Mushkil safar....mann

by mann.mann on July 02, 2015, 11:55:19 AM
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Mushkil tha jo safar wo ab aasaan ho gaya.
Paon ke chhale fod die tera ehsaan ho gaya.

Khushiyan kharidne ki koshish main ye paya,
Neelam mere  ghar ka  har  saamaan  ho gaya.

Dil todkar  sikhaya  duniyan ne  ek sabak,
Chot  khana  mere  liye ahsaan  ho  gaya.

Kahta tha  zindgi  bhi mere  sath guzarega,
Mujhe apni gali mai dekh pareshan ho gaya.

Ek bar tujhse  milkar  puchhenge ye  sawal,
Tu kaise  achanak  yen  beimaan  ho gaya.

Usko laga ke gham ke toofan main bah gaye,
Mahfil main  hame dekh  ke hairaan ho gaya.

Is ghar pe tha mera haq usse bhi kahin jyada,
Aaye  yahan to  paya "mann"  mehmaan ho gaya.


Mann
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2015, 01:11:26 PM »
kyaa kahne waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2015, 02:50:28 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on July 02, 2015, 11:55:19 AM
Mushkil tha jo safar wo ab aasaan ho gaya.
Paon ke chhale fod die tera ehsaan ho gaya.

Khushiyan kharidne ki koshish main ye paya,
Neelam mere  ghar ka  har  saamaan  ho gaya.

Dil todkar  sikhaya  duniyan ne  ek sabak,
Chot  khana  mere  liye ahsaan  ho  gaya.

Kahta tha  zindgi  bhi mere  sath guzarega,
Mujhe apni gali mai dekh pareshan ho gaya.

Ek bar tujhse  milkar  puchhenge ye  sawal,
Tu kaise  achanak  yen  beimaan  ho gaya.

Usko laga ke gham ke toofan main bah gaye,
Mahfil main  hame dekh  ke hairaan ho gaya.

Is ghar pe tha mera haq usse bhi kahin jyada,
Aaye  yahan to  paya "mann"  mehmaan ho gaya.


Mann

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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2015, 06:33:09 PM »
Nice one dear mann
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2015, 09:55:09 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2015, 03:07:56 AM »
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Awesome..loved the part "Mehmaan ho gaya!"
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2015, 04:42:50 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saini sahab......
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2015, 04:43:29 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khamoshji.....
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2015, 09:28:09 AM »
Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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uuuuffff kyaa kehne Mann ji, jaadu bhar diyaa aapke lafzon ne, ek ek shabd mein jaadu bharaa ehsas hai, aur ehsaas ke to kyaa kehne, aapki behtareen rachnaaon mein se ek hai yeh, ek baar padhaa, do baar padhaa, aur fir baar baar padhaa, aur aapki yeh rachnaa hamaare dil mein ghar kar gayi, ek RAU to bantaa hi hai to maine de diyaa hai aapko, RAU bahut chhoti si cheez hai aapke is khoobsoorat peshkash ke liye....!!!

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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2015, 10:15:54 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saahillji.....
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2015, 10:49:21 AM »
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behad umda peshkash dherooooo,n daaaaaaaddddddd
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2015, 11:17:27 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya surindarnji.....
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2015, 03:55:33 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya vineryji....
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2015, 05:03:25 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on July 02, 2015, 11:55:19 AM
Mushkil tha jo safar wo ab aasaan ho gaya.
Paon ke chhale fod die tera ehsaan ho gaya.

Khushiyan kharidne ki koshish main ye paya,
Neelam mere  ghar ka  har  saamaan  ho gaya.

Dil todkar  sikhaya  duniyan ne  ek sabak,
Chot  khana  mere  liye ahsaan  ho  gaya.

Kahta tha  zindgi  bhi mere  sath guzarega,
Mujhe apni gali mai dekh pareshan ho gaya.

Ek bar tujhse  milkar  puchhenge ye  sawal,
Tu kaise  achanak  yen  beimaan  ho gaya.

Usko laga ke gham ke toofan main bah gaye,
Mahfil main  hame dekh  ke hairaan ho gaya.

Is ghar pe tha mera haq usse bhi kahin jyada,
Aaye  yahan to  paya "mann"  mehmaan ho gaya.


Mann

Waaaaaah waaaaah bahut khoob kaha aur achchhi tarah baandhne ki koshish keejiye jis se nahmageen paida ho kalaam men..... hamari janib se mubaarak baad qubool farmaayen ..... Raqeeb
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