Mujhse Dil Na Laga... (Shikha):Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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Well, the Introduction to this Poem is In its First Paragraph only...
Kuch jyada hi long poem ho gayi... Please Bear It... :D

Kehte hai mitti se bana hai har insaan,
Aur ek din issi mitti mein mil jaayega…
Gamon ki dhoop mein sookh jaaye mitti,
To kaun mitti se patthar na ho jaayega…
Khushi ki chaanv mein dhoop ki milawat mili,
Harr riste mein jhoote pyaar ki banawat mili...
Gum-e-Dhoop ki garmi mein tar.batar hoon,
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon…

Aaj Zubaan meri hai kaisi patharaayi si,
Yeh Pathrili aankh lagti hai neeli neeli si…
Lal doriyon ka samunder theher gaya aise,
Gamon ka pyala bhar ke chalak gaya jaise…
Na-Jaane kaun se gunaah ki mil rahi hai saja,
Kya kahe, kya hai yun patthar hone ki wajah...
Yehi sawaal hai jispar mein Nir.uttar hoon,
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon...

Neele gagan ko ek-takk dekha karti hoon,
Panchhi ki tarah udne ki khwaish karti hoon…
Kabhi reit par tikk jaati hai khaali si nazar,
Badkismati par chalta nahin ab koi bhi asar…
Udd jaana chahti hoon khule aasmaanon mein,
Ya Reit si simat jaaun kahin dhalaanon mein...
Kya main is bikhri reit se bhi bat.tar hoon?
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon...[/b]


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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2007, 06:16:16 PM »

dil aab soch k thodi na lagayi jati hai sikhaaaaaaaaaaa tongue3

waise nice post Usual Smile


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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2007, 06:46:27 PM »

It is Good Shikha, so easy to see that its really coming from heart only!

Dekhiye zamane mein kuch gham hain
toh kuch khushi bhi hai..
Samjhiye mohabbat mein thora dard hai
toh jannat bhi hai..
Apne dil pe tuh yakeen karr..
Pyar tuh khul kar karr..
Mauka fir mile naa mile zindagi..
ki teri dalil ae ishq mein koi kami naa karr !!


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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2007, 11:16:08 PM »

Really Good One Shikha & Nice Reply Ricky...


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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2007, 10:20:31 AM »

bahut umda Shikha aur ricky ji


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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2007, 09:47:08 AM »

Bahoot Khoob Bahoot Hi Accha Likha Hai Aapne,.
Shikha Ji Aur Ricky Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,..


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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2007, 09:50:26 AM »

Dil Kisi Lagaa Lete To Tanha Na Hote,..
Deta Jo Koi Dard To Seh Lete Magar Yun Tanha Na Hote,..

_____________________________________-Jaanasheen-


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Shikha12

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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2007, 12:46:56 PM »

Thanks a lot for your nice comments Shahid (RWG), Ricky, Samnoj, Aryan and Azeem... Usual Smile

Baaki jin logo ne padha aur comment nahin kiya... Unko bhi Thanks... :D

@ Shahid (RWG) : Shahid, baat to aapki theek hai, lekin aajkal dil bhi soch samajh kar lagana chahiye... Zamana Kharaab hai... tongue3

@ Ricky : Thanks once again for understanding... and very nice reply by you..

Quote from: "ricky"

Dekhiye zamane mein kuch gham hain
toh kuch khushi bhi hai..
Samjhiye mohabbat mein thora dard hai
toh jannat bhi hai..
Apne dil pe tuh yakeen karr..
Pyar tuh khul kar karr..
Mauka fir mile naa mile zindagi..
ki teri dalil ae ishq mein koi kami naa karr !!

Ab aapka reply :

Dekhe dard ke phaile hue laakh manjar,
Magar Ishq mein humne kab kami ki hai...
Patthar ho kar reh gaye tamashaaiyon mein,
Phir bhi in aankhon mein abhi nami si hai...

@ Azeem : Nice Reply by you too...

Quote from: "jaanasheen"

Dil Kisi Lagaa Lete To Tanha Na Hote,..
Deta Jo Koi Dard To Seh Lete Magar Yun Tanha Na Hote,..

For You :

Humko ruswaai ka na hota zara bhi gila,
Dard na hota, Na Aansoo, No koi Gum...
Dil laga ke bahut toote, bahut roye hai,
Yeh Behtar thha ki tanha hi hote hum...


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Rajbir

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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2007, 12:58:08 PM »

Shikha

Zabardast kalaam =D> =D> =D>

Itna badhiya tum likhti ho ki kya kahoon !

Dard mein tumhara likha laajawab hota hai !

Keep it up !

Ricky

Nice reply !

Azeem

Nice too !


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Shikha12

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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2007, 01:01:50 PM »

Shukriya Rajbir Ji... Usual Smile

Aapke Comments bahut hausla afzaai karte hai...
Phir bhi Itni tareef naa kiya karey... Sir par chadh jaati hai... :D


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rajrishi

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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2007, 01:45:48 PM »

good work shikha ji, bhut umda likhti hain aap, lajawab.


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Shikha12

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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2007, 01:47:33 PM »

Thanks a lot Rajrishi for your appreciation... Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Re: Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2007, 02:18:55 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Bahoot khoob shikha!! Last pehrae ki ek ek line dil ko chu gai.. jaise apne dil ki hasrto ko Aina najar aa gaya!! bahoot hi acha likha hai!!!


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Shikha12

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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2007, 02:26:39 PM »

Thanks di... Your Comments means a lot to me.. Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Mujhse Dil Na Laga...

«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2007, 05:15:12 PM »

You welcome Shikha!! Apka likha waqai hi dil ko chu gaya, kalam apne app likhati gai......
98.9% main app sabki shayri pardti hu aor sath ke sath hi jo man mai atta hai ek saans main likh deti hu... Apki shayri pardi jo man mai ayya chah kar bhi yaha nahi likh saki.. is liye usko yaha likhne ke layak banane main kuch waqat lag gaya.... Asha hai apko pasand ayega!!!

Toota hua hai dil, ghayal katra katra yah rooh hui
mujhse na dil lagana, main khud, khud se anjaan hui

Bhawanao ke bhanwar main dil khoya hai
Her ek armaan, na jaane kaha soya hai
Bar bar uski ek pukar per, kyun main phir uski hui
Mujhse Na Dil Lagana, Main khud, khud se Anjaan hui

kabhi is paar, kabhi us paar, khud ko paati hu
na jaane khud se, main khud, kaya chahti hu
her umeend tooti, khud main bahoot lachaar hui
Mujhse Na Dil Lagana, Main khud, khud se Anjaan hui

kabhi pathar khud ko, kabhi ansoo ka dariya paati hu
kabhi majboot iraadein, kabhi khud se hi mukar jaati hu
apne hi khayalo, apne hi sawalo se preshan hui
Mujhse Na Dil Lagana, Main khud, khud se Anjaan hui

raah nahi koi meri, kisi bhi raah chal doogi
mili hai judai mujhko, khud ko khud se hi juda kar doogi
na karna mera bharosa, lagta hai POOJA KE JEEVAN KI AB SHAM HUI
Mujhse Na Dil Lagana, Main khud, khud se Anjaan hui!!


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