MUTHI MEIN BHAR KAR DHOOL, HAWA MEIN UCHAAL DI......

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«Reply #30 on: October 06, 2008, 07:51:04 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on October 06, 2008, 05:37:17 AM
BAHUT KHOOB,UMADA AUR LAJAWAAB
KALAM PESH KIYA AAPNE KHAWAISH JI,
REALLY 2 NICE,
BY. K.SHAEL

HAMNE UNHE PAANE KI ZIDD APNE JEHAN SE
NIKAL DI,WO JO BADAL GAYE HAI KISI AUR
KE LIYE TO HAMNE BHI BADAL JAANE KI THAAN
LI, KAB SAK SEHTE RAHE HAM BEWAFAI KE GAMM
KO AAJ HAMNE BHI HASNE MUSKURANE KE ANDAAJ
ME BAAT KI...


Thankyou so Much Shally..

aapne bhi khoob kaha.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #31 on: October 06, 2008, 07:52:38 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on October 06, 2008, 06:08:24 AM
Yeh duniyaa hai, jisey jannat sey aagey, ham badhhaayengey!
Mitaa kar dooriyaan saaree, sabhi nazdeek aayengey!
Na mazahab beech mein aayegaa, hongey dost sab insaan;
Ham aisaa kaarwaan-e-ishq choutarfah chalaayengey!!
                                        - abd bundeli


Bahut Bahut khoob abdbundeli saheb.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #32 on: October 06, 2008, 07:54:46 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 06, 2008, 06:48:55 AM
bohut khoob khwaahish ji Applause
and nice lines abd ji


Thankyou So Much Bhawna..
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«Reply #33 on: October 06, 2008, 08:00:39 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on October 06, 2008, 06:58:56 AM
A wonderful creation Khwaish.....Bohot Khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Again a very good one Khwaish  Applause Applause Applause




Apka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Celmira..

Aapne padha aur saraha Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. notworthy
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«Reply #34 on: October 06, 2008, 08:02:28 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on October 06, 2008, 07:57:59 AM
Applause Applause
bahut khoob khwaish ji



Baadal

Thankyou So Much Baadalji..
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«Reply #35 on: October 07, 2008, 05:29:53 AM »
barbaadiyon ka silsila ab tak chala hai
aankho k saamne mera ye jo qaatil khada hai
ye soch ham ab bhi dil ko samjha hi lete hain
shyd ye gam-e-daur ka aakhiri samma hai
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«Reply #36 on: October 07, 2008, 05:31:57 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on October 06, 2008, 07:52:38 PM
Bahut Bahut khoob abdbundeli saheb.. Applause Applause
khwaish ji!
        Thanks a lot!
                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #37 on: October 07, 2008, 08:33:17 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 07, 2008, 05:29:53 AM
barbaadiyon ka silsila ab tak chala hai
aankho k saamne mera ye jo qaatil khada hai
ye soch ham ab bhi dil ko samjha hi lete hain
shyd ye gam-e-daur ka aakhiri samma hai
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«Reply #38 on: October 07, 2008, 08:39:47 AM »
thnk  u ji
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«Reply #39 on: October 07, 2008, 08:57:28 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 07, 2008, 05:29:53 AM
barbaadiyon ka silsila ab tak chala hai
aankho k saamne mera ye jo qaatil khada hai
ye soch ham ab bhi dil ko samjha hi lete hain
shyd ye gam-e-daur ka aakhiri samma hai

Bahut Khoob Bhawna.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #40 on: October 31, 2008, 08:46:42 PM »
good work Khwaish ji, Abd ji and shally!!
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«Reply #41 on: November 01, 2008, 05:35:20 AM »
Pooja ji/khwaish ji wa sabhi adbee dosto!
Kindly accept my heart-felt thanks, and oblige!
                                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #42 on: April 27, 2009, 06:07:21 PM »
bahoot khoob lines kahi apne Abd ji!!!
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«Reply #43 on: April 28, 2009, 04:19:11 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 06:07:21 PM
bahoot khoob lines kahi apne Abd ji!!!
Thanks Pooja ji!
     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #44 on: April 28, 2009, 02:31:53 PM »
Rachna pasand aayee Khwaish Ji
Sunder.
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