naam ko mere tumhari hi nazar kar jata -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

sakhi1909

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«Reply #15 on: April 16, 2007, 05:11:46 AM »

Quote from: "harashmahajan"

Quote from: "Pooja"

WAH TOO GOOD HARSH JI... bahoot hi acha likha hai apne......

Pooja ji maine kutchh nahi likha hai...Sakhi ji ki kalam ka udhaar use chukaya hai...meri kalam toh khud-b-khud hi chal padi thi.....bahoot achha likha hai usne....

Apno se abhi talak jo paya hai wahi shabdoN maiN dhala hai
khud hi andaza kareiN kis simt andera our kis simt ujhala hai

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harsh ji

shukriya
ismein apka bhi hak banta hai apne bhaut khub likha hai reply mein really dil ko chho gya ha.

apki kalam ne dard ko samjha aur chal padi.

dard ko samjhke kuch likhna apne aap mein tareef ke hakdaar bane ho aap.

yuhi sath dena

sakhi


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harashmahajan

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naam ko mere tumhari hi nazar kar jata

«Reply #16 on: April 16, 2007, 12:11:21 PM »

Quote from: "sakhi1909"

Quote from: "harashmahajan"

Quote from: "Pooja"

WAH TOO GOOD HARSH JI... bahoot hi acha likha hai apne......

Sakhi ji Ek baar phir shukriya...aapke dil ko chhoo gaya our dil maiN utra hameiN achha mehsoos hua.....aap isi tarah likhti rahengi...toh shayad isi tarah aap jawaab paati rahengi....hum toh basachhe ahsaas ke kader daan haiN...jo dil ko chhoo jaye usi ko kalm se utaarne ki koshish bhar kar lete haiN.....

Harash


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sakhi1909

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naam ko mere tumhari hi nazar kar jata

«Reply #17 on: April 22, 2007, 07:59:53 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

pard kar likhne ka hunar jo apne paya hai
humne bhi ussi hunar ko sarahya hai

wah pooja ji
bahut khub apne saraha hai

sakhi


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sakhi1909

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naam ko mere tumhari hi nazar kar jata

«Reply #18 on: April 22, 2007, 08:06:45 PM »

Quote from: "Ricky"

very good.. Nice writings.

thnx ricky ji

h r u?

sakhi


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sakhi1909

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naam ko mere tumhari hi nazar kar jata

«Reply #19 on: April 22, 2007, 08:30:05 PM »

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"

Lajawab Sakhi...and Harsh ji.....!!

shukriya badnaam :lol:

sakhi with....smile


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sakhi1909

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naam ko mere tumhari hi nazar kar jata

«Reply #20 on: April 22, 2007, 09:18:40 PM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Sakhi

Wah! Bahut khoob =D>

Harash ji bahut achcha jawab aap ne diya hai.

Pooja aur Gaurav ka shayad dimag kaam nahi kar raha :evil:

rajveer ji

bahut bahut shukriya apko pasand aaya ye ...

sakhi


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Re: naam ko mere tumhari hi nazar kar jata

«Reply #21 on: April 22, 2007, 09:26:03 PM »

Quote from: "harashmahajan"

Bahoot bahoot shukriya sakhi ji...aapki kavita maiN itna karun ras tha ke usne khud b khud meri kalam se jawaab maang liya..tumeh maloom hihai...Dard kis kader khoon ki tarah meri kalam se nikalta hai...anyways...bahootkhoob likha hai aapne...us Ghazal ke baad is kavita maiN aapne apni poori jaanphoonk daalihai...bahoot khoob dost....
God bless you always

harash

shukriya harash ji

ye to janti hun mein ki apki pakd dard par kamal hai...aur apka likha khub hota hai manti bhi hun ...

apna khyaal rakhiye aur khush rahiye

sakhi


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naam ko mere tumhari hi nazar kar jata

«Reply #22 on: April 22, 2007, 09:32:13 PM »

Quote from: "harashmahajan"

Quote from: "sakhi1909"

Quote from: "harashmahajan"

Quote from: "Pooja"

WAH TOO GOOD HARSH JI... bahoot hi acha likha hai apne......

harsh ji

apko to pata hai mein kaise likhti hun jab dil karta hai tabhi..
kabhi koshish nahi karti likhun bas jab khud dil kahta hai likho tab likhti hun..
haan aap kadar karte ho ache ahsaas ki ye badi baat hai.

koshihs karte rahenge

sakhi


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