Na Jaanu Main ....!!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: August 28, 2007, 06:57:29 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... last line too good!!!

Na jaane kab wo pal ayega
Jab dard rooh se juda ho jayega

Jee rahe hai kuch is tarah se tere bina
Jaise agle pal hi saans, zisam se juda ho jayega


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Talat

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Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #16 on: August 31, 2007, 01:13:25 PM »

Thank You Pooja....Very nice from you.


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SHONA

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Re: Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #17 on: August 31, 2007, 07:40:13 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Jaane kya hai dil ke andar jo chupke se toot raha hai
Ek meherbaan ka haath jaise hathon se chooth raha hai

Lamha lamha guzar ke dafan ho raha hai seene main
Seh kar ye dard kuch ajab maza aane laga hai jeene main

Jaane kis rehguzar pe humne qadam badhaaye hain
Jaana tha kis manzil par, kis aor nikal hum aaye hain

Ek khalish hai dil ko ghere, ek ajab si khaamoshi chaayi hai
In chubhti tanhaaiyon main aaj yaad teri bohot aayi hai !!

WOW..Beautiful talat..with lots of emotions..too good =D> =D>


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rajrishi

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Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #18 on: September 01, 2007, 02:23:43 PM »

Once again good work Talat. nicest one

Na jane kyon woh dil mein halchal macha gaya,

hasti huyi aankhon ko rona sikha gaya,

Bhul gayi aankein palkon ko jhapkana bhi,

Intezar mein woh inko pathar bana gaya.


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Pooja

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Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #19 on: September 01, 2007, 03:34:16 PM »

Good one Rjrishi


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Talat

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Re: Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #20 on: January 30, 2008, 02:19:09 PM »

Quote from: rajrishi on September 01, 2007, 02:23:43 PM

Bohot khoob Rajrishi !


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deepika_divya

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Re: Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #21 on: February 27, 2010, 09:53:51 AM »

Too good Rajshri, and Pooja di !


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shabbir143

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Re: Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #22 on: February 27, 2010, 10:50:58 AM »

Wah Wah Celmira Ji Kya Khub Likha Hai Aapne.
Kaskar Last Wali Line Bahut Achhi Lagi Hume...

Good Job Ji...

Aur Baaki Sabne Bhi Khub Rang Jamaya Hai


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #23 on: February 27, 2010, 05:55:14 PM »

BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB DR.SAHIBAA...BEHTREEN KALAAM Clapping Smiley


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madhuwesh

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Re: Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #24 on: February 27, 2010, 07:57:28 PM »

Wah wah Celmira ji.baahut khoobsurt aur dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.great work.Pooja ji.shikka ji.Sophi ji.Nidhi ji,Angle ji,Rajshiri ji,Ankur ji.bahut baddiya likha aap sabhi ne. Hats off to you!


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Re: Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #25 on: March 21, 2010, 09:41:09 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on April 02, 2007, 04:43:32 PM

Jaane kya hai dil ke andar jo chupke se toot raha hai
Ek meherbaan ka haath jaise hathon se chooth raha hai

Lamha lamha guzar ke dafan ho raha hai seene main
Seh kar ye dard kuch ajab maza aane laga hai jeene main

Jaane kis rehguzar pe humne qadam badhaaye hain
Jaana tha kis manzil par, kis aor nikal hum aaye hain

Ek khalish hai dil ko ghere, ek ajab khaamoshi chaayi hai
In chubhti tanhaaiyon main aaj yaad teri bohot aayi hai !!

Wah Wah Celmira Ji Kya Kehne.

Chun Chun Ke Aapne Lafzon Ko Jorha Hai
Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Kaise Tareef Karun.
Bas Aapka Har Ashaar Dil Mein Utar Gaya.
Bahut Hi Khub Ji..... Applause


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DhavalRami

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Re: Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

«Reply #26 on: March 23, 2010, 05:05:02 AM »

talat jee:

Aadaab!

kaise hai.n aap?

bazm meiN aapki koShish deKhi.. dard bhare ehsaasoN ko ba-Khoobee peSh kiyaa hai apnee teHreer meiN.. aise hi liKhate raheN.. Khudaa se duaa hay aapko DheroN saari KhuShiyaaN ataa kareN!

dil se daad..! Allaah haafiz

aapka

~ Dhaval


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