NAAM EK YAAD RAKHNA MERA

by baadal102 on August 31, 2008, 04:17:12 PM
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Na jaa mare gum pe, tu khus reh sada,
Mile sirf mujhe tera pyar ye dua hai sada,

Aaj doobi hai dard main har baat mari,
Har labz dooba hai ashq main mera,

Tanha na samaj mujhe tare bina,
Iss nazar main hai sirf tu hi tu sada,

Maana aaj nahi hai wo purane din,
Basa lakin sirf tu hi hai dil main mare,

Na ojhaal hona dunia ki bheed main,
Sada bas naam ek yaad rakhna mera,

Tuffa bahut milenge tujhe raah main,
Har kadam jara sambhal ke rakhna,

Akele kabhi ho jao kisi baat pe,
To bas naam KHUDA ka late rehna,

Laut aayenge wo purani sab baate ek din,
Bas yaad main hume apni hamesha basye rakhna,

Bas yaad main hume apni hamesha basye rakhna..........








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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2008, 04:47:01 AM »
 happy3 bohut khoob baadal ji

par kisi ne comment kyu nahi dia  icon_scratch
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2008, 05:01:51 AM »
bahoot khoob badal.....
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2008, 06:17:28 AM »
Itihaas ek baar fir apne ko dohrayega,
Wo beeta lamha jaroor wapis aayega,

Dikha denge jamane ko, ki pyar kya hai,
Ye parwana apni shama ko saja ke jaayega........





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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2008, 08:35:19 AM »
khamosh hoon mein par khush hoon ye na samjho tum
kis tarah mein bhi jee rahi hoon bas ye samjho tum

jis tarah basa rakha hai tune mujhko apni dhadkan mein
us tarah mere har gam mei shaamil ho ab tak tum

khamosh si nigaahein tujhse keh rahi hai suno
mujhko ab mujhi se chura le jaao tum

bohut thak gayi hoon mein kisi apne ki talaash mei
samaa kar mujhkar khud mei mri har talaash khatm kar do tum
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baadal102
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2008, 03:52:48 PM »
khamosh hoon mein par khush hoon ye na samjho tum
kis tarah mein bhi jee rahi hoon bas ye samjho tum

jis tarah basa rakha hai tune mujhko apni dhadkan mein
us tarah mere har gam mei shaamil ho ab tak tum

khamosh si nigaahein tujhse keh rahi hai suno
mujhko ab mujhi se chura le jaao tum

bohut thak gayi hoon mein kisi apne ki talaash mei
samaa kar mujhkar khud mei mri har talaash khatm kar do tum


bahut hi aachi lines likhe hai
bhawna ji  Applause




Baadal
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2008, 07:00:53 PM »
Very Nice Baadal & Bhawna...
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k.shael
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2008, 11:17:27 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI
BAADAL JI,
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2008, 11:45:22 AM »
 Applause Wah Wah baadal ji aap toh khoob likha hai nice lines ... Thumbs UP


Wah bawana sis khoob likha hai aapne ... Applause




Yeh pyaar ka silsila katam nahi hoga
Joh dil mein pyaar hai woh kum na hoga
Kyun tadap rahe ho unke pyaar ke intezaar mein
Kadam kadam pe kaante milenge us par se guzarna hoga
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Kanta
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2008, 04:47:56 PM »
Akele kabhi ho jao kisi baat pe
To bas naam KHUDA ka late rehna

kiya sundar bat kahi he baadal, tumahra poetry pasand aya bahot
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2008, 02:56:00 AM »
Nice one Baadal ji, and nice replies all..
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2008, 03:20:32 PM »
thanx a lot
aryan ji, shael ji, kanta ji
honey rose ji, angel ji





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