Mulakat

by Meena on February 27, 2005, 04:06:24 PM
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Meena
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So dostooo, aaj phir se ek poem pesh karna chahongi:  :D

Kismat bhi ajeeb hai aaj phir se unse mulakat hogayi,
Pyar ke arman ubarne lage, jazbato ke saath khilwat hogayi,

Dafna diya unone ehesas-e-mohabbat ko jane kaha,
Pyar ki jagha berukhi unki chahat hogayi,

Aaj bhi unse beshumar pyar hai hume,
Khud ko rokhna chaha to khud se bagawat hogayi,

Basaya tha jisne sheher-e-dil kabhi humara,
Unhi ke haaton aaj phir se waha viranat hogayi!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2005, 04:08:50 PM »
Whole poem is fantastic esspecially this line...

"Khud ko rokhna chaha to khud se bagawat hogayi, "
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2005, 04:17:33 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya!!

 :D
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dolly
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2005, 05:48:17 PM »
WOOOOW!!

BAHUT KHOOB MEENAJI!! BAHUT ACHHE
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2005, 05:54:11 PM »
thank u!!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2005, 07:00:48 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
So dostooo, aaj phir se ek poem pesh karna chahongi:  :D

Kismat bhi ajeeb hai aaj phir se unse mulakat hogayi,
Pyar ke arman ubarne lage, jazbato ke saath khilwat hogayi,

Dafna diya unone ehesas-e-mohabbat ko jane kaha,
Pyar ki jagha berukhi unki chahat hogayi,

Aaj bhi unse beshumar pyar hai hume,
Khud ko rokhna chaha to khud se bagawat hogayi,

Basaya tha jisne sheher-e-dil kabhi humara,
Unhi ke haaton aaj phir se waha viranat hogayi!



huh !!!!!!!!

Apni Ankhon mein Basakar tujh ko
Teri Ankhon mein Khud ko pana chahte hain

Duriyon ka Ehsas na ho jara bhi
Aise hum tujh mein Samana chahte hain

Bekhudi kuch toh kam ho meri Sanson mein
Madhosh teri Sanson ko Thamna chahte hain

Khamosh Fasana Apne Dil ka
Unke Lafzon mein Sunana chahte hain

Kitne kareeb wo Khushnaseeb Pal hain "HumTum"
Yakeen aise Manzar ka khud ko Dilana chahte hain
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2005, 09:52:19 PM »
HUM TUM

BUHAT ACHEY YAAR
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HumTum
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2005, 10:07:03 AM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
HUM TUM

BUHAT ACHEY YAAR


:D Thanks...
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Khamoshi
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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2005, 10:48:41 AM »
Arrre wah kya baat hai meena sis
excellent sher ......its really a nice and good one to
you realy know how to add feelings in to shers
superb and remarkable...
and umeed kerna chahonga..sis ap aur achi sher likha ..
till the ...keep it up...
 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2005, 04:41:07 PM »
khamoshi:

thanx a lot for reading my poem!!!  :D

hum tum:
"huh" <------ new style to say wah wah?  :wink:  bohot achi poem hai apki!!  :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2005, 04:42:55 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
khamoshi:

thanx a lot for reading my poem!!!  :D

hum tum:
"huh" <------ new style to say wah wah?  :wink:  bohot achi poem hai apki!!  :D


ohh ya tht's HumTum's style .... :wink:  
Shukriya aap ka hamari poem padney ka...
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2005, 04:44:46 PM »
hahaha jaise poems ki translation likhte ho waise apne style ki bhi translation likha kare aap na!  :lol:
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pandit
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2005, 04:50:27 PM »
dard e bewafai unki kis se kahe,
suna jo bhi koi wo bhi humpar hasa,
kaha har ek ne ki aye aashiq,
q kisi bewafa k pyaar me fasa.
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HumTum
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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2005, 04:55:17 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
hahaha jaise poems ki translation likhte ho waise apne style ki bhi translation likha kare aap na!  :lol:


kuch batein to samjhni chahiye na aap ko bhi.... tongue3
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2005, 05:05:06 PM »
Quote from: "pandit"
dard e bewafai unki kis se kahe,
suna jo bhi koi wo bhi humpar hasa,
kaha har ek ne ki aye aashiq,
q kisi bewafa k pyaar me fasa.


wow!

 :D
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