Mujhse Dil Na Laga... (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on August 21, 2007, 02:09:59 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 24, 2007, 01:27:07 PM »
Waah Pooja Sis,..
Aapka Jawaab Nahi,..
Bole To Aap Sab Ka Jawaab Nahi,..
Hume To Bahot Kuch Seekhne Ko Mil Raha Hai,..
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye
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«Reply #16 on: August 24, 2007, 01:30:38 PM »
Zakham Haare Hai Abhi Bhi Dil Ke,..
Diya Jo Chahne Waalon Ne,..
Aaj Bhi Inse Umeed Maine Wafa Ki Rakhi Hai,.

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«Reply #17 on: August 24, 2007, 04:13:05 PM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Well, the Introduction to this Poem is In its First Paragraph only... Usual Smile
Kuch jyada hi long poem ho gayi... Please Bear It... :D


Kehte hai mitti se bana hai har insaan,
Aur ek din issi mitti mein mil jaayega…
Gamon ki dhoop mein sookh jaaye mitti,
To kaun mitti se patthar na ho jaayega…
Khushi ki chaanv mein dhoop ki milawat mili,
Harr riste mein jhoote pyaar ki banawat mili...
Gum-e-Dhoop ki garmi mein tar.batar hoon,
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon…

Aaj Zubaan meri hai kaisi patharaayi si,
Yeh Pathrili aankh lagti hai neeli neeli si…
Lal doriyon ka samunder theher gaya aise,
Gamon ka pyala bhar ke chalak gaya jaise…
Na-Jaane kaun se gunaah ki mil rahi hai saja,
Kya kahe, kya hai yun patthar hone ki wajah...
Yehi sawaal hai jispar mein Nir.uttar hoon,
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon...

Neele gagan ko ek-takk dekha karti hoon,
Panchhi ki tarah udne ki khwaish karti hoon…
Kabhi reit par tikk jaati hai khaali si nazar,
Badkismati par chalta nahin ab koi bhi asar…
Udd jaana chahti hoon khule aasmaanon mein,
Ya Reit si simat jaaun kahin dhalaanon mein...
Kya main is bikhri reit se bhi bat.tar hoon?
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon...[/b]


=D>=D>=D>=D>=D>=D. shikha g ap sub itna acha likhty hain aor itna acha bolty hain k mjhy kahi likhny bolny ki jagah hi nai milti isi liye taliya hi bajati rehti hoon  Usual Smile =D>=D>=D>=D>
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«Reply #18 on: August 25, 2007, 12:39:24 PM »
Thanks again Pooja di... Bahut kamaal ka likha aapne...
I am out of words to praise it... Its just Superb...


Bahut bahut shukriya Azeem... Bahut khoob likha aapne...
Humey bhi aapse bahut seekhne ko mil raha hai... Usual Smile


Thanks a lot waffa... for your appreciation.  Aapki baatein bhi bahut achhi lagi aur taaliyaan bhi...Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: August 25, 2007, 12:46:16 PM »
Cant Say anything.....But accha laga padke......!!!!!

Dard Beshumaar hai iss Jahan main......
Par Dard ke Talabgaar bhi hum nahi........

Kyu mooh lagate ho unn Lafzon ko......
Jinko hai Dunia ka waasta par Ankhon me Intezaar unka hum nahi.....!!!!!!
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«Reply #20 on: August 25, 2007, 03:49:25 PM »
Very Nice Shikha....  Usual Smile
waisey sabhi ne bahut achha likha hai.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: August 29, 2007, 12:14:51 PM »
Shukriya Shikha Ji,..
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«Reply #22 on: August 29, 2007, 05:25:21 PM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Well, the Introduction to this Poem is In its First Paragraph only... Usual Smile
Kuch jyada hi long poem ho gayi... Please Bear It... :D


Kehte hai mitti se bana hai har insaan,
Aur ek din issi mitti mein mil jaayega…
Gamon ki dhoop mein sookh jaaye mitti,
To kaun mitti se patthar na ho jaayega…
Khushi ki chaanv mein dhoop ki milawat mili,
Harr riste mein jhoote pyaar ki banawat mili...
Gum-e-Dhoop ki garmi mein tar.batar hoon,
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon…

Aaj Zubaan meri hai kaisi patharaayi si,
Yeh Pathrili aankh lagti hai neeli neeli si…
Lal doriyon ka samunder theher gaya aise,
Gamon ka pyala bhar ke chalak gaya jaise…
Na-Jaane kaun se gunaah ki mil rahi hai saja,
Kya kahe, kya hai yun patthar hone ki wajah...
Yehi sawaal hai jispar mein Nir.uttar hoon,
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon...

Neele gagan ko ek-takk dekha karti hoon,
Panchhi ki tarah udne ki khwaish karti hoon…
Kabhi reit par tikk jaati hai khaali si nazar,
Badkismati par chalta nahin ab koi bhi asar…
Udd jaana chahti hoon khule aasmaanon mein,
Ya Reit si simat jaaun kahin dhalaanon mein...
Kya main is bikhri reit se bhi bat.tar hoon?
Aisa lagta hai jaise main koi patthar hoon...
Mujhse dil na laga main to bas patthar hoon...[/b]


NO WORDS SHIKHA..i am just speechless =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #23 on: August 30, 2007, 01:49:08 PM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Thanks again Pooja di... Bahut kamaal ka likha aapne...
I am out of words to praise it... Its just Superb...


bahoot bahoot shukaria pasand karne ka....
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«Reply #24 on: September 09, 2007, 02:57:51 PM »
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@ Shahid (RWG) : Shahid, baat to aapki theek hai, lekin aajkal dil bhi soch samajh kar lagana chahiye... Zamana Kharaab hai... tongue3


haan wo to hai shikha,par kehte hai na khichad me kamal khilta hai!, to kamal hasil k liye dil khula aur khojna to jari rehna chahiye! tongue3
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