*Na Manjur Tha*

by Roja on October 09, 2007, 11:34:27 PM
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Na manjur tha is dil ko uska dikhna
To is nacheez ne usse dekhna chod diya
Magar na manjur tha in aankhon ko uska na dikhna
To in aankhon ne kwaabon main dekhna shuru ker diya
Fir bhi na manjur tha dil ko uska kwabon main dikhna
To is nacheez ne raaton main sona chod diya

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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2007, 05:57:23 AM »
This small one is nice and creative.
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2007, 07:37:44 AM »
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Wah ! kya likha hai =D>

Very deep thoughts !
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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2007, 01:34:14 PM »
good one Roja
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2007, 07:04:11 PM »
Few lines...so deep !! =D>
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2007, 01:16:38 PM »
Thanks for reading Mr Ricky.., Raj ji, Rajrishi ji and Talat sis
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2007, 04:21:39 AM »
bahut khub RoJa
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2007, 11:43:45 AM »
Goods lines dear ...
Keep it up ...


Pehle bhi kaha neend aati thi hame,
Akele mein raat bhi bada rulati thi hame,
Unke paas hote hue bhi raahat na thi hame,
Aur phir to unki yaad bhi satati thi hame ...
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2007, 07:54:59 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB ROJA...

UNKI HAR KHWAISH KO HAQEEQAT
KA CHEHRA DENE KE LIYE
HUM KHUD KO LUTATE CHALE GAYE...

AUR USNE BHI KHOOB WAFA KA SILA DIYA
WOH BHI HUMEIN AAKHRI DAM TAK
AAZMAATE CHALE GAYE..
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2007, 02:54:44 AM »
Goods lines dear ...
Keep it up ...


Pehle bhi kaha neend aati thi hame,
Akele mein raat bhi bada rulati thi hame,
Unke paas hote hue bhi raahat na thi hame,
Aur phir to unki yaad bhi satati thi hame ...

Thanks and nice lines JHL...

Bebasi zurm hai husla zurm hai
Zindagi teri ek-ek adaa zurm hai

Ayey sanam tere baray main kuch soch kar
Apne barey main kuch sochna zurm hai

Yaad rakhna tujhe mera ek zurm tha
Bhool janaa tujhe doosra zurm hai

Kyaa sitam hai ke tere haseen shehar main
Har taraf guar se dekhna zurm hai


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«Reply #10 on: December 16, 2007, 02:59:06 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB ROJA...

UNKI HAR KHWAISH KO HAQEEQAT
KA CHEHRA DENE KE LIYE
HUM KHUD KO LUTATE CHALE GAYE...

AUR USNE BHI KHOOB WAFA KA SILA DIYA
WOH BHI HUMEIN AAKHRI DAM TAK
AAZMAATE CHALE GAYE..

Very good lines Khwaish ji..


Bin tere dil ko samjaon kaisy?
Aana  Chahon tere pass to aaon kaisy?
Meri her saans amanat hai teri yadoon ki
Toot ke is se zyada tujhe chahon kaisy?...!!!

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«Reply #11 on: December 16, 2007, 06:32:52 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB ROJA...

UNKI HAR KHWAISH KO HAQEEQAT
KA CHEHRA DENE KE LIYE
HUM KHUD KO LUTATE CHALE GAYE...

AUR USNE BHI KHOOB WAFA KA SILA DIYA
WOH BHI HUMEIN AAKHRI DAM TAK
AAZMAATE CHALE GAYE..

Very good lines Khwaish ji..


Bin tere dil ko samjaon kaisy?
Aana  Chahon tere pass to aaon kaisy?
Meri her saans amanat hai teri yadoon ki
Toot ke is se zyada tujhe chahon kaisy?...!!!



BAHUT KHOOB ROJA
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«Reply #12 on: December 16, 2007, 08:49:41 PM »
Bohat khoob Roja & Khwaish...
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Roja
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2007, 05:31:04 PM »
Thanks Aryaan ji
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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2007, 06:25:49 PM »
very nice
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