- Muskura Nahin Rahe -

by Meena is back on March 19, 2007, 02:19:33 PM
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Roja
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«Reply #15 on: March 21, 2007, 03:33:11 PM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
ek nayi koshish...

Lab pe hasi hai par dil se hum muskura nahin rahe,
Ankhon me samundar hai jisse hum baha nahin rahe,

Kahi kahaniyan, kahi dard dabaye hai is dil me humne,
Hogaye purane woh afsane jine hum suna nahin rahe,

Door se dekhoge hume, to kush dikhayi denge hum,
Par mile hai apno se aise zakhm jine hum dikha nahin rahe,

Rah-e-zindagi ko chahiye aab sirf maut ki gaud "Meena",
Zinda lash hai hum phir bhi log hume jala nahin rahe!



Very very touchy Meena ji.. Nice reading you..
Esp. following lines too good... keep up...
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Kahi kahaniyan, kahi dard dabaye hai is dil me hamne
Hogaye purane woh afsane jine hum suna nahin rahe,
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"Roja" tum jalthi rahi shamma ki tarah,
Woh bhi tadapta raha mere intezar main..
Wohi milan, mili judayee hai,
Her din tadapthi rahi unke pyar main..!![/color]
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Meena is back
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«Reply #16 on: March 28, 2007, 12:35:04 PM »
shukriya roja ji Usual Smile nice one!!

manjoor tha hume tadapna unki judai me,
par jee nahin payenge hum ki hui bewafai me,
aab to bas maut ko bulate hai har roz "Meena",
aba der na hogi is rooh ki vidai me!
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: March 28, 2007, 12:44:53 PM »
Kya baat hai Meena,

Har dil main tooti deewrain nazar aati hain
Kyun har aankh main aansuon ki jhadi hai
Mohhabaton par se yaqeen uth sa chala
Bewafai ki aag kyun har dil main lagi hai
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Meena is back
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«Reply #18 on: March 28, 2007, 12:49:12 PM »
wah bohot khoob!!!

vishwas ke daage jab toote hai,
tab hi deewaren uthti hai,
jisse apni zindagi samajhte hai hum,
uski bahon me bhi dadkane gutti hai!
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Talat
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«Reply #19 on: March 28, 2007, 12:54:15 PM »
Hum ho gaye ruswa jinki mohabbat main aaj
Wo khade hain mehfil main muskura rahe hain
Ghum phir bhi na hota jo baat hoti yahi khatm
Wo zamane ke sang teer-e-tanz chala rahe hain !!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #20 on: March 29, 2007, 12:24:39 PM »
mind blowing talat kuddiye!!!!!

kar rahe hai woh aaj hume badnam gali gali,
jiske liya kabhi lad pade the woh zamane se,
kabhi humari dukh me dukhi hone wala humdard,
aaj laga hai humari himmat aur mihabbat azmane me!
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: March 29, 2007, 10:43:24 PM »
Thank You Meenu Usual Smile Good one

Humnawa dekhe hain humne badalte hue
Zamane ke rivaaj se aaj hum wakhif hue
Dost mila karte the jo, jaan lutaane waale
Dekha unhi ko haath main khanjar liye hue !!
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«Reply #22 on: March 30, 2007, 06:26:44 PM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
ek nayi koshish...

Lab pe hasi hai par dil se hum muskura nahin rahe,
Ankhon me samundar hai jisse hum baha nahin rahe,

Kahi kahaniyan, kahi dard dabaye hai is dil me humne,
Hogaye purane woh afsane jine hum suna nahin rahe,

Door se dekhoge hume, to kush dikhayi denge hum,
Par mile hai apno se aise zakhm jine hum dikha nahin rahe,

Rah-e-zindagi ko chahiye aab sirf maut ki gaud "Meena",
Zinda lash hai hum phir bhi log hume jala nahin rahe!



wahhh kya baat hai sis....zinda laash hain fir bhi log hamein jala nahi rahe...bohat ache.TalaT aapne bhi bohat acha likha hai...

"Ek kahani banke reh gaya hai wo afsaana mera,
     na jaane kahan chod k aayi hun wo nazrana mera,
     jahan nas-nas me meri mohabbat raha karti thi,
     kabhi in nazron se hi muskuraahat chalka karti thi,
     kyon aaj ye lab muskura nahi rahe,main nahi janti,
     kuch bhi mehsoos kar nahi rahe,kya ban gai zindgi,
     pathar dil banke reh gayi hun,haal kuch yun hai mera,
     na raaton ki khabar hai,na ab meri zindgi me savera,
     chaah bohat kuch rahi hun par kar nahi paa rahi,
     kaun si wo raah hai,jise main dhoond nahi paa rahi."
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Jiya
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«Reply #23 on: March 31, 2007, 06:20:53 AM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
ek nayi koshish...

Lab pe hasi hai par dil se hum muskura nahin rahe,
Ankhon me samundar hai jisse hum baha nahin rahe,

Kahi kahaniyan, kahi dard dabaye hai is dil me humne,
Hogaye purane woh afsane jine hum suna nahin rahe,

Door se dekhoge hume, to kush dikhayi denge hum,
Par mile hai apno se aise zakhm jine hum dikha nahin rahe,

Rah-e-zindagi ko chahiye aab sirf maut ki gaud "Meena",
Zinda lash hai hum phir bhi log hume jala nahin rahe!


wah meena ji bohot hi khub likha hai aapne,daad haazir hai.
kaafi geherai se apne ehesaas likhe hain aapne
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #24 on: April 04, 2007, 09:45:48 AM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
ek nayi koshish...

Lab pe hasi hai par dil se hum muskura nahin rahe,
Ankhon me samundar hai jisse hum baha nahin rahe,

Kahi kahaniyan, kahi dard dabaye hai is dil me humne,
Hogaye purane woh afsane jine hum suna nahin rahe,

Door se dekhoge hume, to kush dikhayi denge hum,
Par mile hai apno se aise zakhm jine hum dikha nahin rahe,

Rah-e-zindagi ko chahiye aab sirf maut ki gaud "Meena",
Zinda lash hai hum phir bhi log hume jala nahin rahe!



waah Meena -Ji mind blowing ....  as usual .... bahut der baad aapki poem pe reply dene ke liye hum muafi chahte hain ... actually .....  baad mud'dat ke iss mehfil mein aana hua ...... zindgi ki uljano mein thoda ulje rhe aur kucch karne ka mouka nhi mila ..... khiar yeh sab to chalta hi rhega ...  aap ki tehreer bahut pasand aayi .... kucch hamari taraf se bhi!!


Samjate hai tere jazbatoon ko 'e mere humkadam
Afsoos, tere ansoon apni ankhon se bha nahin sakte

Yeh to majboriyon ne rok diye panv hamare, warna
kiski kasam hai humko ke tere paas aa nahin sakte

Milne ko to aur kya kya na mila hai humko phir bhi
Ranj yhi hai kismat se apna ke tumko pa nahin sakte

Kyunkar na uthegi lash hamari tere janaze ke sath
Tere bina ik saans bhi iss jism mein laa nahin sakte !!

HumTum
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Pooja
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«Reply #25 on: April 04, 2007, 08:11:50 PM »
wowowow bahoot khoob Meena and Humtum ji.... hamesha ki tarah lajawab...

bahoot khuishi hui apko mehfil mai wapis dekh kar!!!
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paani
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«Reply #26 on: April 05, 2007, 05:21:39 AM »
Gr8 Meena. niraj n all u guys..
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Meena is back
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«Reply #27 on: August 29, 2007, 11:15:10 AM »
nice talat, nidhi!!

thanx Jiya!!!
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«Reply #28 on: August 29, 2007, 11:16:59 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum is back"

waah Meena -Ji mind blowing ....  as usual .... bahut der baad aapki poem pe reply dene ke liye hum muafi chahte hain ... actually .....  baad mud'dat ke iss mehfil mein aana hua ...... zindgi ki uljano mein thoda ulje rhe aur kucch karne ka mouka nhi mila ..... khiar yeh sab to chalta hi rhega ...  aap ki tehreer bahut pasand aayi .... kucch hamari taraf se bhi!!


Samjate hai tere jazbatoon ko 'e mere humkadam
Afsoos, tere ansoon apni ankhon se bha nahin sakte

Yeh to majboriyon ne rok diye panv hamare, warna
kiski kasam hai humko ke tere paas aa nahin sakte

Milne ko to aur kya kya na mila hai humko phir bhi
Ranj yhi hai kismat se apna ke tumko pa nahin sakte

Kyunkar na uthegi lash hamari tere janaze ke sath
Tere bina ik saans bhi iss jism mein laa nahin sakte !!

HumTum


chalo der se hi sahi par likha to hai na...shukriya janab...apne bhi bohot khoob likha hai!!!
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