Na tu meri thi aur na waqt mera tha

by klaskar on April 15, 2010, 08:14:24 PM
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tune chaha tha humein apne fursat k kuch lamhon me,
aur is gareeb k paas tab waqt k siwa aur kuch nahi tha,
aaj tu itni tez chal rahi hai zindagi ki daud me,
lagta hai tere dil me mere liye koi ehsaas nahi tha,

mere dil me to hamesha se tu hi rahi hai, aaj bhi hai,
par lagta hai mere liye tere dil ka kamra khaali nahi tha,
aaj jab pichhe mudke  dekhta hoon to dar lagta hai,
lagta hai ki na to tu meri thi aur na waqt mera tha...
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2010, 08:19:47 PM »
Wah wah kya baat hai Kapil ji.bahut khoob .lovely creation excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2010, 08:22:47 PM »
bahut khoob kapil ji specially last to lines..
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2010, 08:45:39 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 15, 2010, 08:19:47 PM
Wah wah kya baat hai Kapil ji.bahut khoob .lovely creation excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2010, 08:48:58 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...thanx a lot...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 15, 2010, 08:22:47 PM
bahut khoob kapil ji specially last to lines..
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2010, 08:50:37 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji... shuru k chaar line aapne pasand kar liye last k do Geet ji ne... bas bik gayi meri kavita , ya kahiye meri kavita safal ho gayi... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on April 15, 2010, 08:26:49 PM
Bahut Khub Klaskar Ji
Yeh Lines Badi Achhi Lagi Mujhey
Good Job...

Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2010, 10:38:52 PM »
Bhut ache kapil ji ........
Muze poem ke name se hi pata chal jata hai aap ki kavita hai ..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jo hai nahi tera usse bhool ja
Naam bi na le uska , bus usse bhool ja
Agar parva nhi usse iss jindgi ki daud main
Tu b apna rasta badal Aur usse bhool ja
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2010, 06:03:59 AM »
Wah kya baat hai           Klaskar ji.......

Apni fursat ke lamhon mein tune mujhko istemal kiya
aur meh samjh baitha ki tune mujhse pyar kiya
mujhe laga waqt aur tu dono mujhpar meherban hai
meh naadan tujhko apna dil de baitha tha
teri judai ne samjhaya tera diya hua dhokha tha
sach to yeh hai na tu meri thi na waqt mera tha...
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2010, 08:18:09 AM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 15, 2010, 08:14:24 PM
tune chaha tha humein apne fursat k kuch lamhon me,
aur is gareeb k paas tab waqt k siwa aur kuch nahi tha,
aaj tu itni tez chal rahi hai zindagi ki daud me,
lagta hai tere dil me mere liye koi ehsaas nahi tha,

mere dil me to hamesha se tu hi rahi hai, aaj bhi hai,
par lagta hai mere liye tere dil ka kamra khaali nahi tha,
aaj jab pichhe mudke  dekhta hoon to dar lagta hai,
lagta hai ki na to tu meri thi aur na waqt mera tha...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Klaskarji..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2010, 02:20:43 PM »
Aap ki duwaein rahengi to sab hoga. Shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on April 15, 2010, 08:55:27 PM
Janab Yeh To Aapka Khulush Aur Saf Dili Hai
Jo Aap Is Qadar Hume Izzat Baksh Rahen Hain.
Khair...
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Izzat Afzaai Ke Liye
Aap Yun Hi Meehfil ki Raunaq Afzaai Karte Rahen.


Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2010, 02:27:44 PM »
yahi hota hai jahaan feelings ek dusre se milti hain... bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...

bhoolna chahta hoon main usey,
par shayad bhulana asaan na hoga,
meri har yaad se judi hai wo,
un yaadon ko mitana asaan na hoga...

Quote from: neelgold on April 15, 2010, 10:38:52 PM
Bhut ache kapil ji ........
Muze poem ke name se hi pata chal jata hai aap ki kavita hai ..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jo hai nahi tera usse bhool ja
Naam bi na le uska , bus usse bhool ja
Agar parva nhi usse iss jindgi ki daud main
Tu b apna rasta badal Aur usse bhool ja
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«Reply #11 on: April 16, 2010, 02:29:09 PM »
Shukriya Cara ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: cara on April 16, 2010, 06:03:59 AM
Wah kya baat hai           Klaskar ji.......

Apni fursat ke lamhon mein tune mujhko istemal kiya
aur meh samjh baitha ki tune mujhse pyar kiya
mujhe laga waqt aur tu dono mujhpar meherban hai
meh naadan tujhko apna dil de baitha tha
teri judai ne samjhaya tera diya hua dhokha tha
sach to yeh hai na tu meri thi na waqt mera tha...
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«Reply #12 on: April 16, 2010, 02:30:58 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji..!!!

Quote from: khwaish on April 16, 2010, 08:18:09 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Klaskarji..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: April 16, 2010, 11:27:50 PM »
Jo nahi asan tum voh bi kar sakte ho
Dil se laga ke to jiye ho aab taak
Usse bhula ke b jee sakte ho

Fir ek naye subh hogi , ek nya sawara hoga
Fir tere iss dil main ek naya basera hoga

Quote from: klaskar on April 16, 2010, 02:27:44 PM
yahi hota hai jahaan feelings ek dusre se milti hain... bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...

bhoolna chahta hoon main usey,
par shayad bhulana asaan na hoga,
meri har yaad se judi hai wo,
un yaadon ko mitana asaan na hoga...
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«Reply #14 on: April 17, 2010, 07:58:11 AM »
Bahut khoob Klaskar Ji
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