANT WAHEED BHAI!

""Baat koi na thi bulane ki,
   baat to thi unko azmane ki,
   hamne to sari koshishein kar li,
   hawaon me diya jalane ki,
   khoone dil se makan banaya tha,
   aur tamanna thi ghar basane ki,
   jane woh log ab kahan honge,
   jinko parvah na thi zamane ki,
   ab to aadat si pad gayi hai,
   dard-e-gham mein muskurane ki."


ur welcome nidhi...................meena..............very toucing words nidhi....excellent.......... tongue3  Usual Smile

ho gayi ho gar hum say koi khata humain maaf kardena
sabab humaray kabhi jo tumhara dil dukha humain maaf kardena
zindagi kay kisi mor par yeah aankhain jo ho jayen band
hogi tum say bas itni ilteja humain maaf kardena.........................
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2004, 07:17:19 AM »
Waaaahh.. Bohat ummda Waheed.... & Nidhi Bohat khoob..
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2004, 08:32:22 AM »
Nice one bhaijaan n nidhi too...

Ek baar dulhan ki tarah saj ke dekh,
In baharon mein bikhar ke dekh,
Jawaani tere kadam chum legi,
Ek baar wafa ki raah pe chal ke dekh.
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2004, 11:13:46 AM »
THANX ARYAAN,WAHEED BHAI AND JUST_HATE_LOVE!

VERY NICE WAHEED BHAI AND JUST_HATE_LOVE  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2004, 04:41:28 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Nice one bhaijaan n nidhi too...

Ek baar dulhan ki tarah saj ke dekh,
In baharon mein bikhar ke dekh,
Jawaani tere kadam chum legi,
Ek baar wafa ki raah pe chal ke dekh.


beautifullllllllllllllllll!
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2004, 02:16:10 PM »
welcome all.............very nice Just_Hate_Love....  :lol:
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2005, 07:08:43 AM »
very nice every one

ab toh yehi humari taqdeer bangayi
in aankhon mein ashkon ki lakeer bangayi

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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2005, 08:26:25 AM »
Quote from: "diva"
very nice every one

ab toh yehi humari taqdeer bangayi
in aankhon mein ashkon ki lakeer bangayi

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wow wow diva bahot khoob................excellent...........

Ho ke guzregi meray bhi dil se sho'lon ki lakeer
Jab teri maang mein sindoor bhara jayega,,,,,,,,,...................
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2005, 09:17:07 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "diva"
very nice every one

ab toh yehi humari taqdeer bangayi
in aankhon mein ashkon ki lakeer bangayi

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wow wow diva bahot khoob................excellent...........

Ho ke guzregi meray bhi dil se sho'lon ki lakeer
Jab teri maang mein sindoor bhara jayega,,,,,,,,,...................
kya baat hai
wah
kafi gahri kahein aapne
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2005, 12:07:30 PM »
Thnx evreryone. Everyone has writtne very nice.
Keep it up all.
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2005, 12:13:42 PM »
waheed ji bahot acha likha hai kissi ne, aap ka shukriya ke in ashaar ko jaan dee.
 :wink:

nidhi that was nice also.
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