MUTHI MEIN BHAR KAR DHOOL, HAWA MEIN UCHAAL DI......

by khwaish on October 04, 2008, 12:31:35 PM
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«Reply #45 on: April 28, 2009, 03:38:05 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on October 04, 2008, 12:31:35 PM
Duniya Ke Ek Fakir Ne Kuch Yuh Misaal di,
Muthi Mein Bhar Ke Dhool Hawa Mein Uchaal di

Woh Jo Dosti Ki Kasme Khaate Firthe The,
Aaj Mile To Aapas Mein,Haath Tak Na Mila Sake,
Shukar hai Uss Khuda Ka "KHWAISH"
Yeh Manzar Dekh kar, Tune is Dil Se,
Dosti Karne Ki Hasrat Hi Nikaal di....

Mere Yaar ne Mujhe Aazmaana Bhi Chaha To Kuch Iss Tarah,
Kal Mulaakat Hogi Kehkar Woh To Chal Diye,
Unhe Kya pata, Uss Pal Ke Intezaar mein,
Inn Aankhon Ne Raat Jaag Kar Guzaar di....

Na Puch Mujhse,Kya Mila Mujhe Meri Waffa Ka Sila!!!
Peeche Se Mere Peet Mein Kiya Uss Shaks Ne Waar,
Jisko Maine Zindagi Ke Iss Jung Mein,
Khud Apni Dhaal Di...

Log Puchte Rahe "KHWAISH",
'Bata Dost aur Dushman Mein Kya Fark Hai'??
Mere Jawaab Se Kisi Apne Ka Chehra Na Utar Jaaye,
Yehi Soch Kar Maine Bhi Woh Fakir Ki Misaal Di..

MUTHI MEIN BHAR KE DHOOL,HAWA MEIN UCHAAL DI....

Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hia khwaish ji,
the way you have formed your words. Yahan jab koi dilse likhne baithte hai to shabdon ke structure ko itna maayne nahi dete hai,
aur yehi chiz is poem ki khoobsurti ko badha deti hai.
Its really very very very sweet.

Always a pleasure to read you Khwaish Ji...
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«Reply #46 on: April 28, 2009, 03:40:38 PM »


Hawa ka rukh koi kaise badal sake is zamane mein,
mand mand hawa bhi aashiyaane ko choor kar deti hai,
isiliye mohabbat ka khel kabhi humne bhi khela tha,
ke dilonse khelnewale ko dillagi maar deti hai...
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«Reply #47 on: September 08, 2012, 06:38:52 AM »
zabardast janab khwaish ,,,,,bohutt ummda kalaam hai ..
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