~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Yeh tanhai kay pal najane kaise mujhe ek shayar bana gaye,
Jisne wafa kay mayne nahin jane, woh mujhe bewaffa bula gaye..

Usne zindagi se bahar kadam kya rakha, hum muskurana bhul gaye,
Us’se judai kay pal, mujhe apni zindagi se nafrat karwa gaye..

Kal tak woh ek pal bhi mujse dhoor rehna pasand nahin karta tha,
Manzil ek hote hue bhi aj woh Zalim, apna raasta alag karwa gaye..

Aj ek sawal hai mann main kay kyun wafa nahin milti wafa kay badle,
‘Khamosh’ ko woh Zalim, mohobat se nafrat karna seekhwa gaye..

Iss nadan ki phir bhi ilteja hai kay koi miljaye,
Jiska haath thamkar zindagi Jannat si nazar aye,
Aur dua hai kay ae Khuda woh bhi kahin bewaffa na nikal aye..

Kal tak uske dil main jagah rakhta tha yeh nadan chahne wala uska,
Najane kaunse musafir uss dil main uss jagah main apna ghar bana gaye..

Yaaron mujhe likhna nahin ata phir bhi kuch log shayar bulate hai,
Aj dil ne mehsoos kiya hai ek sachayi ko,
Kay zindagi kay sitam, ‘Khamosh’ ko bhi likhna seekha gaye..

~..Rahim..~..ASilent Heart..~


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2010, 04:28:32 PM »

Rahim Sahab Aadaab .... !

Har baar ki tarha is baar bhi aapke ahsaas o
Khayaal behad achche raheN hai... Daad kabool kijiye
janab......

Likhate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.....


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2010, 07:49:52 PM »

bohat khoob raheem bhai,.
yunhi likhte raho


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2010, 08:17:53 PM »

Shukriya Parwaaz jee aur Azeem bhaijan..!


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2010, 10:01:51 AM »

rahim bhai jee kiya dher sari taali bajauu...

par abhi is bar dheer saari daad khaaaj khujliiii loo..

eise hi likhte rahoooo~


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2010, 07:20:14 PM »

Shukriya Kapil Dost aur Abhi jee..!


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2010, 12:45:19 PM »

Kya baat Hai Bhai rahim!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob..maza Aaa gaya Yeh padhkar..

Bahut Ache


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2010, 01:49:27 PM »

RAHIMMMMMMMMM BHAIIIIIIIIIIIIII PAHLE TO DAD LIJIYE APNI IS PESHKASH PE
PHIR EK BAAT BATA DIJIYE

ITNA GAM AUR UMDA KHYAAL KISKI DEN HAI KISNE AAP KO ITNA SATAYA JO AAP KI HAR RACHNA ME APNI JHALAK CHHOD JATA HAI AGAR HO SAKE TO USKA JIKRA KARIYE GA MERE SE
BANTNE SE HAR CHIJ KA BHAR KAM HOTA HAI \
AAP KA

"Raahi"


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: October 23, 2010, 04:12:31 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on October 23, 2010, 12:45:19 PM

Kya baat Hai Bhai rahim!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob..maza Aaa gaya Yeh padhkar..

Bahut Ache

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish Dost..!


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Re: ~Musafir ek ghar bana gaye apna~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2010, 04:14:09 PM »

Quote from: Rahi2001 on October 23, 2010, 01:49:27 PM

Bhai teh dil se shukriya..
Bas yaar zindagi ne jo dikhaya hai wohi likta hoon..
Meri nazmon main sab kuch shamil hai..aisa kuch nahin jo qaid rakhoun..
main toh likta hoon take dil halka hojaye..!
Shukriya mere dost..!


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