n to aah meri sunaaee de .... (zarraa)

by zarraa on September 01, 2012, 03:01:50 PM
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n to aah meri sunaaee de n hi zakhm mera dikhaaee de
jo bhi mujh se milta hai aaj kal mujhe muskura ke badhaaee de

kabhi khid’kiyoN se hooN dekhta ki ye kis jageh meiN hooN reh raha
kabhi bastiyaaN haiN dikheiN mujhe kabhi dasht mujh ko dikhaaee de

tera naam le le ke log kya kareiN baat ye n mujhe pata
tera naam sun looN jo ik dafa mujhe aur kuchh n sunaaee de

ye alam jo hai tere hijr ka kahooN sach to itna n hai bura
ye najaat de har ummeed se ye har aarzoo se rihaaee de

teri be-wafaaee ke zakhm abhi dil-e-na-samajh meiN bhare naheeN
arey saNg-dil zara kar rehem tu wafa ki ab n duhaaee de

mere hum-safar bade shauq se mujhe deiN qafas ki muba’rakeiN
mera rehnuma saiyyaad ki bhi bade jatan se safaaee de

tujhe log duniya meiN jo mile tujhe sab se kitne rahe gile
to hai khush n kyun jo jahaaN ye ab tujhe lazzat-e-tanhaaee de

koi soorat ek to zeest ki to dikha de mujh ko kaheeN koi
jo naseeb meiN mere zar n de mujhe hausla-e-gadaaee de

koi ek ghar meiN hi de panaah koi ek dil meiN hi de jagaah
bhala kab ye “zarraa” ne tha kaha ke usey tu saaree khudaaee de

- ZARRAA

dasht = wilderness
alam = intense grief
hijr = separation
najaat = salvation
rihaaee = release
qafas = cage
rehnuma = guide
lazzat = taste / delight
gadaaee = beggary
zeest = life
zar = gold / wealth
khudaaee = world
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2012, 03:21:18 PM »
lajawab bemisal bahut hi khubsurat qalaam............ hazaro daad zaara sir

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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2012, 03:48:45 PM »
Quote from: zarraa on September 01, 2012, 03:01:50 PM
n to aah meri sunaaee de n hi zakhm mera dikhaaee de
jo bhi mujh se milta hai aaj kal mujhe muskura ke badhaaee de   Applause Ghazab ka matla kaha hai..waaaaaaaaaaaah

kabhi khid’kiyoN se hooN dekhta ki ye kis jageh meiN hooN reh raha
kabhi bastiyaaN haiN dikheiN mujhe kabhi dasht mujh ko dikhaaee de  Applause Applause Applause

tera naam le le ke log kya kareiN baat ye n mujhe pata
tera naam sun looN jo ik dafa mujhe aur kuchh n sunaaee de  Applause waaaaaaaaaah...kya baat hai...bahut khoob

ye alam jo hai tere hijr ka kahooN sach to itna n hai bura
ye najaat de har ummeed se ye har aarzoo se rihaaee de  Applause Applause Applause

teri be-wafaaee ke zakhm abhi dil-e-na-samajh meiN bhare naheeN
arey saNg-dil zara kar rehem tu wafa ki ab n duhaaee de  Applause wah wah shabda hi nahee mere paas

mere hum-safar bade shauq se mujhe deiN qafas ki muba’rakeiN
mera rehnuma saiyyaad ki bhi bade jatan se safaaee de  Applause Applause kya baat hai

tujhe log duniya meiN jo mile tujhe sab se kitne rahe gile
to hai khush n kyun jo jahaaN ye ab tujhe lazzat-e-tanhaaee de  Applause Applause Applause

koi soorat ek to zeest ki to dikha de mujh ko kaheeN koi
jo naseeb meiN mere zar n de mujhe hausla-e-gadaaee de  Applause Applause Applause

koi ek ghar meiN hi de panaah koi ek dil meiN hi de jagaah
bhala kab ye “zarraa” ne tha kaha ke usey tu saaree khudaaee de   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

- ZARRAA

dasht = wilderness
alam = intense grief
hijr = separation
najaat = salvation
rihaaee = release
qafas = cage
rehnuma = guide
lazzat = taste / delight
gadaaee = beggary
zeest = life
zar = gold / wealth
khudaaee = world




Bahut jabardast ghazal pesh kee hai.
kya ehsaas hain...gahraai bhare aashaar ...kya kahun..
laajavaab......
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2012, 04:13:44 PM »
Quote from: zarraa on September 01, 2012, 03:01:50 PM
n to aah meri sunaaee de n hi zakhm mera dikhaaee de
jo bhi mujh se milta hai aaj kal mujhe muskura ke badhaaee de

kabhi khid’kiyoN se hooN dekhta ki ye kis jageh meiN hooN reh raha
kabhi bastiyaaN haiN dikheiN mujhe kabhi dasht mujh ko dikhaaee de

tera naam le le ke log kya kareiN baat ye n mujhe pata
tera naam sun looN jo ik dafa mujhe aur kuchh n sunaaee de

ye alam jo hai tere hijr ka kahooN sach to itna n hai bura
ye najaat de har ummeed se ye har aarzoo se rihaaee de

teri be-wafaaee ke zakhm abhi dil-e-na-samajh meiN bhare naheeN
arey saNg-dil zara kar rehem tu wafa ki ab n duhaaee de

mere hum-safar bade shauq se mujhe deiN qafas ki muba’rakeiN
mera rehnuma saiyyaad ki bhi bade jatan se safaaee de

tujhe log duniya meiN jo mile tujhe sab se kitne rahe gile
to hai khush n kyun jo jahaaN ye ab tujhe lazzat-e-tanhaaee de

koi soorat ek to zeest ki to dikha de mujh ko kaheeN koi
jo naseeb meiN mere zar n de mujhe hausla-e-gadaaee de

koi ek ghar meiN hi de panaah koi ek dil meiN hi de jagaah
bhala kab ye “zarraa” ne tha kaha ke usey tu saaree khudaaee de

- ZARRAA

dasht = wilderness
alam = intense grief
hijr = separation
najaat = salvation
rihaaee = release
qafas = cage
rehnuma = guide
lazzat = taste / delight
gadaaee = beggary
zeest = life
zar = gold / wealth
khudaaee = world




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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2012, 08:44:11 PM »
wah wah bahut khoob... Usual Smile
Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2012, 08:45:05 PM »
Zarra Sahaab Aadaab!


Behad Khoob gazal kahi hai janab.... matle se lekar maqte
tak behad umdaa .... sabhi ashaar kabil e daad hai.. Usual Smile

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Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2012, 09:17:02 PM »
bahot bahot bahot khoob zarra ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2012, 12:26:01 AM »
bahut khoob Zarra ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2012, 08:11:57 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2012, 08:36:08 AM »
bahut acha likha hai zarraa jee
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2012, 09:42:30 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  laajawaab Zarraa ji.... kya taarif karun, kaise karun, mujhe shabd nahi mil rahe hain taarif ke liye... kuch bhi likhun kam hogaa... bas padhe jaa rahaa hoon aur jhoom rahaa hoon.. bahut khoobsurat ghazal.. ek ek shabd dil ko chhoti hui... sach me ek dhamaakedaar peshkash... aate rahiye likhte rahiye....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2012, 03:49:13 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Behtareen gazal. Padh kar aanand aaya. Shubhkamnayen.

-Arun Mishra.
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2012, 09:47:32 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2012, 01:08:12 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on September 01, 2012, 03:21:18 PM
lajawab bemisal bahut hi khubsurat qalaam............ hazaro daad zaara sir

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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2012, 01:10:04 PM »
Apne itne dil se taareef ki ... Apka ehsaanmand hoon


Quote from: mkv on September 01, 2012, 03:48:45 PM
Bahut jabardast ghazal pesh kee hai.
kya ehsaas hain...gahraai bhare aashaar ...kya kahun..
laajavaab......
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